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While staring intensely at the map, Tigre returned his answer with a heavy tone.
 
While staring intensely at the map, Tigre returned his answer with a heavy tone.
   
Though he wanted to help them as quickly as he could, if the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} fought head on, they would be swallowed in an instant. Even if it was a heroic action, they would not be able to take any further action.
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Though he wanted to help them as quickly as he could, if the [Silver Meteor Army] fought head on, they would be swallowed in an instant. Even if it was a heroic action, they would not be able to take any further action.
   
 
“By the way.”
 
“By the way.”
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Kashim was furious seeing soldiers, covered in blood and dust, with their shoulders drooped. No matter how firmly he clenched his fists, however, he did not release his anger on others. He was barely able to restrain himself.
 
Kashim was furious seeing soldiers, covered in blood and dust, with their shoulders drooped. No matter how firmly he clenched his fists, however, he did not release his anger on others. He was barely able to restrain himself.
   
The number<!-- "strength" instead of "number" ? --Chancs --> of enemies was five to six thousand. Though he doubted the report when he heard it, he could say nothing upon learning of the details. Though he did not know of the name of the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}, he almost precisely understood the camouflage they had used.
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The number<!-- "strength" instead of "number" ? --Chancs --> of enemies was five to six thousand. Though he doubted the report when he heard it, he could say nothing upon learning of the details. Though he did not know of the name of the [Silver Meteor Army], he almost precisely understood the camouflage they had used.
   
 
“They did it, the Brune Army...”
 
“They did it, the Brune Army...”
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Kashim calmly handed out orders. The Muozinel infantry lined themselves up along the side without showing a gap and shot their arrows toward the mountains behind them.
 
Kashim calmly handed out orders. The Muozinel infantry lined themselves up along the side without showing a gap and shot their arrows toward the mountains behind them.
   
The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} blocked the arrows with shields and threw stones at the Muozinel troops in return. The horses ran about in place, causing their troops to collapse.
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The [Silver Meteor Army] blocked the arrows with shields and threw stones at the Muozinel troops in return. The horses ran about in place, causing their troops to collapse.
   
However, the fierce offensive did not continue for long. The group of cavalry which had advanced beforehand turned back. Rather than rushing the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}, they were aiming to cut off their retreat.
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However, the fierce offensive did not continue for long. The group of cavalry which had advanced beforehand turned back. Rather than rushing the [Silver Meteor Army], they were aiming to cut off their retreat.
   
 
“They're probably trying to invite us into a narrow path like yesterday, but I won't fall for the same trick.”
 
“They're probably trying to invite us into a narrow path like yesterday, but I won't fall for the same trick.”
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In yesterday's fight, Tigre had his men strip the armor from the corpses. This time, he had them wear it to confuse the enemy.
 
In yesterday's fight, Tigre had his men strip the armor from the corpses. This time, he had them wear it to confuse the enemy.
   
The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} impersonated the Muozinel cavalry and stabbed the enemy relentlessly. So as not to attack their own side, they had decided on a keyword beforehand.
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The [Silver Meteor Army] impersonated the Muozinel cavalry and stabbed the enemy relentlessly. So as not to attack their own side, they had decided on a keyword beforehand.
   
 
If one said bear, they would respond with rabbit.
 
If one said bear, they would respond with rabbit.
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Using the childish keyword, the many people from the Muozinel Army fell off their steeds in the confusion. It was difficult for them to stand back up.
 
Using the childish keyword, the many people from the Muozinel Army fell off their steeds in the confusion. It was difficult for them to stand back up.
   
In addition, the cavalry were attacked first during their charge. After being encircled, the Muozinel Army nearly collapsed, being forced into a situation where they could not break through. The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} then quickly ran from the battlefield.
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In addition, the cavalry were attacked first during their charge. After being encircled, the Muozinel Army nearly collapsed, being forced into a situation where they could not break through. The [Silver Meteor Army] then quickly ran from the battlefield.
   
 
Kashim wanted to order his men to pursue the enemy, but he did not.
 
Kashim wanted to order his men to pursue the enemy, but he did not.
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A rain of arrows pierced the troops' eyes. Those who fell to the ground were mercilessly crushed beneath the horses. The wilderness full of dirt was quickly covered in blood and corpses.
 
A rain of arrows pierced the troops' eyes. Those who fell to the ground were mercilessly crushed beneath the horses. The wilderness full of dirt was quickly covered in blood and corpses.
   
The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} cut deeply into the Muozinel troops, but with their small numbers, they could not break through the three thousand strong unit.
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The [Silver Meteor Army] cut deeply into the Muozinel troops, but with their small numbers, they could not break through the three thousand strong unit.
   
 
Kashim looked up and glanced at the bloodshed throughout the battlefield. Though it was regrettable that he was caught by surprise, he was finally able to think. If his troops endured here, the soldiers to the rear would catch up.
 
Kashim looked up and glanced at the bloodshed throughout the battlefield. Though it was regrettable that he was caught by surprise, he was finally able to think. If his troops endured here, the soldiers to the rear would catch up.
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The Muozinel Army collapsed like broken dolls.
 
The Muozinel Army collapsed like broken dolls.
   
Those fighting the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} began pulling back following the movements of those behind them. Those who continued to fight were cut down, those who turned away were pursued.
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Those fighting the [Silver Meteor Army] began pulling back following the movements of those behind them. Those who continued to fight were cut down, those who turned away were pursued.
   
 
Tigre led the soldiers of Alsace toward the front and showed no mercy. He displayed his rage for the death of the ten men earlier that morning.
 
Tigre led the soldiers of Alsace toward the front and showed no mercy. He displayed his rage for the death of the ten men earlier that morning.
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The Muozinel Army lost more than three thousand in this fight, bringing their death toll to above five thousand when including the battles from the previous two days. It was a quarter of their entire army that fell in the lands of Agnes.
 
The Muozinel Army lost more than three thousand in this fight, bringing their death toll to above five thousand when including the battles from the previous two days. It was a quarter of their entire army that fell in the lands of Agnes.
   
On the other hand, about two hundred soldiers from the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} had lost their lives.
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On the other hand, about two hundred soldiers from the [Silver Meteor Army] had lost their lives.
   
 
There were fifteen hundred still living. Amongst those, four-hundred sixty-two were injured, both serious and minor. It was a narrow victory, a miraculous result, given their current state.
 
There were fifteen hundred still living. Amongst those, four-hundred sixty-two were injured, both serious and minor. It was a narrow victory, a miraculous result, given their current state.
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The Muozinel Army that retreated left their food and fuel. Because the money and goods they plundered remained as well, they were divided amongst the soldiers and the people.
 
The Muozinel Army that retreated left their food and fuel. Because the money and goods they plundered remained as well, they were divided amongst the soldiers and the people.
   
Gerard had not played an active part on the battlefield, but he fully demonstrated his talents. While the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} secured the supplies, he was able to efficiently distribute the food and fuel so it would last until they arrived in Territoire.
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Gerard had not played an active part on the battlefield, but he fully demonstrated his talents. While the [Silver Meteor Army] secured the supplies, he was able to efficiently distribute the food and fuel so it would last until they arrived in Territoire.
   
 
“So we have no choice but to send them to Territoire?”
 
“So we have no choice but to send them to Territoire?”

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