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“... Lurie-sama.”
 
“... Lurie-sama.”
   
There were two Commanders standing before her. One was in his mid 30s and had a much richer experience in combat than Ludmira, who was still 16. He excelled in swordsmanship and horsemanship. He gazed sadly at the girl he served.
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There were two Commanders standing before her. One was in his mid 30s and had a much richer experience in combat than Ludmira, who was still 16. He excelled with swordsmanship and horsemanship. He gazed sadly at the girl he served.
   
 
“What is it?”
 
“What is it?”
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They finished preparing, and the soldiers were in formation. Ellen smiled fearlessly.
 
They finished preparing, and the soldiers were in formation. Ellen smiled fearlessly.
   
Before long, a black mass appeared in the distance, advancing along the ground. They held spears of wood and iron to the sky. The {{furigana|Black Dragon Flag|Zirnitra}} could be seen at intervals alongside a fluttering white flag with a blue spear, the banner of the Vanadis.
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Before long, a black mass appeared in the distance, advancing along the ground. They held spears of wood and iron to the sky. The {{furigana|Black Dragon Flag|Zirnitra}} could be seen at intervals alongside the a fluttering white flag with a blue spear, the banner of the Vanadis.
   
 
With a distance of five hundred alsin (approximately five hundred meters) separating the armies, something suddenly fell from the sky.
 
With a distance of five hundred alsin (approximately five hundred meters) separating the armies, something suddenly fell from the sky.
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''--- Where's the commander? I need to aim at him.''
 
''--- Where's the commander? I need to aim at him.''
   
Tigre observed the enemy force and searched for the person in charge. Amongst the swarming soldiers, the glittering swords and spears, and the flying arrows, he could act without hesitation; perhaps it was something uncommon that Tigre possessed.
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Tigre observed the enemy force and searched for the person in charge. Amongst the swarming soldiers, the glittering sword and spears, and the flying arrows, he could act without hesitation; perhaps it was something uncommon that Tigre possessed.
   
 
He found him.
 
He found him.
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He wanted to do more, to be able to help Ellen more in the future.
 
He wanted to do more, to be able to help Ellen more in the future.
   
Ellen laughed happily upon seeing Tigre's expression.
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Ellen laughed happily seeing Tigre's expression.
   
 
“Good eyes. You're listening seriously.”
 
“Good eyes. You're listening seriously.”
   
“Um, how does the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} chooses the Vanadis?”
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“Um, how does the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} choose the Vanadis?”
   
 
“It suddenly appears before the selected person. If the person takes it in her hand, words flow into her head. It's a bit difficult to explain, but it told me I had become a Vanadis and to head to the Imperial Palace. So I was a Vanadis the day I appeared before the Palace.”
 
“It suddenly appears before the selected person. If the person takes it in her hand, words flow into her head. It's a bit difficult to explain, but it told me I had become a Vanadis and to head to the Imperial Palace. So I was a Vanadis the day I appeared before the Palace.”
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Tigre frowned. The location seemed to have been built specifically to oppose Ellen. Ellen noticed Tigre's face and shrugged her shoulders and smiled cynically.
 
Tigre frowned. The location seemed to have been built specifically to oppose Ellen. Ellen noticed Tigre's face and shrugged her shoulders and smiled cynically.
   
“It's something Ludmira's grandmother thought of. She calculated that position specifically to counter Arifal, so it seems my predecessors suffered.”
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“It's something Ludmira's grandmother thought of. She calculated that position specifically to counter Arifal, so it seems my predecessors suffer.”
   
   
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Ellen had a passionate attitude as her bright red eyes glared at Lim. The adjutant with golden hair stood resolutely before the pressure exuded by the Vanadis.
 
Ellen had a passionate attitude as her bright red eyes glared at Lim. The adjutant with golden hair stood resolutely before the pressure exuded by the Vanadis.
   
“What's wrong? I can hear you even from outside.”
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“What's wrong? I can hear you even outside.”
   
 
Ellen looked at Tigre with a frown. Her expression quickly returned to one of a sulking child before she stomped her way across the tent and grabbed a bottle of wine in the corner. She quickly opened the bottle and drank its contents.
 
Ellen looked at Tigre with a frown. Her expression quickly returned to one of a sulking child before she stomped her way across the tent and grabbed a bottle of wine in the corner. She quickly opened the bottle and drank its contents.
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“Though I have no other proposal, It is still useless.”
 
“Though I have no other proposal, It is still useless.”
   
Though he thought it no different from a childish quarrel, Tigre spoke and made his assertion with a strong tone.
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Though he thought it no different from a childish quarrel, Tigre spoke made his assertion with a strong tone.
   
 
“Ludmira's grandmother thought of that. You said that yourself, right? In that case, even if you have many soldiers prepared, it wouldn't be a simple task.”
 
“Ludmira's grandmother thought of that. You said that yourself, right? In that case, even if you have many soldiers prepared, it wouldn't be a simple task.”
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''--- Even if I told her to stop, she wouldn't. But we don't have any other plan, so what can I do?''
 
''--- Even if I told her to stop, she wouldn't. But we don't have any other plan, so what can I do?''
   
