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Roland showed no fatigue, no matter how often he cut, nor did his sword become dull. Even when surrounded by four or five people, not a single scratch marred his armor; rather, only the dead bodies of Sachstein soldiers littered the field.
 
Roland showed no fatigue, no matter how often he cut, nor did his sword become dull. Even when surrounded by four or five people, not a single scratch marred his armor; rather, only the dead bodies of Sachstein soldiers littered the field.
   
Suddenly, a battle cry was heard atop the cliff. A Knight dressed in armor carried a flag depicting a horse head; it was the symbol of Brune fluttering in the wind. They were the Navarre Knights who defended the western border.
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Suddenly, a battle cry was heard atop the cliff. A Knight dressed in armor carried a flag depicting a horse head; it was the symbol of Brune fluttering in the wind. They were the Navarre Knights who defend the western border.
   
 
The Sachstein Army, having focused on Roland, failed to notice the soldiers surrounding them. Even if they killed Roland, they would be overrun.
 
The Sachstein Army, having focused on Roland, failed to notice the soldiers surrounding them. Even if they killed Roland, they would be overrun.
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“Follow my sword!”
 
“Follow my sword!”
   
The wind sung, and the stones came flying. Roland did not try to avoid them as he moved straight forward with his horse. The boulders could not keep up with the Black Knight's terrific speed.
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The wind sung, and the stones came flying. Roland did not try to avoid them as he moved straight forward with his horse. The boulders could not keep with the Black Knight's terrific speed.
   
 
--- One cut.
 
--- One cut.
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''--- Tigre-sama must still be asleep.''
 
''--- Tigre-sama must still be asleep.''
   
He was the Lord whom Teita served and whom she intimately thought of. While imagining his sleeping face, she heard a voice from behind her.
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He was the Lord whom Teita served and intimately thought of. While imagining his sleeping face, she heard a voice from behind.
   
 
“What's this, you're up already.”
 
“What's this, you're up already.”
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“You too, aren't you cold?”
 
“You too, aren't you cold?”
   
She was wearing a long sleeved-shirt that covered her up to her shoulders and her legs. In comparison, Ellen wore a short skirt and had bare legs and shoulders. Still, though not thick, her clothes were made of several fine-quality fabrics.
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She was wearing a long sleeved-shirt and covered to her shoulders and legs. In comparison, Ellen wore a short skirt and had bare legs and shoulders. Still, though not thick, her clothes were made of several fine-quality fabrics.
   
 
“I'm fine. The winters in Zhcted are much colder than this.”
 
“I'm fine. The winters in Zhcted are much colder than this.”
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“I am happy enough, so long as I can see Tigre-sama smiling happily, and, right now, you are necessary for that.”
 
“I am happy enough, so long as I can see Tigre-sama smiling happily, and, right now, you are necessary for that.”
   
She hardened her determination and stopped walking. Teita looked back at Ellen. With her face flushed, she looked strongly with her hazel eyes.
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She hardened her determination and stopped walking. Teita looked back at Ellen. With her face flush, she looked strongly with her hazel eyes.
   
 
“That is why, I will remain by Tigre-sama from now on, and I will watch you. I will not forgive you should you do anything terrible to him!”
 
“That is why, I will remain by Tigre-sama from now on, and I will watch you. I will not forgive you should you do anything terrible to him!”
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“What if an assassin aimed for your life?”
 
“What if an assassin aimed for your life?”
   
Though she wanted to say that so that she could accompany her, Lim had fallen when a group of assassins attacked her the other day.
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Though she wanted to say that so she could accompany her, Lim had fallen when a group of assassins attacked her the other day.
   
 
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She told herself it would be fine. Ellen was not guarded by only herself. There were many soldiers watching over the area, and she had the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} granted to the Vanadis. Even if a poisoned arrow flew from great distances, Ellen could defend against it.
 
She told herself it would be fine. Ellen was not guarded by only herself. There were many soldiers watching over the area, and she had the {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} granted to the Vanadis. Even if a poisoned arrow flew from great distances, Ellen could defend against it.
   
