Editing User talk:Kazeboy (section)

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v11c5 (chapter 103)

There's not much that I can say atm since I haven't really done any TLC except for a few words and sentences. For now I've only done editing but I'll do some more TLC when I have time since it's late. I'll just say that it seems pretty solid except for a few random capitalization, and typos. I noticed you switched between 'Rudy' and 'Rudi', and also, 'principle' is different from 'principal'; 'kinda' is a contraction of 'kind of' and is informal so make sure it's used accordingly to how formal the speech is, just a heads up. It's simple mistakes but make sure you know the differences. I set it as vice-principal Jinas instead of putting the vice-principal after his name since the 'vice-principal' is like a title, similar to mr. or ms. which are prefixes to a name.




After a few minutes, Sylphy calmed down and we re-start our shopping, though our conversation went off track.

　数分後。
　シルフィが落ち着いたので、買い物を再開した。
　少々話がズレてしまった。


You forgot 'a bit'(少々話) -> 'our conversation went a bit off-track'




Sylphy seems to be thinking that what she is saying is a selfish thing.
She thinks, she used my good will to gain something that normally would not be allowed(possible), and because of that she's become a convenient woman to me. Though there is no way that's true.

シルフィは自分では虫の良い事を言っていると思っているのかもしれない。
本来なら両立できない二つの事を、俺の好意で成立させてもらっている、と。
だから、俺に都合のいい女であろうとしてくれているのかもしれない。
そんな事はないんだが


My take:

Perhaps Sylphy is thinking that what she is saying is a selfish thing.
Properly speaking, the two things cannot coexist, but it became possible through my goodwill.
So she might be thinking that she's a convenient woman to me.
However, it's not like that at all.



This is what I think it translates to, but I may be wrong. The second sentence was the most confusing for me and it took me while to... decipher it. It might be because the words and particles aren't in the order that I'm used to. I think the 'two things' are referring to her job as a guard and her life with Rudeus, not sure. Other than the second sentence, I'm pretty confident in the other three.

[[User:Doomr|Doomr]] ([[User talk:Doomr|talk]]) 04:57, 9 August 2014 (CDT)