Editing Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 05 Chapter 1 - MTL

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Picking up the short spear leaning against her bed, Mira stroked the tip lovingly. The spear let out small crystals of ice, giving the room a mystical atmosphere.
 
Picking up the short spear leaning against her bed, Mira stroked the tip lovingly. The spear let out small crystals of ice, giving the room a mystical atmosphere.
   
The Frozen Wave was a weapon whose possession was permitted only to the Vanadis. It was a {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} with the power to manipulate the cold.
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The Frozen Wave was an arm whose possession was permitted only to the Vanadis. It was a {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}} with the power to manipulate the cold.
   
 
“But if I do indeed look so cold, would you care to warm me up?”
 
“But if I do indeed look so cold, would you care to warm me up?”
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Her dress fluttered softly, and, like a fairy dancing in the wind, she landed gently. Even when her shoes adorned with red roses contacted with the floor, there was no sound elicited.
 
Her dress fluttered softly, and, like a fairy dancing in the wind, she landed gently. Even when her shoes adorned with red roses contacted with the floor, there was no sound elicited.
   
She took one step, two steps, her pure smile still on her face. Even when standing before Tigre's bed, he did not wake up.
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She took one step, two step, her pure smile still on her face. Even when standing before Tigre's bed, he did not wake up.
   
 
No matter how tired he was, he would wake up immediately with any signs of excitement or hostility, and he would react to any sense of insecurity. His longtime hunting instincts forged through the battlefield would immediately rouse him from his rest.
 
No matter how tired he was, he would wake up immediately with any signs of excitement or hostility, and he would react to any sense of insecurity. His longtime hunting instincts forged through the battlefield would immediately rouse him from his rest.

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