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My head felt heavy thanks to not having enough sleep, and I was still sleepy.
 
My head felt heavy thanks to not having enough sleep, and I was still sleepy.
   
However, before I could fall asleep, when I thought back about the confession Julie made--------the event last night that I kept thinking about over and over again. I didn’t feel like going back to sleep.
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However, before I could fall asleep, when I thought back about the confession Yurie made--------the event last night that I kept thinking about over and over again. I didn’t feel like going back to sleep.
   
   
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But, I would have never thought she was the same as me, someone who had their heart burnt from the flames of revenge.
 
But, I would have never thought she was the same as me, someone who had their heart burnt from the flames of revenge.
   
Inside the time carved by silence, although Julie soon said [Let’s go back] and headed back to the room-------even when I entered my bed after that, I could not fall asleep and in the end, I only fell asleep when the sky was starting to turn white.
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Inside the time carved by silence, although Yurie soon said [Let’s go back] and headed back to the room-------even when I entered my bed after that, I could not fall asleep and in the end, I only fell asleep when the sky was starting to turn white.
   
When I closed my eyes, Julie’s figure carved with a long scar floated inside my mind.
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When I closed my eyes, Yurie’s figure carved with a long scar floated inside my mind.
   
 
I have no idea what kind of circumstances had happened for her to be scarred like that. But------
 
I have no idea what kind of circumstances had happened for her to be scarred like that. But------
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(An, <<Avenger>> huh…………..)
 
(An, <<Avenger>> huh…………..)
   
Those sorrowful eyes Julie made when she said those words.
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Those sorrowful eyes Yurie made when she said those words.
   
 
(The same………..as me. Huh…………)
 
(The same………..as me. Huh…………)
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In an instant, I felt myself getting pale.
 
In an instant, I felt myself getting pale.
   
“Ju-Julie…………!! Thi-this, errr……….!!”
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“Ju-Yurie…………!! Thi-this, errr……….!!”
   
 
“By this you mean…………………?”
 
“By this you mean…………………?”
   
While asking that question, Julie followed my sights.
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While asking that question, Yurie followed my sights.
   
 
And further ahead of course, was my hand being pushed towards her own chest…………..
 
And further ahead of course, was my hand being pushed towards her own chest…………..
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“[……………]”
 
“[……………]”
   
Julie directed a perplexed expression towards me and I replied back with a stiff face-------
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Yurie directed a perplexed expression towards me and I replied back with a stiff face-------
   
 
“I-I want to move my hand so, could you relax the strength in your arms?”
 
“I-I want to move my hand so, could you relax the strength in your arms?”
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“------uh! Ja—…………”
 
“------uh! Ja—…………”
   
I urged Julie and she relaxed the strength in her arms.
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I urged Yurie and she relaxed the strength in her arms.
   
 
I hurried and pulled my hand away, and mid-way------
 
I hurried and pulled my hand away, and mid-way------
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“Hnnkunn…………!”
 
“Hnnkunn…………!”
   
Once again, Julie embraced her body while dragging my hand along.
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Once again, Yurie embraced her body while dragging my hand along.
   
Naturally, it caused my hand to fully feel Julie’s softness.
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Naturally, it caused my hand to fully feel Yurie’s softness.
   
“Julie, wait! My hand, my hand-----------------!!”
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“Yurie, wait! My hand, my hand-----------------!!”
   
   
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“Er-errr, Julie. Sorry about that………….”
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“Er-errr, Yurie. Sorry about that………….”
   
 
Around the time things finally calmed down, we were performing Seiza towards each other on top of the bed.
 
Around the time things finally calmed down, we were performing Seiza towards each other on top of the bed.
   
However, Julie’s sights were at her knees. And her cheeks were slightly blushing in sakura color.
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However, Yurie’s sights were at her knees. And her cheeks were slightly blushing in sakura color.
   
 
“……………”
 
“……………”
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“………………….”
 
“………………….”
   
Opposite to my panicking, Julie was once again silent.
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Opposite to my panicking, Yurie was once again silent.
   
 
Maybe just maybe------is this the end for me? Is it that so called social death?
 
Maybe just maybe------is this the end for me? Is it that so called social death?
   
