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Not far outside the East town gate, there is a forest that is encumbered by many forest spirits and monsters, which is part of why a small town like Sellion went and built a magic academy in the first place. A small way inside the forest's edge, there stands a wooden house. In this cabin, there lives a boy with black hair and equally black irises. The boy's name is Kamito Toma, and he has been living there by himself since both his parents passed away, 9 years ago.''
 
Not far outside the East town gate, there is a forest that is encumbered by many forest spirits and monsters, which is part of why a small town like Sellion went and built a magic academy in the first place. A small way inside the forest's edge, there stands a wooden house. In this cabin, there lives a boy with black hair and equally black irises. The boy's name is Kamito Toma, and he has been living there by himself since both his parents passed away, 9 years ago.''
   
The boy slowly opened his eyes to look out the window and see if it's already morning. Confirming it was, he rose slowly from bed and sauntered outside to the vegetable patch to pick some vegetables, went to the river near the house to catch a few fish and prepared them for breakfast and school lunch.
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The boy slowly opened his eyes to look out of the window and see if it's already morning, as he rose slowly from bed and sauntered outside to the vegetable patch to pick some vegetables, went to the river near the house to catch a few fish and prepared them for breakfast and school lunch.
   
 
After finishing preparations to get ready for school, The boy left home. The boy has to leave the house earlier than most other students, because the school is located on the west side of town, the opposite of where he lives. This is a everyday routine for me, walking from my house into town in the morning. The eastern side of town has a market which is often very busy in the morning, filled with people buying and selling their goods.
 
After finishing preparations to get ready for school, The boy left home. The boy has to leave the house earlier than most other students, because the school is located on the west side of town, the opposite of where he lives. This is a everyday routine for me, walking from my house into town in the morning. The eastern side of town has a market which is often very busy in the morning, filled with people buying and selling their goods.
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"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."
 
"Ok, see you, be careful on your way."
   
"Haiiii......"
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"Haiii......"
   
 
After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.
 
After saying goodbye to Uncle Tanin, I continue on my way to school, by walking inside the crowd of people until I arrive in the center of the city. In the heart of the city, there is a round fountain in the middle of the square, which has the statue of the Goddess of Nature and Life "Nymphs", who is represented as a young, pretty girl.
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The people in this town believe that the goddess Nymphs blesses them with bountiful harvests and the lush forests that encircle the town, and because of this, Sellion is renowned as the City of Gardens that has been given blessings by the Goddess of Nature.
 
The people in this town believe that the goddess Nymphs blesses them with bountiful harvests and the lush forests that encircle the town, and because of this, Sellion is renowned as the City of Gardens that has been given blessings by the Goddess of Nature.
   
They say that this fountain was not only built as a token of gratitude by the people of this city towards the goddess, but also as a place for people to wish for a romantic partner in life. Although, I think that last part is just a rumor, one that has been spurred on by the students of Sellion Magic Academy.
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They say that this fountain was not only built as a token of gratitude by the people of this city towards the goddess, but also as a place for people to wish for a romantic partner in life. Although, I think that last part is just a rumor, one that has been spurred on by the students of Sellion magic academy.
   
 
From here, it does not take long to arrive at the school. By now, I start to see some of the students of Sellion academy walking to school with their friends, some of which have formed teams or partnerships with each other.
 
From here, it does not take long to arrive at the school. By now, I start to see some of the students of Sellion academy walking to school with their friends, some of which have formed teams or partnerships with each other.
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"Hooo!!!"
 
"Hooo!!!"
   
"Kyaaa!!!"
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"Kyaaa!!!!"
   
 
Not long after I arrived at the school gate I could hear the scream of students from Sellion academy, not only the girls but even the boys.
 
Not long after I arrived at the school gate I could hear the scream of students from Sellion academy, not only the girls but even the boys.
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"Hooo!!!"
 
"Hooo!!!"
   
