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Which means that there was no way we could register.
 
Which means that there was no way we could register.
 
 
"Un....Since we cannot contact Reki-san, we may cancel her name. But Kin-chan wants to do Butei work with her, right?"
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"Un....Since we cannot contact Reki-san, we may cancel her name. But Kin-chan wants to do Butei work with her right?"
 
 
 
Shirayuki said with upturned eyes, as if she shared the same misunderstanding as Aria.....
 
Shirayuki said with upturned eyes, as if she shared the same misunderstanding as Aria.....
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"She may launch a sneak attack on us. She will always be around us if we form a team."
 
"She may launch a sneak attack on us. She will always be around us if we form a team."
   
"She's not that type. Despite her appearances she's very prideful."
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"She's not that type. Despite all appearances she's very prideful."
   
 
Aria, whose own pride reached into the heights of space, looked behind her.
 
Aria, whose own pride reached into the heights of space, looked behind her.
   
"Anyway, if I do fall to a sneak attack, avenge me. That's an order. Carry it out well, okay?"
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"Anyway, if I do fall to a sneak attack, avenge me. That's an order. Carry it out well okay?"
   
 
"Me defeat Riko? That's a very serious matter. And strictly speaking, if you are going to order me why do you still need me to be leader?"
 
"Me defeat Riko? That's a very serious matter. And strictly speaking, if you are going to order me why do you still need me to be leader?"
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Ignoring Aria's voice from behind, I sprinted towards the air-con unit.
 
Ignoring Aria's voice from behind, I sprinted towards the air-con unit.
   
....That was...
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....That was
   
 
It doesn't merely look like it; it was a tail. Covered in silver fur, it was the tail of an animal.
 
It doesn't merely look like it; it was a tail. Covered in silver fur, it was the tail of an animal.
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Reki, who stood below my field of vision, no longer had a bandage wrapped around her brow. I was still worried about her other wounds but from the looks of it, she was alright. Her 4 kg [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dragunov_sniper_rifle Dragunov sniper rifle] was also carried on her shoulder in her usual manner.
 
Reki, who stood below my field of vision, no longer had a bandage wrapped around her brow. I was still worried about her other wounds but from the looks of it, she was alright. Her 4 kg [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dragunov_sniper_rifle Dragunov sniper rifle] was also carried on her shoulder in her usual manner.
   
"Reki-san! This is wonderful, you made it in time....! Everyone was searching really hard for you, yes? Where did you go? Really....."
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"Reki-san! This is wonderful, you made it in time....! Everyone was searching very hard for you yes? Where did you go? Really....."
   
 
Shirayuki, who was running over with Riko looked as if she was interrogating a younger child as she questioned Reki.
 
Shirayuki, who was running over with Riko looked as if she was interrogating a younger child as she questioned Reki.
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(Ah...so that's the case)
 
(Ah...so that's the case)
   
The moment I charged the phone that I bought a few days back, I was surprised by getting a mail from Mutou and Shiranui. It seems that Reki encountered the same situation. Generally speaking, when cell phones that are receiving messages are out of range or off, the message will be saved for a few days in the network center. And once it detects a signal again, the message will be sent anew. It's the same with new phones bought after the destruction of the previous one. It just requires the user to use the same number and not change his mail address. That's why Reki received Aria's message when she bought a new phone. A wry smile surfaced when I imagined the surrealism of Reki in an electronics shop but it's fortunate that Reki bought a new phone today. If it were tomorrow, it would be too late.
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The moment I charged the phone that I bought a few days back, I was surprised by mail from Mutou and Shiranui. It seems that Reki encountered the same situation. Generally speaking, when cell phones that are receiving messages are out of range or off, the message will be saved for a few days in the network center. And once it detects a signal again, the message will be sent anew. It's the same with new phones bought after the destruction of the previous one. It just requires the user to use the same number and not change his mail address. That's why Reki received Aria's message when she bought a new phone. A wry smile surfaced when I imagined the surrealism of Reki in an electronics shop but it's fortunate that Reki bought a new phone today. If it were tomorrow, it would be too late.
   