She clutched her favorite stuffed bear, which could fit in her hands, to calm her mind. Lim left the barracks with her sword at her waist. When she asked for Ellen's whereabouts from the soldiers beside the tent, she was told they still had not returned.
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She clutched her favorite stuffed bear, which could fit in her hands, to calm her mind. Lim left the barracks with her sword at her waist. When asking Ellen's whereabouts from the soldiers beside the tent, she was told they had still not returned.
   
 
''--- What should I do?''
 
''--- What should I do?''
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Confused by the situation, Teita ran up to Tigre in a hurry. After confirming his well being, Teita looked at Lim accusingly.
 
Confused by the situation, Teita ran up to Tigre in a hurry. After confirming his well being, Teita looked at Lim accusingly.
   
Unable to remain still, Lim bowed deeply and apologized for her impoliteness.
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Unable to remain, Lim bowed deeply and apologized for her impoliteness.
   
 
“It's fine, though try to limit it so I don't go bald.”
 
“It's fine, though try to limit it so I don't go bald.”
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Tigre responded in a calm manner. He was 16 years old and had rather short, dull hair and dark eyes. His features were sober, and his mild smile suited him well. He wore ordinary hempen clothes with leather shoes and looked no different from any villager in the area.
 
Tigre responded in a calm manner. He was 16 years old and had rather short, dull hair and dark eyes. His features were sober, and his mild smile suited him well. He wore ordinary hempen clothes with leather shoes and looked no different from any villager in the area.
   
This was how he always dressed, though he was a General commanding six thousand troops.
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This was how he always dressed, though he was General commanding six thousand troops.
   
 
“The number of fights has increased and our food and fuel are getting tight. That is the current situation.”
 
“The number of fights has increased and our food and fuel are getting tight. That is the current situation.”
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“It's good even when cool, since you made it.”
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“It's good, even when cool, since you made it.”
   
 
He responded with a smile. Teita looked up with an embarrassed face. Tigre glanced at Ellen and Lim.
 
He responded with a smile. Teita looked up with an embarrassed face. Tigre glanced at Ellen and Lim.
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“I could say the very same of you. You were quite defenseless, Eleanora-sama, when Lord Tigrevurmud saw you bathing, as well as when he pushed you down---”
 
“I could say the very same of you. You were quite defenseless, Eleanora-sama, when Lord Tigrevurmud saw you bathing, as well as when he pushed you down---”
   
Lim suddenly stopped speaking, having felt the weight of someone's eyes on her. Teita held the tableware, her face pale, as she looked at Lim, urging her to continue.
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Lim stopped speaking having felt the weight of someone's eyes on her. Teita held the tableware, her face pale, as she looked at Lim, urging her to continue.
   
 
Lim looked back shyly before gazing at the floor. She stood up, finished her wine in a single gulp, and placed it on the table.
 
Lim looked back shyly before gazing at the floor. She stood up, finished her wine in a single gulp, and placed it on the table.
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Tigre smiled sarcastically after hearing Rurick's words.
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Tigre smiled sarcastically hearing Rurick's words.
   
 
“That's an easy to understand comparison.”
 
“That's an easy to understand comparison.”
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There were several reasons. Massas had traveled to the Royal Capital, Nice, and there was no contact. That was the largest concern.
 
There were several reasons. Massas had traveled to the Royal Capital, Nice, and there was no contact. That was the largest concern.
   
If he were to fight against Duke Thenardier, it would be necessary to sever any connection with the King. Ideally, he should get permission, but it was unlikely to happen, especially since he invited the Zhcted Army into the country. He still needed to make his justification clear.
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If he were to fight against Duke Thenardier, it would be necessary to sever any connection with the King. Ideally, he could get permission, but it was unlikely to happen, especially since he invited the Zhcted Army into the country. He still needed to make his justification clear.
   
 
Tigre could assert his justice by speaking up, but, unfortunately, he had no influence.
 
Tigre could assert his justice by speaking up, but, unfortunately, he had no influence.

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