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“Help…”
 
“Help…”
   
I didn’t even have a single cloth on. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.
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I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.
   
 
In contrast to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.
 
In contrast to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.
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“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”
 
“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”
   
The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was tightening my grip on her neck.
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The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was strangling her.
   
 
In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.
 
In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.
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I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.
 
I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.
   
Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which was completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.
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Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.
   
I... what did I get myself into.
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I, what did I get myself into.
   
 
I just cried, while being confused.
 
I just cried, while being confused.
   
A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat, and tears.
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A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat and tears.
   
 
Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.
 
Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.
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And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.
 
And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.
   
And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a farce from the beginning.
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And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a lie from the beginning.
   
Did I hear wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.
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Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.
   
 
“……If it’s like this…..”
 
“……If it’s like this…..”
   
It seemed like a small muttering escaped from her lips.
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It felt like a small muttering escaped from her lips.
   
 
“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”
 
“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”
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“U-Uwah-!”
 
“U-Uwah-!”
   
Before my wandering line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.
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Before my wondering line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.
   
 
A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with
 
A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with
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She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.
 
She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.
   
“It’s okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”
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“it’s okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”
   
 
She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.
 
She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.
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The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.
 
The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.
   
She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, who as if being overwhelmed, looked at her with a distant view.
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She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, and as if being overwhelmed, they looked at her with a distant view.
   
 
But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.
 
But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.

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