Editing User talk:Dual Blades (section)

== Maou na Ore ==

Firstly, thanks for all that work correcting my mistakes. The thing is, about that sentence I wanted to correct, you've touched the part before the ellipsis, wich was mostly correct (it originally says "kanojo wo shirukoto no tame ni", lit. [her][to know][in order to]; though the verb "understand" is "wakaru" and the verb "help" is usually "tasuku", I think that the part about "understanding" is more correct in english, but the "help" part is not) and not the part after ("I feel I can’t miss any uneasiness"), which was the one I really wanted to correct.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 17:32, 25 March 2014 (CDT)

:[So keep the understanding part, get rid of the help?]<-That's correct. And see if you can check the other part.-[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 19:13, 25 March 2014 (CDT)

::No, it's more like "he can't overlook any feeling that something is amiss".--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 07:05, 26 March 2014 (CDT)

I don't even remember why did I took out the note with the original sentence so that some other translator could check the meaning. Maybe because I managed to at least make the second half have some sense and I forgot about the first half. For now, I've added a word for it to make sense and an annotation with the original text to check it.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 13:08, 10 April 2014 (CDT)

I didn't change it back again, since they mean the same, anyway, but, for future reference [http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/by_the_skin_of_one's_teeth it's an existing idiom (though it usually says '''teeth''', in plural)].--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 12:26, 11 April 2014 (CDT)

I put periods where there are in the original (well, sometimes when there is a period-(word or short expression)-comma and it sounds better in English as comma-(the same)-period, I change it, as well as most times when it's period-name-full stop, which ends as comma-neme-full stop). About the Land of the Ghouls, I don't know if it's its name or just a denomination.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 06:55, 4 May 2014 (CDT)

“if I live until I’m 80, there will be great rejoice”. This line sounds weird I think the last line would make more sense as that would be great.<- I went with that because I didn't find anything better suited. "That would be great" falls short. That would have been "banzai", but here he says "banbanzai", whi is even greater then that. I was trying to make a homage to Monty Python's and the Holy Grail there, but if you find a better suited wording that conveys a meaning of "very overly great", go with that.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:17, 16 May 2014 (CDT)
:I like how it ended. Thanks.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 11:17, 18 May 2014 (CDT)

About the "did'ja" thing: in this passage, she's flustered and speaking more rudely than usual (and usually she's very rude), that's why I originally put it like that. I you could add some extra "rudeness" to her sentences in the last part of this chapter, I'll be very thankful.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:52, 10 June 2014 (CDT)
:And I selected "nakedness" as a word there because both of them are saying "hadaka" (that means "naked", "nude", "uncovered" and "partially clothed", with no allusion whatsoever to "bodies") and I didn't know a word that would have fitted Meruru (that's why I went with "naked bodies" for her instead of "nudeness" or something like that).--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:56, 10 June 2014 (CDT)

It seems pointless and redundant, but I can't remove it, since that's what it says (or at least, what I think it says, since the wording is a bit obscure)--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:24, 15 June 2014 (CDT)

I wasn't "like", it was "lie". "Swallow down" is a literal translation; it would mean that the monster cells ate away at their bodies, like alien parasites. "The same that Iris went through hell due to the Black Tamers, the Black Tamers suffered due to the IMA" maybe would need a "way" between "same" and "that" (or at least with that you can deduce its meaning. Side note: these past downs of the side coupled with the fact that I hate Lance's guts ("I'm not used to long speeches" my [insert the worst swearing you know here]) have reflected a bit on my morale, but I'll try to start translating again by tomorrow (I want to finish the volume before July comes)---[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:00, 20 June 2014 (CDT)

It does not specify, it just says "makairyoukou", wich literally means "Netherworld trip". BTW I had put "window" in singular because I doubt Kanae entered through ALL OF THEM AT ONCE.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 17:38, 11 July 2014 (CDT)

"Was it for strongly thinking that the one image I vividly pictured in my mind broke out?" -> the nuance is that of a "maybe" question where he wonders if the reason why the image he was more than clearly picturing inside his head (the sword) got out (materialized). Still, I've added the original sentence as a comment so that anyone who can translate it gives his advice.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:25, 4 October 2014 (CDT)