“Ju-Julie…….?”
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“Ju-Yurie…….?”
   
 
“……………It wasn’t intentional right?”
 
“……………It wasn’t intentional right?”
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“Ja---. In the first place, the cause was me breaking our promise and crawling into your bed as I pleased.”
 
“Ja---. In the first place, the cause was me breaking our promise and crawling into your bed as I pleased.”
   
After saying that, Julie lowered her head.
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After saying that, Yurie lowered her head.
   
 
“Sorry to break our promise, Tooru.”
 
“Sorry to break our promise, Tooru.”
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“No, I don’t really mind but---------why were you sleeping here?”
 
“No, I don’t really mind but---------why were you sleeping here?”
   
The time I fell asleep was at dawn. Julie should have been sleeping on her bed until then.
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The time I fell asleep was at dawn. Yurie should have been sleeping on her bed until then.
   
Which meant, Julie crawled in after when I did that……….
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Which meant, Yurie crawled in after when I did that……….
   
 
“Because of '''that talk''', I remembered the past…………and felt lonely.”
 
“Because of '''that talk''', I remembered the past…………and felt lonely.”
   
Julie looked at me apologetically.
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Yurie looked at me apologetically.
   
 
“But, Tooru was already resting so, it was painful for me to wake you up…………..”
 
“But, Tooru was already resting so, it was painful for me to wake you up…………..”
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Although I was surprised, it can’t be helped because there was a reason, I thought that.
 
Although I was surprised, it can’t be helped because there was a reason, I thought that.
   
(Getting lonely from '''that talk'''……….which means, perhaps Julie’s father is------)
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(Getting lonely from '''that talk'''……….which means, perhaps Yurie’s father is------)
   
When I was thinking about the talk last night, it was immediately interrupted by Julie calling out to me.
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When I was thinking about the talk last night, it was immediately interrupted by Yurie calling out to me.
   
 
“By the way Tooru. Although it is in the morning, it is the time when we would usually be sleeping but, should we wake up like this?”
 
“By the way Tooru. Although it is in the morning, it is the time when we would usually be sleeping but, should we wake up like this?”
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“Ja---Me too.”
 
“Ja---Me too.”
   
She smiled and Julie got off the bed.
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She smiled and Yurie got off the bed.
   
 
Just like usual, she was probably going to change her clothes after taking a shower.
 
Just like usual, she was probably going to change her clothes after taking a shower.
   
“Ah…….Ju-Julie.”
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“Ah…….Ju-Yurie.”
   
 
“--------?”
 
“--------?”
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“………..Nai. I don’t mind it so let’s drop that topic.”
 
“………..Nai. I don’t mind it so let’s drop that topic.”
   
Although Julie made a small swing with her head while saying that, she looked a little bit embarrassed.
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Although Yurie made a small swing with her head while saying that, she looked a little bit embarrassed.
   
 
The Kouryou academy's cafeteria area was wide enough for any number of students to relax and thanks to that, there wasn’t really a fixed place to have a meal.
 
The Kouryou academy's cafeteria area was wide enough for any number of students to relax and thanks to that, there wasn’t really a fixed place to have a meal.
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And the partner to pass this time together with had become a normal event---------
 
And the partner to pass this time together with had become a normal event---------
   
“Go-good morning Tooru-kun, Julie-chan. You two are fast today………..”
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“Go-good morning Tooru-kun, Yurie-chan. You two are fast today………..”
   
 
A familiar voice was called out towards us when we were sitting side by side.
 
A familiar voice was called out towards us when we were sitting side by side.
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“-----?”
 
“-----?”
   
After slightly hesitating after directing her sights towards me and Julie respectively, Miyabi sat in front of Julie.
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After slightly hesitating after directing her sights towards me and Yurie respectively, Miyabi sat in front of Yurie.
   
 
(……………Perhaps, she was pondering about whether or not to sit in front of us?)
 
(……………Perhaps, she was pondering about whether or not to sit in front of us?)
   
Both opposite sides of me and Julie were empty and judging from the current Miyabi, the possibility for that to happen was probably high.
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Both opposite sides of me and Yurie were empty and judging from the current Miyabi, the possibility for that to happen was probably high.
   
