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Elen returned Lunie to the stable where the young Dragons were held and returned to her office. Her chest was shaking, ready to burst, as she heard Lim's story.
 
Elen returned Lunie to the stable where the young Dragons were held and returned to her office. Her chest was shaking, ready to burst, as she heard Lim's story.
   
Her silver-white hair shined with moisture, just having finished her bath.
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Her silver-white hair shined with the moisture, just having finished her bath.
   
 
“I haven't seen it yet. What was he like?”
 
“I haven't seen it yet. What was he like?”

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