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However, Julie’s concentration had remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.
 
However, Julie’s concentration had remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.
   
The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also targeted immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.
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The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also aimed immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.
   
 
“------!!”
 
“------!!”
   
She pushed down her skirt in a panic and looked towards her <<Duo>>-----Tooru.
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She pushed down her skirt in panic and looked towards her <<Duo>>-----Tooru.
   
The boy was making a stern expression towards the darkness----the direction the attack had come from----and was not concerned about Julie.
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The boy was making a stern expression towards the darkness----the direction the attack came from----and was not concerned about Julie.
   
 
(It is safe, right…….?)
 
(It is safe, right…….?)
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It was only for an instant and what’s more the surroundings were dark------but since the lights were still on, she could not determine whether he saw her or not.
 
It was only for an instant and what’s more the surroundings were dark------but since the lights were still on, she could not determine whether he saw her or not.
   
But she had no time to indirectly confirm this with Tooru.
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But, she had no time to indirectly confirm this with Tooru.
   
 
“Julie, turn off the light!! It will be targeted!!”
 
“Julie, turn off the light!! It will be targeted!!”

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