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Hearing Ellen's response, Greast looked at Tigre who stood next to her and nodded his head in assent.
 
Hearing Ellen's response, Greast looked at Tigre who stood next to her and nodded his head in assent.
   
“Certainly. Your relationship hardly seems like that of a man and woman. Certainly, you would need a man of rank such as myself, at the very least.”
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“Certainly. Your relationship hardly seems like that of a man and a woman. Certainly, you would need a man of rank such as myself, at the very least.”
   
 
“... Such kind words, Marquis Greast.”
 
“... Such kind words, Marquis Greast.”
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“No. I wish for an answer immediately.”
 
“No. I wish for an answer immediately.”
   
Greast shook his head and looked seriously after hearing Tigre's words.
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Greast shook his head and looked seriously hearing Tigre's words.
   
 
“Earl Vorn, you must not misunderstand. This is not a request for your cooperation but your submission. Will you follow Lord Ganelon? Or will you not... I want your answer. His Excellency will not permit neutrality.”
 
“Earl Vorn, you must not misunderstand. This is not a request for your cooperation but your submission. Will you follow Lord Ganelon? Or will you not... I want your answer. His Excellency will not permit neutrality.”
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“Green with a Golden Unicorn.”
 
“Green with a Golden Unicorn.”
   
Hearing Lim's answer, he knit his eyebrows, hearing unwelcome words.
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Hearing Lim's answer, he knit his eyebrows hearing unwelcome words.
   
 
“We must make haste if it is the Golden Unicorn.”
 
“We must make haste if it is the Golden Unicorn.”
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“You're a brave girl.”
 
“You're a brave girl.”
   
Ellen had a face as though she was hiding her laughter. She also placed her hand on Teita's head and began stroking it roughly.
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Ellen had a face as though she was hiding her laughter. She also placed her hand on Teita's hand and began stroking it roughly.
   
 
“Don't worry. I'll be with Tigre. At most, we have to worry about six thousand troops.”
 
“Don't worry. I'll be with Tigre. At most, we have to worry about six thousand troops.”
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“You don't need to be so anxious. We don't need to go to them immediately. Set up camp. Those from Territoire that see our flag will eventually take shelter here.”
 
“You don't need to be so anxious. We don't need to go to them immediately. Set up camp. Those from Territoire that see our flag will eventually take shelter here.”
   
Tigre was relieved upon hearing those words. It was enough to conduct himself.
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Tigre was relieved hearing those words. It was enough to conduct himself.
   
 
''--- Still, we need to go north across the river.''
 
''--- Still, we need to go north across the river.''
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“Impossible. How could it turn out this way...”
 
“Impossible. How could it turn out this way...”
   
With a cramp in his face, the General abandoned the fight; he had no other choice. With the incoming blade of the Silver Meteor Army, he pulled out while scolding his troops.
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With a cramp in his face, the General abandoned the fight; he had no other choice. With the incoming blade of the Silver Meteor Army, he pulled while scolding his troops.
   
 
The blue and white of the winter sky rapidly disappeared, falling to the darkness of nightfall.
 
The blue and white of the winter sky rapidly disappeared, falling to the darkness of nightfall.
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Five hundred of Ganelon's troops entered the forest to take revenge on the archers, but they were struck down, one after another, without being able to close in on the enemy.
 
Five hundred of Ganelon's troops entered the forest to take revenge on the archers, but they were struck down, one after another, without being able to close in on the enemy.
   
With a sword in their right hand and a shield in their left, just by stooping down a little bit, the Ganelon soldiers could protect themselves from any number of arrows.
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With a sword in right hand and a shield in left, just by stooping down a little bit, the Ganelon soldiers could protect themselves from any number of arrows.
   
 
However, the enemy had devised a number of tactics.
 
However, the enemy had devised a number of tactics.
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A wind from the Silver Flash in Ellen's right hand blew, showing its consent. Perhaps it was the alcohol, but the wind carried the sweet fragrance of the Vanadis, surprising Tigre.
 
A wind from the Silver Flash in Ellen's right hand blew, showing its consent. Perhaps it was the alcohol, but the wind carried the sweet fragrance of the Vanadis, surprising Tigre.
   
He became anxious, finally realizing her fingers were running through his hair. Ellen continued patting his head as she smiled. Tigre could not easily tell her to stop, but if he remained as he is, he was certain she would hear his heart beating violently.
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He became anxious, finally realizing her fingers were running through his hair. Ellen continued patting his head as she smiled. Tigre could not easily tell her to stop, but if he remained as is, he was certain she would hear his heart beating violently.
   
 
“What's wrong? You suddenly went silent.”
 
“What's wrong? You suddenly went silent.”
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''--- That's right, her face was completely red when she came here.''
 
''--- That's right, her face was completely red when she came here.''
   
Just by turning his head a little, he could see Ellen's beautiful face. Her face showed no sign of unease or fear. The shape of her face, her fair skin, her silver-white hair was visible; though it was regrettable, her long eyelashes covered her lovely eyes.
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Just by turning his head a little, he could see Ellen's beautiful face. Her face showed no sign of unease or fear. The shape of her face, her fair skin, her silver-white hair were visible; though it was regrettable, her long eyelashes covered her lovely eyes.
   
 
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