"Kyaaa!!!"
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"Kyaaa!!!!"
   
 
Another big scream from the students brings me back from my daydreaming. As I look around, there is no path for me to walk into school, so I have to wait until the crowd dies down.
 
Another big scream from the students brings me back from my daydreaming. As I look around, there is no path for me to walk into school, so I have to wait until the crowd dies down.
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At the West side of Sellion there is a big mansion, this is the estate of the Lesage the rulers of Sellion. In one of the rooms, the light of the morning sun came in where someone is still fast asleep in the bed. In front of the bed there is a closet and on top of it there is a photo of a little boy and girl holding hands and smiling innocently.
 
At the West side of Sellion there is a big mansion, this is the estate of the Lesage the rulers of Sellion. In one of the rooms, the light of the morning sun came in where someone is still fast asleep in the bed. In front of the bed there is a closet and on top of it there is a photo of a little boy and girl holding hands and smiling innocently.
   
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"Shhhshhshhhh"
"Shhhshhshhh"
 
   
 
The sound of a person was heard beneath the blanket, there is a young beautiful girl, with her lavish lengthy pink hair and her half closed eyes which shined emerald as she woke from her pleasant slumber. If someone had seen her, her half asleep appearance would have made her look like a very cute innocent child; her name is Erina Lesage.
 
The sound of a person was heard beneath the blanket, there is a young beautiful girl, with her lavish lengthy pink hair and her half closed eyes which shined emerald as she woke from her pleasant slumber. If someone had seen her, her half asleep appearance would have made her look like a very cute innocent child; her name is Erina Lesage.
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"You're the first case we've ever encountered. You’re the first student who's magic capacity cannot increase by much, and the process by which your magic capacity goes up normally is very slow, almost as if your magic capacity refuses to grow. To be blunt, I don't believe you can grow as a magician much higher than this. All of us teachers feel that it would be impossible for you to pass the test."
 
"You're the first case we've ever encountered. You’re the first student who's magic capacity cannot increase by much, and the process by which your magic capacity goes up normally is very slow, almost as if your magic capacity refuses to grow. To be blunt, I don't believe you can grow as a magician much higher than this. All of us teachers feel that it would be impossible for you to pass the test."
   
He looked at me quite glumly. So they are going to kick me out after all, huh? Well I can't blame them, I probably won't pass this test. But still......... I would still like to try. However, as I was thinking that, he said something that surprised me.
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He looked at me quite glumly. So they are going to kick me out after all, huh? Well I can't blame them, I probably won't pass this test. But still.......... I would still like to try. However, as I was thinking that, he said something that surprised me.
   
 
"That's why all of us teachers decided to put you on the same team as the top student at our school. This will give you a small chance to pass the test, allowing you to graduate as a middle rank magician."
 
"That's why all of us teachers decided to put you on the same team as the top student at our school. This will give you a small chance to pass the test, allowing you to graduate as a middle rank magician."
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"I'm happy with your spirit, but as I've said, the things that we taught you in these 3 years have not had that much of a result. What can you do in only 2 weeks?"
 
"I'm happy with your spirit, but as I've said, the things that we taught you in these 3 years have not had that much of a result. What can you do in only 2 weeks?"
   
"Hmmm......... I'll do hellish training by myself!"
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"Hmmm.......... I'll do hellish training by myself!"
   
 
After thinking for a bit, I steeled my resolve and declared that. However, the teachers didn't look to convinced. After staring at me for several minutes, he pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed.
 
After thinking for a bit, I steeled my resolve and declared that. However, the teachers didn't look to convinced. After staring at me for several minutes, he pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed.
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I opened the door and exited the teacher's office. As soon as I closed it, I turned around and............
 
I opened the door and exited the teacher's office. As soon as I closed it, I turned around and............
   
BHAM
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*BHAM*
   
 
"Kyaa!"
 
"Kyaa!"
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"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."
 