 
Miyabi was brought up from an all girls school so she was bad with the opposite gender, but it had only been one month from today, after enrolling to the school, I would hear out her worries and after many events, we became close enough that we could call each other by our names.
 
Miyabi was brought up from an all girls school so she was bad with the opposite gender, but it had only been one month from today, after enrolling to the school, I would hear out her worries and after many events, we became close enough that we could call each other by our names.
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“Good morning, Tomoe.”
 
“Good morning, Tomoe.”
   
“Jaa. Good morning, Julie.”
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“Jaa. Good morning, Yurie.”
   
Gracefully moving her chopsticks until now, *chirin* after Julie lowered her head producing a bell sound, and Tachibana lowered her eyebrows and made a smile.
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Gracefully moving her chopsticks until now, *chirin* after Yurie lowered her head producing a bell sound, and Tachibana lowered her eyebrows and made a smile.
   
 
Looking at Tachibana’s face loosening up, I took a relieved breath inside my heart.
 
Looking at Tachibana’s face loosening up, I took a relieved breath inside my heart.
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“Uu…………..”
 
“Uu…………..”
   
“In the first place, you only eat meat. Just like I said from before, you should eat more vegetables. Learn from Julie and Miyabi.”
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“In the first place, you only eat meat. Just like I said from before, you should eat more vegetables. Learn from Yurie and Miyabi.”
   
When I looked over to both their trays, since she had a small body the amount Julie took was little, she had Japanese style salad, fried eggs, the main was grilled salmon and the combinations could be said to be a Japanese style breakfast. She also had half a bowl of rice.
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When I looked over to both their trays, since she had a small body the amount Yurie took was little, she had Japanese style salad, fried eggs, the main was grilled salmon and the combinations could be said to be a Japanese style breakfast. She also had half a bowl of rice.
   
 
It could be said to be quite a low consumption to pass the time until afternoon.
 
It could be said to be quite a low consumption to pass the time until afternoon.
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Tachibana swung her head vertically from Tora’s question.
 
Tachibana swung her head vertically from Tora’s question.
   
On that day, it was great we managed to break Tsukimi’s <<{{Furigana|Fang sword|Tebutje}}>> but, I suffered extreme fatigue while the wounds on Julie’s legs were serious, and thus both of us could not move.
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On that day, it was great we managed to break Tsukimi’s <<{{Furigana|Fang sword|Tebutje}}>> but, I suffered extreme fatigue while the wounds on Yurie’s legs were serious, and thus both of us could not move.
   
 
Then, Tachibana and Miyaba contacted the academy side after looking at our state, and performed emergency treatment on all the injured people including Tora and the rest.
 
Then, Tachibana and Miyaba contacted the academy side after looking at our state, and performed emergency treatment on all the injured people including Tora and the rest.
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“Why are you shocked, Tooru?”
 
“Why are you shocked, Tooru?”
   
Julie tilted her head and *Chirin* a bell sound was produced.
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Yurie tilted her head and *Chirin* a bell sound was produced.
   
 
“Nooo, that’s because Tora is lowering his head towards someone.”
 
“Nooo, that’s because Tora is lowering his head towards someone.”
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“…………….Tooru, Tora. Fighting is bad.”
 
“…………….Tooru, Tora. Fighting is bad.”
   
“*Giggle* *Giggle*, it’s alright Julie-chan, this isn’t a fight.”
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“*Giggle* *Giggle*, it’s alright Yurie-chan, this isn’t a fight.”
   
Miyabi made a small giggle from our small quarrel, and nodded towards Julie [Is that so?] question.
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Miyabi made a small giggle from our small quarrel, and nodded towards Yurie [Is that so?] question.
   
However, Julie tilted her head because she could not understand at all and *chirin* the bell shook.
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However, Yurie tilted her head because she could not understand at all and *chirin* the bell shook.
   
“Oh yeah! You said you would lower your head when you really want to show your gratitude right. Then, you were saved by me and Julie during that time, so I’ll have you show that gratitude of yours.”
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“Oh yeah! You said you would lower your head when you really want to show your gratitude right. Then, you were saved by me and Yurie during that time, so I’ll have you show that gratitude of yours.”
   
