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She was the stern girl he had met in Rodnick and was now his enemy, the blue-haired Vanadis. Though it was odd to see a casually dressed girl in the snow-covered mountains, he could accept it if it were her.
 
She was the stern girl he had met in Rodnick and was now his enemy, the blue-haired Vanadis. Though it was odd to see a casually dressed girl in the snow-covered mountains, he could accept it if it were her.
   
Tigre stopped his feet and intently observed her. Ludmira noticed him and remained where she stood.
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Tigre stopped his feet and intently observe her. Ludmira noticed him and remained where she stood.
   
 
''--- Is she waiting for me?''
 
''--- Is she waiting for me?''
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She simply thought of him as a simple hunter and stopped pursuing the matter. The only thing between the two was a small pan.
 
She simply thought of him as a simple hunter and stopped pursuing the matter. The only thing between the two was a small pan.
   
If she were further from the spear and he caught her off guard, he could pin her down. As soon as he thought that far, however, Tigre shook the thought out of his head. His chances of victory were too slim, and he could not easily ambush this girl who spoke to him sincerely and kindly. Ludmira suddenly called out to Tigre.
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If she were further from the spear and he caught her off guard, he could pin her down. As soon as he thought that far, however, Tigre shook the thought out of his head. His chances of victory was too slim, and he could not easily ambush this girl who spoke to him sincerely and kindly. Ludmira suddenly called out to Tigre.
   
 
“What is your name?”
 
“What is your name?”
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''--- Is she drinking hot water?''
 
''--- Is she drinking hot water?''
   
Though Tigre thought that, he felt it was something different after a time. Ludmira opened two crystal bottles held at her waist and placed what appeared to be dry, black seeds into a cup.
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Though Tigre thought that, he felt it was something different after a time. Ludmira opened two crystal bottles held at her wist and placed what appeared to be dry, black seeds into a cup.
   
 
When she poured the hot water into it, the water became slightly red.
 
When she poured the hot water into it, the water became slightly red.
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They tied their bodies together with rope as they advanced up the slopes which had been covered in ice halfway up. Ellen encouraged the soldiers, and Tigre directed the work. Slowly, the LeitMeritz soldiers moved across the snow-covered mountain.
 
They tied their bodies together with rope as they advanced up the slopes which had been covered in ice halfway up. Ellen encouraged the soldiers, and Tigre directed the work. Slowly, the LeitMeritz soldiers moved across the snow-covered mountain.
   
When the eastern sky was dyed indigo and the sun invaded the western sky, they had reached where Tigre stood several days ago.
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When the eastern sky was dyed indigo and the sky invaded the western sky, they had reached where Tigre stood several days ago.
   
 
They looked down at the castle fort before their eyes.
 
They looked down at the castle fort before their eyes.
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“--- Arifal.”
 
“--- Arifal.”
   
Following her cry, the blade of the longsword glowed with a pale light. The frozen air was stolen from the mountains and surrounded the sword. A loud groan was heard, and the glowing light drew a brilliant trajectory in the darkness.
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Following her cry, the blade of the longsword glowed with a pale light. The frozen air was stolen from the mountains and surrounded the sword. A loud groan was heard, and the light glowed drew a brilliant trajectory in the darkness.
   
 
“{{furigana|Cleave the Wind|Ley Admos}}!”
 
“{{furigana|Cleave the Wind|Ley Admos}}!”
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The debris of the fences and walls were torn aside without a sound, and a deep groove was born.
 
The debris of the fences and walls were torn aside without a sound, and a deep groove was born.
   
The ground was split, and the arrow pierced the center of the castle gate. There was a jarring metallic sound as a light vibration was felt across the rampart.
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The ground was split, and an arrow pierced the center of the castle gate. There was a jarring metallic sound as a light vibration was felt across the rampart.
   
 
Several soldiers looked at the walls suspiciously.
 
Several soldiers looked at the walls suspiciously.
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Suddenly, a circular light spread from the arrow. As if following after the light, the iron gate became hollow. The bolts supporting it from the inside were cleanly cut.
 
Suddenly, a circular light spread from the arrow. As if following after the light, the iron gate became hollow. The bolts supporting it from the inside were cleanly cut.
   
The iron door had hollowed out and was cleanly divided between the two doors. The fragments fell to the ground, shaking the earth in the process.
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The iron door had hollowed out and was cleanly divided between the two doors. They fragments fell to the ground, shaking the earth in the process.
   
 
The soldiers looked in shock as they looked at the circular hole in the gate. Their thoughts stopped; no one could take action.
 
The soldiers looked in shock as they looked at the circular hole in the gate. Their thoughts stopped; no one could take action.
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The air froze in an instant and large blocks of ice connected to form a bridge. Rather than staying put, Ellen stepped forward and moved along the ice bridge before her. Several spears of ice formed and attacked her while Ludmira slid along the ice and approached Ellen, her spear thrust before her.
 
The air froze in an instant and large blocks of ice connected to form a bridge. Rather than staying put, Ellen stepped forward and moved along the ice bridge before her. Several spears of ice formed and attacked her while Ludmira slid along the ice and approached Ellen, her spear thrust before her.
   
Ellen's feet left the bridge and were wrapped in wind. She avoided the spear of ice and gripped Ludmira's sleeve as she passed to the side, dragging her down from the bridge.
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Ellen's feet left the bridge and was wrapped in wind. She avoided the spear of ice and gripped Ludmira's sleeve as she passed to the side, dragging her down from the bridge.
   
 
Ludmira gazed at the water as her body approached the surface. She brought the tip of her spear forcefully into the surface of the water where it stuck.
 
Ludmira gazed at the water as her body approached the surface. She brought the tip of her spear forcefully into the surface of the water where it stuck.
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The next moment, the man's body flew sideways.
 
The next moment, the man's body flew sideways.
   
He smashed into the bridge with an arrow piercing through his head before falling into the moat. Ludmira saw the shape of the feathers.
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He smashed into the bridge with an arrow pierced through his head before falling into the moat. Ludmira saw the shape of the feathers.
   
 
''--- Just now...''
 
''--- Just now...''

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