He hesitated, but after some worrying, Tigre extended his hands. He shut his eyes and sandwiched Ellen's face with his hands as she had done to him. With Ellen's movements stopped for a moment, he quietly brought his head forward to hers. It was not an action he thought about, but something done naturally.
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He hesitated, but after worrying, Tigre extended his hands. He shut his eyes and sandwiched Ellen's face with his hands as she had done to him. With Ellen's movements stopped for a moment, he quietly brought his head forward to hers. It was not an action he thought about, but something done naturally.
   
 
“Wha, Eh...”
 
“Wha, Eh...”
   
Ellen was surprised, confused, and panicked. He could feel it in her voice through his palm.
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Ellen was surprised, confused, panicked. He could feel it in her voice through his palm.
   
 
Tigre let out a breath of relief in his mind because he did not feel anger from Ellen.
 
Tigre let out a breath of relief in his mind because he did not feel anger from Ellen.
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''--- Ludmira...!?''
 
''--- Ludmira...!?''
   
She was the stern girl he had met in Rodnick and was now his enemy, the blue-haired Vanadis. Though it was odd to see a casually dressed girl in the snow-covered mountains, he could accept it if it were her.
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She was a stern girl he had met in Rodnick and was now his enemy, the blue-haired Vanadis. Though it was odd to see a casually dressed girl in the snow-covered mountains, he could accept it if it were her.
   
 
Tigre stopped his feet and intently observed her. Ludmira noticed him and remained where she stood.
 
Tigre stopped his feet and intently observed her. Ludmira noticed him and remained where she stood.
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Ludmira pushed her chest forward slightly and answered proudly. Tigre was taken aback as she looked at him with shining eyes the color of the deep sea.
 
Ludmira pushed her chest forward slightly and answered proudly. Tigre was taken aback as she looked at him with shining eyes the color of the deep sea.
   
“By the way, you seemed to have walked a fair distance. Where did you hit this beast from?”
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“By the way, you seemed to walk a fair distance. Where did you hit this beast from?”
   
 
Tigre looked back to where he walked from and pointed at the tree where he hid and took aim at the fox. Ludmira's expression rapidly became sharp.
 
Tigre looked back to where he walked from and pointed at the tree where he hid and took aim at the fox. Ludmira's expression rapidly became sharp.
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Ludmira pointed to the fox with the bow in her hand. Her arrow was stuck in the fox's neck.
 
Ludmira pointed to the fox with the bow in her hand. Her arrow was stuck in the fox's neck.
   
“... I suppose we should divide it evenly in this situation.”
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“... I suppose we would divide it evenly in this situation.”
   
 
“That is fine with me. Ah, I will give the meat to you, since it is unnecessary. I simply want the fur.”
 
“That is fine with me. Ah, I will give the meat to you, since it is unnecessary. I simply want the fur.”
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Whenever he took a sip, his body was warmed from the inside. Ludmira watched Tigre drink the tea with an elated expression.
 
Whenever he took a sip, his body was warmed from the inside. Ludmira watched Tigre drink the tea with an elated expression.
   
After they had finally rested, Ludmira turned to look at Tigre with interest.
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After they had finally rested, Ludmira turned looked at Tigre with interest.
   
 
“Urz. Why are you here? You should have some idea of what is going on. There are many soldiers walking about the mountain paths, and it is clear this is a battlefield.”
 
“Urz. Why are you here? You should have some idea of what is going on. There are many soldiers walking about the mountain paths, and it is clear this is a battlefield.”
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“What should we do? Give up and return?”
 
“What should we do? Give up and return?”
   
Tigre carefully asked her. Ellen folded her arms and shook her head strongly as she refused him.
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Tigre carefully asked her. Ellen folded her arms and shook refused him strongly.
   
 
“If we turn back here, all our efforts would come to waste. I absolutely do not want that.”
 
“If we turn back here, all our efforts would come to waste. I absolutely do not want that.”
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Tigre held his breath as he watched the battle between the two Vanadis. When he fought in the fortress, and when he fought against the Thenardier Army, there was never a person who had exchanged blows with Ellen more than ten times.
 
Tigre held his breath as he watched the battle between the two Vanadis. When he fought in the fortress, and when he fought against the Thenardier Army, there was never a person who had exchanged blows with Ellen more than ten times.
   
Ludmira skillfully manipulated her short spear, and violently thrust her weapon before her, clashing with Ellen's own attack.
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Ludmira skillfully manipulated her short spear, violently thrust her weapon before her, clashing with Ellen's own attack.
   
 
After the unexpected collision between {{furigana|Dragonic Tools|Viralt}}, Ellen and Ludmira jumped back simultaneously.
 
After the unexpected collision between {{furigana|Dragonic Tools|Viralt}}, Ellen and Ludmira jumped back simultaneously.
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The bridge had been torn in half.
 
The bridge had been torn in half.
   
Ignoring the disastrous scene before her, Ludmira began to run. Even with the gap before her, she showed no signs of hesitation.
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Ignoring the disastrous scene before her, Ludmira began to run. Even with the gap before her, she showed no sign of hesitation.
   
 
“{{furigana|Freeze the Sky|Shero Zam Kafa}}!”
 
“{{furigana|Freeze the Sky|Shero Zam Kafa}}!”
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“You lied to me, Urz.”
 
“You lied to me, Urz.”
   
Tigre turned pale and was at a loss for words after seeing Ludmira's expression. Ludmira continued to speak quietly.
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Tigre turned pale and was at a loss for words seeing Ludmira's expression. Ludmira quietly continued to speak.
   
 
“I saw the arrows.”
 
“I saw the arrows.”

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