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Monsters and mutants roamed; it was a world with an unforgiving natural environment.
 
Monsters and mutants roamed; it was a world with an unforgiving natural environment.
   
Humanity remained on the land where they had descended. The island where the gods who controlled nature resided, ‘The Divine States’.
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Humanity remained on the land to which they had descended. The island on which the gods who controlled nature resided, ‘The Divine States’.
   
 
They were left unable to cross even the seas, let alone the skies.”
 
They were left unable to cross even the seas, let alone the skies.”
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As a solution, people copied the Divine States to a Different Space.
 
As a solution, people copied the Divine States to a Different Space.
   
They tried to solve the problem of limited land by making an experimental place, that would be different from Earth’s unforgiving environment.
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They tried to solve the problem of limited land by making an experimental place, which would be different from Earth’s unforgiving environment.
   
 
Because the condition of the Divine States was looked down upon by all the countries of this world, the descendants of these countries, with the exception of those from the Divine States decided to cross to the ‘Harmonic World’ in the Different Space.”
 
Because the condition of the Divine States was looked down upon by all the countries of this world, the descendants of these countries, with the exception of those from the Divine States decided to cross to the ‘Harmonic World’ in the Different Space.”
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It could be said that the Testament was a walkthrough to history.
 
It could be said that the Testament was a walkthrough to history.
   
Thus, this ‘Testament’ was created. The Seven Compositions and the Excerpt held within described the old age, that lasted till 0 AD, and the new age thereafter.”
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Thus, this ‘Testament’ was created. The Seven Compositions and the Excerpt held within described the old age, which lasted till 0 AD, and the new age thereafter.”
   
 
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