 
“Uuu………Gugu, Th-that’s…………kuh, i-it certainly is unpleasant…………”
 
“Uuu………Gugu, Th-that’s…………kuh, i-it certainly is unpleasant…………”
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Damn it, he noticed.
 
Damn it, he noticed.
   
“That’s why we don’t owe each other anything. You get it! However, you will show your gratitude to Julie!”
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“That’s why we don’t owe each other anything. You get it! However, you will show your gratitude to Yurie!”
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Fuun* Tora made a rough snort and turned his back towards us.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Fuun* Tora made a rough snort and turned his back towards us.
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“Tooru. Let’s sit down too.”
 
“Tooru. Let’s sit down too.”
   
Although I went to sit on my seat when I was urged by Julie, there was question that popped up at that moment.
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Although I went to sit on my seat when I was urged by Yurie, there was question that popped up at that moment.
   
 
“Wait a sec? It’s okay for the class to start but, what about our homeroom teacher?”
 
“Wait a sec? It’s okay for the class to start but, what about our homeroom teacher?”
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“-------Uh!!”
 
“-------Uh!!”
   
The moment we saw the rabbit ears coming into the classroom after the chime ended, me-------Julie, Tachibana, Miyabi, Tora and Tatsu stood up.
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The moment we saw the rabbit ears coming into the classroom after the chime ended, me-------Yurie, Tachibana, Miyabi, Tora and Tatsu stood up.
   
 
Each of us placed our hands on our own chest, and the instant we were about to say the <<Word that carries strength>>-------
 
Each of us placed our hands on our own chest, and the instant we were about to say the <<Word that carries strength>>-------
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“--------With that said, just like what I explained beforehand, the <<Duo>>’s with good results will be able to receive the <<Sublimation Ceremony>> as a special prize on Saturday. Errrr, the ones who will take it are--------”
 
“--------With that said, just like what I explained beforehand, the <<Duo>>’s with good results will be able to receive the <<Sublimation Ceremony>> as a special prize on Saturday. Errrr, the ones who will take it are--------”
   
The ones Tsukimi said were me & Julie, Tachibana & Miyabi, Tora & Tatsu, and 2 other <<Duo>> groups.
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The ones Tsukimi said were me & Yurie, Tachibana & Miyabi, Tora & Tatsu, and 2 other <<Duo>> groups.
   
 
According to that, it seemed the standard of 3 wins and above was the condition to receive the special prize.
 
According to that, it seemed the standard of 3 wins and above was the condition to receive the special prize.
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My head was in chaos.
 
My head was in chaos.
   
I did not have to say the reason; it was about the reason as to why was Tsukimi still our homeroom teacher, and why did Mikuni-sensei------the academy side approved it.
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I did not have to say the reason, it was regarding about the reason on why was Tsukimi still our homeroom teacher, and why does Mikuni-sensei------the academy side approved it.
   
 
But, during the time I was thinking inside my head, the HR was still continuing.
 
But, during the time I was thinking inside my head, the HR was still continuing.
   
After that, we were told about the classes from now on, the interleague match with the 2nd year students, and that there would be a seaside school trip in July. Tsukimi then left the classroom from the chime signal and the class started after the general science teacher entered while she left.
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After that, we were told about the classes from now on, the interleague match with the 2nd year students, and there would be a seaside school trip on July, Tsukimi then left the classroom from the chime signal and the class started after the general science teacher entered while she left.
   
 
The questions regarding Tsukimi, everyone related to that incident felt bewildered.
 
The questions regarding Tsukimi, everyone related to that incident felt bewildered.
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Miyabi was beside her and Tora and Tatsu sitting in front of us turned around to look at me.
 
Miyabi was beside her and Tora and Tatsu sitting in front of us turned around to look at me.
   
Even for Julie who normally doesn’t move her expression much, she was bringing her eyebrows closer.
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Even for Yurie who normally doesn’t move her expression much, she was bringing her eyebrows closer.
   
 
“Let’s talk in the corridor. Someone might hear us here.”
 
“Let’s talk in the corridor. Someone might hear us here.”
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At that moment, Miyabi was the first one to open her mouth to break the somewhat heavy atmosphere.
 
