Editing Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 01 Chapter4 - MTL

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Tigre reached the well while thinking so. Immediately, his breathing stopped, his eyes opened widely, and his body stiffened.
 
Tigre reached the well while thinking so. Immediately, his breathing stopped, his eyes opened widely, and his body stiffened.
   
Elen, without a single piece of clothing, was bathing. A rugged object the color of green rust lay at her feet.
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Ellen, without a single piece of clothing, was bathing. A rugged object the color of green rust lay at her feet.
   
 
“Hm? Ah, it's you.”
 
“Hm? Ah, it's you.”
   
Elen, without any sign of shyness, looked at the stunned Tigre. Elen let out a small laugh without trying to conceal her body.
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Ellen, without any sign of shyness, looked at the stunned Tigre. Elen let out a small laugh without trying to conceal her body.
   
 
Tigre did not speak. He could not move a finger while he stared intently at Elen's body. Her argent hair stuck to her fair skin, her breasts were accentuated by the water, the line of her soft, round buttocks and tight waist was sensational. Because of that, even her usual smile seemed amorous.
 
Tigre did not speak. He could not move a finger while he stared intently at Elen's body. Her argent hair stuck to her fair skin, her breasts were accentuated by the water, the line of her soft, round buttocks and tight waist was sensational. Because of that, even her usual smile seemed amorous.
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“... Even I'll get embarrassed if you look at me so much.”
 
“... Even I'll get embarrassed if you look at me so much.”
   
Elen's voice was faintly dyed in shyness.
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Ellen's voice was faintly dyed in shyness.
   
 
At last, Tigre returned to reality. He turned around in panic.
 
At last, Tigre returned to reality. He turned around in panic.

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