Editing User talk:Jasou (section)

==Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo==

First off, great thanks for taking your time to edit my yet-to-be-confirmed translations. Your edits are liberable in a sense that affects the meaning (seriously). I think BeginnerXP had already explained to you so I'll go directly into the problems.

* the only response he could give was... - I think using the collocation "give a response" is redundant as you can give the same meaning with the verb 'respond'. "Sorata could only respond to these hungry mouths with the growling sounds of his tummy."

* the muscles in my leg? - I've never heard of that in my Biology lesson. =p Leg muscles...yep. Moreover, "Every time" is redundant when there is "always".

* live collectively - It's not wrong but it doesn't feel right. You'd normally say "We live together." rather than "We live collectively."

* crucial point - doesn't explain a two-way road (dilemma); I'm preferring division point.

*find someone who will adopt it - same as "find someone to adopt it" to me; The latter has less words and hence better.

* he was still trying to recruit people who were willing to take the cats off his hands. - Well, this is a clear explanation. However, 'feeder' is actually a word that connects the story. And the focus isn't how he doesn't want the cats. It's his worry of no one to feed the cats once he doesn't feed them anymore. 

I would be glad to see your editing in the project. However, as I'm constricted by loads of school work, the project might be halted to a stop.  -- [[User:Pudding321|Pudding321]] - [[User_talk:Pudding321|Talk]] 05:58, 27 October 2012 (CDT)

Can I get the raws for Volume 1? I'm a new editor and would still like to see the original text to get a feel for how the writing should go. [[User:Khiral|Khiral]] ([[User talk:Khiral|talk]]) 11:33, 28 December 2012 (CST)

Thanks for the above. I eventually googled my way to the raws, so I will just download them on my own if I need them. [[User:Khiral|Khiral]] ([[User talk:Khiral|talk]]) 14:06, 28 December 2012 (CST)

I've answered to your request in my Talk page, just in case you haven't seen it. -[[User:Misogi|Misogi]] ([[User talk:Misogi|Talk]]) 13:40, 2 May 2013 (GMT+1)