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……This time, I won’t be able to stay at {{furigana|Tenketsu Palace|Sophia}}.
 
……This time, I won’t be able to stay at {{furigana|Tenketsu Palace|Sophia}}.
   
A person who had fallen to the Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}} and was supposed to be dead was alive. Even though that was a serious affair in itself, if it was known that the Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}}’s mateki lay within him, it would cause a panic throughout the {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}}.
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A person who had fallen to the Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}} and was supposed to be dead was alive. Even though that was a serious affair in itself, if it was known that the Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}}’s mateki lay within him, it would cause a panic throughout the floating continent <Orbie Clar>.
   
 
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Pressing down on her off-gold hair that had become disheveled from running with one hand, the girl held her bag with the other.
 
Pressing down on her off-gold hair that had become disheveled from running with one hand, the girl held her bag with the other.
   
Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}}, just that would be enough to identify who she was.
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Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the floating continent <Orbie Clar>, just that would be enough to identify who she was.
   
 
“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on you for this journey!”
 
“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on you for this journey!”
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“Please mind it! D-disregarding me……this will affect onee-sama’s reputation!”
 
“Please mind it! D-disregarding me……this will affect onee-sama’s reputation!”
   
In response to the older sister who suddenly started combing her little sister’s hair, the {{furigana|little sister|I'sa}}’s face turned red and she raised her voice.
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In response to the older sister who suddenly started combing her little sister’s hair, the little sister <I’sa>’s face turned red and she raised her voice.
   
 
“P-putting that aside! Onee-sama is the Cadres Guard and you’re escorting a Priestess-sama this time, so conduct yourself as a model for these Cadet Guards!”
 
“P-putting that aside! Onee-sama is the Cadres Guard and you’re escorting a Priestess-sama this time, so conduct yourself as a model for these Cadet Guards!”

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