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==Prologue==
 
==Prologue==
   
It was the memories of a distant day.
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It was the memories of distant day—
   
That no longer was an event which had drove to oblivion. However, it was an event elaborated in the days gone by indeed.
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That no longer an event which had drove to oblivion. However, it was an event elaborate in the bygone days indeed.
   
 
The boy, met the Makai Jutsushi.
 
The boy, met the Makai Jutsushi.
   
Stricken by despair, the boy was heartbroken. Before his despair stricken expression, there was a girl dressed in an all black outfit.
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Stricken by despair, the boy was heartbroken. Before that expression, there was a girl dressed in all black outfit.
   
 
"I am, a somewhat officious Makai Jutsushi!"
 
"I am, a somewhat officious Makai Jutsushi!"
   
With that mischief way of smiling, the face of the girl was very impressive. Considering it — that was probably the guy's love at first sight . At that time the girl's visage was burnt into the boy's mind with his eyes, never again to be forgotten.
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With that mischief way of smile the face of the girl was very impressive. Considering it — that was called the guy's love at first sight probably. At that time the girl's visage was burn into he boy's mind with his eyes, never again to be forgotten.
   
The girl swang her hand once, and from her fingertips light grew, then struck the fround.
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The girl swing her hand once then, light grew from her finger tip. The light strikes the ground,
   
 
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It was solidified to the shape of flower.
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as it was solidified to the shape of flower.
   
The girl spread her hands, myriad flower of light bloomed around the surrounding. The flowers emitted light brilliance like no other, it was seriously a fantastic scene of myriad petals whirled up in the wind.
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The girl spread her hands, myriad flower of light bloomed at the surrounding. The flowers emitted the light brilliance like no other, it was seriously a fantastic scene of myriad petals whirled up in the wind.
   
 
Was only by watching it, the boy forgot the sadness until now, and was fascinated by the mysterious power.
 
Was only by watching it, the boy forgot the sadness until now, and was fascinated by the mysterious power.

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