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Kreshu ordered the seventh army to retreat.
 
Kreshu ordered the seventh army to retreat.
   
The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} and the Olmutz Army did not miss the retreat of the seventh unit, and followed closely afterward. At that time, the sixth unit quickly changed direction and moved forward rapidly.
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The [Silver Meteor Army] and the Olmutz Army did not miss the retreat of the seventh unit, and followed closely afterward. At that time, the sixth unit quickly changed direction and moved forward rapidly.
   
 
“So it really has come to that..!”
 
“So it really has come to that..!”
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Tigre let out a deep breath as he glared at the sixth army moving in a distance. He did not have the spare time to wipe his sweat or clear away the blood of the defeated. His dull red hair had solidified in a strange shape.
 
Tigre let out a deep breath as he glared at the sixth army moving in a distance. He did not have the spare time to wipe his sweat or clear away the blood of the defeated. His dull red hair had solidified in a strange shape.
   
Tigre ordered the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}, consisting of only one thousand Brune soldiers, to watch for the movements of the sixth army. It was within expectations.
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Tigre ordered the [Silver Meteor Army], consisting of only one thousand Brune soldiers, to watch for the movements of the sixth army. It was within expectations.
   
 
Instead of attacking from the front with the seventh unit, Kreshu ordered the sixth unit to take a small detour from the side. Their aim was to kill the leaders, Ludmira and Tigre.
 
Instead of attacking from the front with the seventh unit, Kreshu ordered the sixth unit to take a small detour from the side. Their aim was to kill the leaders, Ludmira and Tigre.
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Only a few hundred Brune soldiers continued to attack, but they were sporadic. In the end, they could not meet expectations.
 
Only a few hundred Brune soldiers continued to attack, but they were sporadic. In the end, they could not meet expectations.
   
The sixth army from Muozinel was attacking the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} and Olmutz Army from the flank, as well. The violent force stopped Ludmira and Tigre's movements.
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The sixth army from Muozinel was attacking the [Silver Meteor Army] and Olmutz Army from the flank, as well. The violent force stopped Ludmira and Tigre's movements.
   
 
“Just one more step...!”
 
“Just one more step...!”
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The horses were killed, forcing the men off their steeds. They were overwhelmed by the surrounding people as they tried to stand up against the weight of their armor.
 
The horses were killed, forcing the men off their steeds. They were overwhelmed by the surrounding people as they tried to stand up against the weight of their armor.
   
The {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}} and the Olmutz Army were being blocked by the sixth unit and could not rush to cover the Knights.
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The [Silver Meteor Army] and the Olmutz Army were being blocked by the sixth unit and could not rush to cover the Knights.
   
 
How many times had they been cornered? They may not have survived the first wave if not for their surprise attack. It took a good General to bring the Knights to defeat.
 
How many times had they been cornered? They may not have survived the first wave if not for their surprise attack. It took a good General to bring the Knights to defeat.

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