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I finally stepped inside the city of Kagushila while passing the Anzuu {{furigana| Daimon | Great Gate }} , which had brick build reliefs of a weird bird with a lion’s head on both sides.
 
I finally stepped inside the city of Kagushila while passing the Anzuu {{furigana| Daimon | Great Gate }} , which had brick build reliefs of a weird bird with a lion’s head on both sides.
   
“Golden-haired Kenny, Are you alright?”
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“Blonde Kenie. Are you alright?”
   
 
“Like hell I’ll die that easily. Hey, have you seen the others?”
 
“Like hell I’ll die that easily. Hey, have you seen the others?”
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Down at his feet were leather shoes that looked like boots. Normally it was usual to go with sandals or just barefooted but stepping into the ruins without protection was dangerous. In other words, it was the usual familiar get-up for when one was about to enter Babylon.
 
Down at his feet were leather shoes that looked like boots. Normally it was usual to go with sandals or just barefooted but stepping into the ruins without protection was dangerous. In other words, it was the usual familiar get-up for when one was about to enter Babylon.
   
“Nn, was just about to go look for you guys.”
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“Mhm-hmm, was just about to go look for you guys.”
   
 
“Sorry. We somehow managed to return on our own. Made you guys prepare for nothing.”
 
“Sorry. We somehow managed to return on our own. Made you guys prepare for nothing.”
   
“Nn. That’s okay. It’s good enough that you’re safe.”
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“Mhm-hmm. That’s okay. It’s good enough that you’re safe.”
   
 
This guy’s real name is Ni.El.Xuyen. My friend, and the only <Kiengi> born in our {{furigana| Party | Ildam }} .
 
This guy’s real name is Ni.El.Xuyen. My friend, and the only <Kiengi> born in our {{furigana| Party | Ildam }} .
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“Is that so? Then please do so. It was seriously bad you know. I’m dead tired. I want to get back to the inn and go to sleep already.”
 
“Is that so? Then please do so. It was seriously bad you know. I’m dead tired. I want to get back to the inn and go to sleep already.”
   
“Nn. Murakami said he was going to come too. He’s drunk and asleep now.”
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“Mhm-hmm. Murakami said he was going to come too. He’s drunk and asleep now.”
   
 
“Again? That uncle... I bet he said he had free time till the gate opened and went on a drinking spree?”
 
“Again? That uncle... I bet he said he had free time till the gate opened and went on a drinking spree?”
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Sigh… I guess he was even more of a human failure than I thought.
 
Sigh… I guess he was even more of a human failure than I thought.
   
Unlike Kenny-san’s group which had tens of people, ours only had four.”
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Unlike Kenie-san’s group which had tens of people, ours only had four.”
   
 
Jingorou Murakami, a samurai from the Sengoku period and an old uncle, is our leader. Though he’s an outrageously unreasonable imperator, his skills are definitely first rate.
 
Jingorou Murakami, a samurai from the Sengoku period and an old uncle, is our leader. Though he’s an outrageously unreasonable imperator, his skills are definitely first rate.
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“Well, whatever. Leave him alone. After he becomes sober, this time I won’t let him escape.”
 
“Well, whatever. Leave him alone. After he becomes sober, this time I won’t let him escape.”
   
“Nn.”
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“Mhm-hmm.”
   
 
Xuyen’s gazed scanned me from top to bottom expressionlessly. I was like a child who played in mud, completely dirtied with dry blood, sweat, and desert sand.
 
Xuyen’s gazed scanned me from top to bottom expressionlessly. I was like a child who played in mud, completely dirtied with dry blood, sweat, and desert sand.
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“For a gatekeeper like that to be in <Ebadonigul>, what the hell is happening?”
 
“For a gatekeeper like that to be in <Ebadonigul>, what the hell is happening?”
   
“Nn. It’s certainly strange.”
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“Mhm-hmm. It’s certainly strange.”
   
 
“It was right in the middle of the city area you know? Wasn’t that place combed clean already? There wasn’t supposed to something so dangerous there!”
 
“It was right in the middle of the city area you know? Wasn’t that place combed clean already? There wasn’t supposed to something so dangerous there!”
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By the way, that was equivalent to forty bags of barley! ...It’s no good. The exhaustion is making me emotional.
 
By the way, that was equivalent to forty bags of barley! ...It’s no good. The exhaustion is making me emotional.
   
“Nn. Is that so.”
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“Mhm-hmm. Is that so.”
   
 
Other people would think he was still expressionless, but to me it looked like his face showed a trace of sympathy.
 
Other people would think he was still expressionless, but to me it looked like his face showed a trace of sympathy.
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“Well, no choice but to give up. A great cost is a great cost. I’ll just have to lash out at that greedy Grimmkin. I still have some reserves.”
 
“Well, no choice but to give up. A great cost is a great cost. I’ll just have to lash out at that greedy Grimmkin. I still have some reserves.”
   
“Nn.”
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“Mhm-hmm.”
   
 
I’m a bit envious at the two single-edged swords hanging from Xuyen’s waist.
 
I’m a bit envious at the two single-edged swords hanging from Xuyen’s waist.
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After staying silent for some time, Xuyen nodded slightly.
 
After staying silent for some time, Xuyen nodded slightly.
   
““...Nn. Understood.”
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““...Mhm-hmm. Understood.”
   
 
Well this guy is really a nice guy at heart. He only has a bit of a dangerous side to him.
 
Well this guy is really a nice guy at heart. He only has a bit of a dangerous side to him.

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