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“Wha--- I will not permit you to insult my mother!”
 
“Wha--- I will not permit you to insult my mother!”
   
Ellen's bright red eyes and Ludmira's deep blue eyes exploded with hostility.
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Ellen's bright red eyes and Ludmira's deep blue pupils exploded with hostility.
   
 
“I see, so it was your mother. Good. You should come with her and I can teach you both how to properly prostrate yourself.”
 
“I see, so it was your mother. Good. You should come with her and I can teach you both how to properly prostrate yourself.”
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They quickly made preparations. Early the next morning one hundred LeitMeritz cavalry, led by Tigre and Ellen, used the morning mist to approach the foot of the Tatra Mountains.
 
They quickly made preparations. Early the next morning one hundred LeitMeritz cavalry, led by Tigre and Ellen, used the morning mist to approach the foot of the Tatra Mountains.
   
Lim took command of the remaining soldiers and attacked the mountain path. Though dissatisfaction clearly showed in her blue eyes, she followed directions while maintaining her expressionless facade.
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Lim took command of the remaining soldiers and attacked the mountain path. Though dissatisfaction clearly showed in her blue pupils, she followed directions while maintaining her expressionless facade.
   
 
Though there were only one hundred cavalry, it was difficult to travel along the mountain without a road. The soldiers did not wear armor but a combination of fur and leather. There were many who were injured as their feet slipped and the rocks fell on top of them.
 
Though there were only one hundred cavalry, it was difficult to travel along the mountain without a road. The soldiers did not wear armor but a combination of fur and leather. There were many who were injured as their feet slipped and the rocks fell on top of them.

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