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The brown of the earth was outdone by the even stronger red of dusk.
 
The brown of the earth was outdone by the even stronger red of dusk.
   
The thin and long shadows of a grove of trees stretched endlessly. The ground was fanned up by the wind and the small pebbles underfoot rolled around with a dull clacking noise.
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The then and long shadows of a grove of trees stretched endlessly. The ground was fanned up by the wind and the small pebbles underfoot rolled around with a dull clacking noise.
   
 
That was, that kind of image of a wasteland───
 
That was, that kind of image of a wasteland───
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He had reddish brown messy hair and eyes which gave an affable impression. His age was thirteen or fourteen. As fitting of a teenage boy, his limbs gave off a somewhat slender feeling as he breathed out.
 
He had reddish brown messy hair and eyes which gave an affable impression. His age was thirteen or fourteen. As fitting of a teenage boy, his limbs gave off a somewhat slender feeling as he breathed out.
   
Upon the black formal wear draped upon him, there were little cuts all over the place. Beneath the formal wear, his T-shirt was also torn and something red was flowing from the bare skin peeking out from there.
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Upon the black formal wear draped upon him, there were little cut all over the place. Beneath the formal wear, his T-shirt was also torn and something red was flowing from the bare skin peeking out from there.
   
 
Feeling fatigue and his wounds, even then his vision was focused straight ahead───
 
Feeling fatigue and his wounds, even then his vision was focused straight ahead───
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She left behind a slight, truly slight smile.
 
She left behind a slight, truly slight smile.
   
“I’m fine with being an {{furigana|Elite Guard|right now}}. I have no interest in being a Sennenshi.” <ref>[T/N: "Elite Guard" has "right now" (いま/今) over it as the furigana.]</ref>
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“I’m fine with being an Elite Guard <right now>. I have no interest in being a Sennenshi.” <ref>[T/N: "Elite Guard" has "right now" (いま/今) over it as the furigana.]</ref>
   
 
“……Why?”
 
“……Why?”
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“'''Well then, boy, will you ask forcefully?'''
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“Well then, boy, will you ask forcefully?”
   
 
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But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.
 
But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.
   
After a month. The boy fell from the {{furigana|floating continent|Orbie Clar}} to the far below Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}}.
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After a month. The boy fell from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the far below Garden of {{furigana|Corrupted Song|Eden}}.
   
 
And Ishtar───
 
And Ishtar───
   
 
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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