"I don't have the position to speak with the princess."
   
She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control. She felt...... She felt..... What was it that she felt?
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She felt anger bubbling up inside her. Everyone had always avoided her because she was the princess, but him.......... he always made her feel like she was a normal child, it was probably the biggest reason she fell in love with him. But now.......... he was going to avoid her for the same reasons everybody else had? She couldn't help it, she lost control, the tears started pouring out of her eyes as she shouted at him.
   
 
"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"
 
"Why Toma!? It has been 6 years since we last spoke or met with each other! Why did you always avoid me for 6 whole years!? Do you even care about me anymore!?"
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"I'm such an idiot."
 
"I'm such an idiot."
   
I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.
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I whisper to myself, as I sat against this wall, allowing my tears to flow down my face. It's been a while since I cried like this. I thought my heart was already hard enough that I didn't feel this kind of intense pain anymore. Yet, somewhere deep down I was relieved I was still capable of feeling it.
   
 
After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.
 
After a while, I heard someone else heading to the door. Before the person could catch me there, I ran off and started heading home.
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I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.
 
I shake my head and begin to remember our time as children.
   
"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came we went our separate ways."
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"Those times were really fun. We played a lot together, but when afternoon came went our separate ways."
   
 
Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.
 
Even if I didn't know much about him then, I didn't care. He was always so kind to me, he always played whatever I wanted with me. However, as the years went by, he slowly started to spend less time with me. 6 years ago is when he finally stopped altogether. He stopped talking to me and whenever I would try to approach him he would start to avoid me.
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It's getting late, so I should get some sleep. Hopefully I have sweet dreams. Thinking that, I drift off into a deep peaceful slumber.
 
It's getting late, so I should get some sleep. Hopefully I have sweet dreams. Thinking that, I drift off into a deep peaceful slumber.
 
   
 
The rising sun and morning song of the birds caused me, Kamito Toma, to awaken.
 
The rising sun and morning song of the birds caused me, Kamito Toma, to awaken.
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She gasped. What he had just said hurt her more than he could have realized.
 
She gasped. What he had just said hurt her more than he could have realized.
   
"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!? Did I really mean so little to you!?"
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"How can you even say something like that! How could you just throw away a friendship like that!? Did it really mean so little to you!?"
   
He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart.
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He stayed silent, staring at the ground. Seeing that, she felt all kinds of intense emotions fighting in her heart. Due to these emotions, tears, once again, slowly rolled down her face.
   
 
"Do you hate me that much!?"
 
"Do you hate me that much!?"
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He grit his teeth at hearing that, anger instantly filling his heart. He lifted his head, looking her in the eyes.
 
He grit his teeth at hearing that, anger instantly filling his heart. He lifted his head, looking her in the eyes.
   
"Never say that again! I could never hate you, you were the only friend I had in this world!"
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"Never say that again! I could never hate you, you were my only friend I had in this world!"
   
Her eyes widened in surprise.
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Her mouth was wide open in surprise.
   
 
"Toma........"
 
"Toma........"
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".............."
 
".............."
   
He was silent once again.
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He was silent once again. His silence caused her to push harder with her question.
 
His silence caused her to push harder with her question.
 
   
 
"Why!?"
 
"Why!?"
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'No, I can't bring myself to say it.'
 
'No, I can't bring myself to say it.'
   
"I'm........ I'm sorry, but please just forget about me."
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"I'm sorry, but please just forget about me."
   
 
"What happened to you!?"
 
"What happened to you!?"
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Saying that, he turned around and started walking away. She held her hand out toward the fleeing image of the boy.
 
Saying that, he turned around and started walking away. She held her hand out toward the fleeing image of the boy.
   
"Toma.........."
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"Toma.........."
   
She whispered, but it was already to late. The boy was gone, leaving her alone on the rooftop. The boy was gone, Leaving her completely alone once again.
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She whispered, but it was already to late. The boy was gone, leaving her alone on the rooftop. Leaving her alone once again.
   