 
(In any case, Reki.....made it here. She would never hear the Wind again.)
 
(In any case, Reki.....made it here. She would never hear the Wind again.)
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Despite rushing over immediately, was silent.
 
Despite rushing over immediately, was silent.
   
What's....with this hesitation? The deadline of the Just is drawing near. Well, despite forming a team after you had a big fight, it's understandable there would be a strain in relations.
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What's....with this hesitance? The deadline of the Just is drawing near. Well, despite forming a team after you had a big fight, it's understandable there would be a strain in relations.
   
 
....Can't be helped. This is where I come in.
 
....Can't be helped. This is where I come in.
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Reki....nodded her head without a word.
 
Reki....nodded her head without a word.
   
"Well then, hurry up and say what you want to say, Aria. After that we hold hands like friends and go get our picture taken. During the battle when you were being attacked on both sides by the Koko's you were holding hands."
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"Well then, hurry up and say what you want to say, Aria. After that we hold hands like friends and go get our picture taken. During the battle when you were being attacked on both sides by the Kokos you were holding hands."
   
 
Recalling the turn above the Shinkansen, I pressed Aria on....
 
Recalling the turn above the Shinkansen, I pressed Aria on....
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"Speaking of which, did you know that even the battle positions were submitted by Aria on her own volition?"
 
"Speaking of which, did you know that even the battle positions were submitted by Aria on her own volition?"
 
 
Hearing my words, Reki raised her pretty face from her kneeling position and shook her head.
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Hearing my words, Reki raised her pretty face from her kneeling position and shook her head.
   
 
"The front is formed by Aria and me. Aria is the PM (point man), I'm the UL (Unit Leader).<ref>Point man and unit leader are based on the abbreviations PM and UL in the novel as well as the kanji.</ref> Support will be you and Shirayuki. Riko will make up the tail. When storming a target, Aria and I will suppress with handgun bullets while you two will provide medium and long ranged attacks. Riko will be on alert for any attacks from the back and in retreat; she'll act as the rearguard, hampering any pursuers."
 
"The front is formed by Aria and me. Aria is the PM (point man), I'm the UL (Unit Leader).<ref>Point man and unit leader are based on the abbreviations PM and UL in the novel as well as the kanji.</ref> Support will be you and Shirayuki. Riko will make up the tail. When storming a target, Aria and I will suppress with handgun bullets while you two will provide medium and long ranged attacks. Riko will be on alert for any attacks from the back and in retreat; she'll act as the rearguard, hampering any pursuers."
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I was unable to respond and turned to face the sea.
 
I was unable to respond and turned to face the sea.
   
"It's you who allowed feelings to take root in my heart. If I died I would be separated from you....from the one important to me. I don't want that."
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"It's you who allowed feelings to take root in heart. If I died I would be separated from you....from the one important to me. I don't want that."
   
 
The one important to her....she said it twice. And furthermore, they were both direct to my face. Reki sure is straight. Exactly like a sniper who fires straight and true at her target.
 
The one important to her....she said it twice. And furthermore, they were both direct to my face. Reki sure is straight. Exactly like a sniper who fires straight and true at her target.
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"But....I don't know what to do from here on."
 
"But....I don't know what to do from here on."
   
"If that's so, then just start looking from now on and it'll be fine. Just set yourself a target. And the school and team are there for that purpose."
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"If that's so, then just start looking from now and it'll be fine. Just set yourself a target. And the school and team are there for that purpose."
   
 
The S-ranked honors student, Reki hearing me, the E-ranked problem child with a reputation for being utterly useless say such vague things, looked as if she was.....slightly taken aback. She resembled someone listening to the warnings of elders.
 
The S-ranked honors student, Reki hearing me, the E-ranked problem child with a reputation for being utterly useless say such vague things, looked as if she was.....slightly taken aback. She resembled someone listening to the warnings of elders.

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