At that moment, Miyabi was the first one to open her mouth to break the somewhat heavy atmosphere.
   
“E-eerr…….Tsukimi-sensei was trying to kill Julie-chan and Tooru-kun right?”
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“E-eerr…….Tsukimi-sensei was trying to kill Yurie-chan and Tooru-kun right?”
   
 
“Ja---. If not for Tooru, by now I would be………….”
 
“Ja---. If not for Tooru, by now I would be………….”
   
“I could not do anything if I was alone. That plan succeeded because Julie was there.”
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“I could not do anything if I was alone. That plan succeeded because Yurie was there.”
   
I seriously thought that without being humble. Thanks to Julie stopping Tsukimi’s sword, a chance to slam {{Furigana|Thunder god’s strike|Mjolnir}} in was produced.
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I seriously thought that without being humble. Thanks to Yurie stopping Tsukimi’s sword, a chance to slam {{Furigana|Thunder god’s strike|Mjolnir}} in was produced.
   
[Nai. It was Tooru………….] [Nono, it was Julie…………….]
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[Nai. It was Tooru………….] [Nono, it was Yurie…………….]
   
 
“Stop it already. We should be talking about why that woman was once again in front of us first!”
 
“Stop it already. We should be talking about why that woman was once again in front of us first!”
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Both of them agreed to my opinion.
 
Both of them agreed to my opinion.
   
(However, to think something like her attacks were related to the country, I don’t know how much of that I could believe………….)
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(However, to think something like her attacks was related to the country, I don’t know how much of that I could believe………….)
   
   
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I made a wry smile following Miyabi.
 
I made a wry smile following Miyabi.
   
At that moment, Julie brought over the baggage’s in both of her hands respectively for Miyabi and me.
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At that moment, Yurie brought over the baggage’s in both of her hands respectively for Miyabi and me.
   
 
She then tilted her head when both of us were showing her a wry smile.
 
She then tilted her head when both of us were showing her a wry smile.
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The baggage I received transmitted the weight into my arms-------although I say that, I don’t feel the small number of 20 kilograms now that I am in my enhanced state.
 
The baggage I received transmitted the weight into my arms-------although I say that, I don’t feel the small number of 20 kilograms now that I am in my enhanced state.
   
I once again knew the amazingness of the <<Lucifer>> since the small bodied Julie could bring the baggage with a weight almost the same or even crossing her body weight when it was joined together with just some wobbling.
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I once again knew the amazingness of the <<Lucifer>> since the small bodied Yurie could bring the baggage with a weight almost the same or even crossing her body weight when it was joined together with just some wobbling.
   
 
What’s more, since this is said when we are still <<{{Furigana|I|Level}}>>, I can’t even imagine how much it would be at the end.
 
What’s more, since this is said when we are still <<{{Furigana|I|Level}}>>, I can’t even imagine how much it would be at the end.
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“Tooru, are you okay……..?”
 
“Tooru, are you okay……..?”
   
Julie came down from the upper level bed and directed her {{Furigana|red eyes|Ruby eyes}} towards me worriedly.
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Yurie came down from the upper level bed and directed her {{Furigana|red eyes|Ruby eyes}} towards me worriedly.
   
 
“……………Sorry.”
 
“……………Sorry.”
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“Where are you going?”
 
“Where are you going?”
   
After I washed my face in the washroom and changed into an attire that was easy to move in, Julie tilted her head while her face looked a little sleepy.
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After I washed my face in the washroom and changed into an attire that was easy to move in, Yurie tilted her head while her face looked a little sleepy.
   
 
“I am going to sweat for around 30 minutes. I feel like moving my body a little.”
 
“I am going to sweat for around 30 minutes. I feel like moving my body a little.”
   
After leaving an ''I understand'' from the nodding Julie, I left the room and headed towards the underground facility.
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After leaving an ''I understand'' from the nodding Yurie, I left the room and headed towards the underground facility.
   
Although it was still morning, there were only a few people inside the training room which can be used from 6am to 10pm.
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Although it was still morning, there were only a few numbers of people inside the training room which can be used from 6am to 10pm.
   