 
"Toma.........."
 
"Toma.........."
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As she fell to her knees, she whispered his name one last time.
 
As she fell to her knees, she whispered his name one last time.
   
Why was he acting so strange? Why wouldn't he tell her the truth? She decided that if he wouldn't tell her, she would find out herself. Resolving to figure out what was wrong and fix it, she started on her way home.
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Why was he acting so strange? Why wouldn't he tell her the truth? She decided that if he wouldn't tell her, she would find out herself. Resolving to figure out what was wrong and fixing it, she started on her way home.
   
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After Toma walk away from Erica Lesage, he now arrive at the town market that located at the eastern of the town where he will buy some of the thing that he need for sleeping outside, and other thing that can be use for camping in the wild.
   
After Toma walked away from Erica Lesage, he went to the town market located at the eastern end of town. He needed some things for sleeping outside as well as other camping equipment.
 
   
"So let's see, first I need a tent and a sleeping bag."
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"So let's see first I need a tent, and a sleeping bag."
   
With that in mind, I walked into a shop. It sold many things, from uses in daily life, to hunting and adventure equipment.
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With that in mind Toma than walk in to a shop which sell a lot of kind equipment, from thing that been use for daily life, to thing that is use for hunting and adventure.
   
 
"Excuse me."
 
"Excuse me."
   
"Yes, how may I help you?"
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"Yes how can I help you?"
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The shop keeper of the shop come and as is he stopped me from going in father in to his shop than he asks me.
   
The shopkeeper came and stopped me from entering further into the place. His face showed that he did not that appreciate me in his shop. Well, no matter where I go, I'll get this kind of treatment, except for Uncle's shop.
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Although his face shows that he is not that welcoming me in his shop. Well I know that it will be like this just as the same shop that a have went except for uncle Tanin shop.
   
"I need a sleeping bag and a 2 person tent."
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"I need a sleeping bag and a tent of size for 2 person."
   
After hearing my order the shopkeeper brought me the stuff as quickly as he could, he obviously didn't want me there any longer than I had to be. I paid for my stuff and left. As soon as I was out, I saw him sweeping where I had stood, like he saw me as something filthy.
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After hearing my order the shop keeper quickly bring me the thing that I order as if he want me to get out of his shop as quick as possible, and that I pay him the money than I walk out the shop, than after that I see the shop keeper swapping the place where I have walk and stand at, as if he see me as something dirty.
   
"Well, It shouldn't bother me now, it's been like this for years."
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"Well I should not have to bother about it now it has been like this for many years."
   
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As I thought about it, I walk away from the town and went back to my house to get some other thing that I will need for my training at my house.
I went back home to grab some other thing I'll need for my training. Once I arrived, I wasted no time in packing everything I needed. After I was done, I prepared myself for the 2 week long training. This is my last chance to improve. After strengthening my resolve, I headed out.
 
   
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After a while of time for me to finish packing some of the thing I need to bring, I than prepare myself to depart from my home for 2 week from today, it is the start of my training, and it is my last chance for me to
For my training, I was heading deep into the spirit forest, to the place I almost died at when I was a kid. If it wasn't for that magician passing by, I most likely would have died. But I have no choice, I have to get stronger, I have to make my dream come true.
 
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show some improvement in the test, after strengthening my will, I than done some quick checking once again of the thing that I bring, after I have conform that I have all the thing I need, than I on my way in to the deepest of the spirit forest for my training the place that once I was almost get kill by a monster if not for the magician, that just pass by and save my life from it I may have die at that moment.
   
 
===[[Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Prologue|Prev]] | [[Ancient Magic Arc|Ancient Magic Arc]] | [[Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Chapter 2|Next]]===
 
===[[Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Prologue|Prev]] | [[Ancient Magic Arc|Ancient Magic Arc]] | [[Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Chapter 2|Next]]===

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