 
I exchanged a simple greeting with one classmate and headed deeper inside.
 
I exchanged a simple greeting with one classmate and headed deeper inside.
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“Almost every day, I would be in the training room around this time.”
 
“Almost every day, I would be in the training room around this time.”
   
And after that ended, she would go around to other people’s rooms to wake them up.
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And after that ended, she would go around to other people’s room to wake them up.
   
 
She’s amazing, after honestly stating my opinion, I swung my head left and right.
 
She’s amazing, after honestly stating my opinion, I swung my head left and right.
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“What, it wasn’t much. I think it’s better to replace the wrap a few more times so, feel free to tell me when you want it.”
 
“What, it wasn’t much. I think it’s better to replace the wrap a few more times so, feel free to tell me when you want it.”
   
It’s true that it would finish quick and would look nicer compared to me doing it.
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It’s true that, it would finish quick and would look nicer compared to me doing it.
   
 
“The problem is taking notes will be a little tough with my hand like this.”
 
“The problem is taking notes will be a little tough with my hand like this.”
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She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.
 
She was probably very embarrassed about misunderstanding this as a dream, and it felt heartwarming seeing her swing both her hands quickly.
   
(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed to do that………….)
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(Pretend I didn’t hear that huh, I wonder how I am supposed do about that………….)
   
 
Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.
 
Miyabi regained her calm after a while and asked a question.
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“………..E-errr, Tooru-kun. Sorry about that time.”
 
“………..E-errr, Tooru-kun. Sorry about that time.”
   
It was about that time when she witnessed me hugging a fully nude Julie In the middle of GW.
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It was about that time when she witnessed me hugging a fully nude Yurie In the middle of GW.
   
 
Due to the much unexpected scenery (Me too) raising a panic, Miyabi used the <<{{Furigana|Chivalry lance|Lance}}>> and opened a big hole on the floor in my room (#Already repaired), this event was still fresh in my memories.
 
Due to the much unexpected scenery (Me too) raising a panic, Miyabi used the <<{{Furigana|Chivalry lance|Lance}}>> and opened a big hole on the floor in my room (#Already repaired), this event was still fresh in my memories.
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“B-but……….”
 
“B-but……….”
   
“No buts. I can’t remain calm when I get apologized to all the time, and more importantly it is only natural to misunderstand that situation.”
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“No buts. I can’t remain calm when I get apologized too all the time, and more importantly, it is only natural to misunderstand that situation.”
   
 
“…………………It’s a misunderstanding right?”
 
“…………………It’s a misunderstanding right?”
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“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
“Li-like I said, you aren’t in that type of relationship with Julie-chan……..t-to do those type of things right?”
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“Li-like I said, you aren’t in that type of relationship with Yurie-chan……..t-to do those type of things right?”
   
 
Towards that question she asked while her cheeks blushing, I also blushed while swinging my head and replying it’s wrong.
 
Towards that question she asked while her cheeks blushing, I also blushed while swinging my head and replying it’s wrong.
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She places her hands on her knees and repeatedly breathed heavily.
 
She places her hands on her knees and repeatedly breathed heavily.
   
That was a normal aftermath scenery of the finish of someone running, but the unusual one was Miyabi’s………..err, those.
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That was a normal aftermath scenery of someone running finish but, the unusual one was Miyabi’s………..err, those.
   
They were swaying in a manner as if they were following gravity; it made one think as if melons were inserted inside her chest.
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It was swaying in a manner as if it was following gravity, it made one think as if melons were inserted inside her chest.
   
Each time Miyabi breathed and her shoulders would go up and down, ''they'' would jiggle and-------
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Each time Miyabi breathed and her shoulders would go up and down, ''it'' would jiggle and-------
   
 
(…………..Wait, what the hell kind of eyes am I giving Miyabi when she did her best in running!?)
 
(…………..Wait, what the hell kind of eyes am I giving Miyabi when she did her best in running!?)
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The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.
 
The light from the morning sun reached the descending helicopter.
   
The sun reflected something and a golden-hair color shined.
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The sun reflected something and a golden-haired color shined.
   
 
For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.
 
For some reason, I could not release my eyes from that shine.

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