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“Is it morning already...?”
 
“Is it morning already...?”
   
The warble of a crow could be heard from beyond the open window. Tigre spoke to himself with an exhausted voice. Having worked for two days straight, he was approaching his limit. His dull red hair was disordered from his habit of running his hand through it. Dark circles were faintly visible under his eyes.
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The warble of a crow was heard from beyond the open window. Tigre spoke to himself with an exhausted voice. He had worked continuously since two days ago, so he was approaching his limit. His dull red hair was disordered from his habit of running his hand through it. Dark circles were faintly visible under his eyes.
   
 
“Tigre. You should sleep until the war council later today.”
 
“Tigre. You should sleep until the war council later today.”
   
Massas, who had been helping him, could no longer endure and spoke up. Tigre, without pretense, stood up sleepily and rubbed his eyelids.
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Massas, who had been helping him, could no longer endure and spoke up. Tigre, without bluffing, stood up sleepily and rubbed his eyelids.
   
 
“I'll accept your kind offer. Will you be fine, Lord Massas?”
 
“I'll accept your kind offer. Will you be fine, Lord Massas?”
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After the invading Muozinel Army retreated, many aristocrats offered to cooperate with their private armies, and many merchants proposed a variety of transactions. Along with the interviews, negotiations, and reorganization of the soldiers, there was a fair amount of paperwork required for him to go through.
 
After the invading Muozinel Army retreated, many aristocrats offered to cooperate with their private armies, and many merchants proposed a variety of transactions. Along with the interviews, negotiations, and reorganization of the soldiers, there was a fair amount of paperwork required for him to go through.
   
Besides the aid of Massas, who was present now, Tigre would have broken down from overwork long ago if Limlisha and Gerard were not there to help.
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Though Massas was present now, Tigre would have broken down from overwork long ago if Limlisha and Gerard were not there to help.
   
 
Tigre began to stagger out of the office when Massas called him back.
 
Tigre began to stagger out of the office when Massas called him back.
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Many tents and horses surrounded the fortress of Perucche, but they were not allowed entry into the castle. Amongst them were aristocrats at odds with each other. Furthermore, there were soldiers of Zhcted as well.
 
Many tents and horses surrounded the fortress of Perucche, but they were not allowed entry into the castle. Amongst them were aristocrats at odds with each other. Furthermore, there were soldiers of Zhcted as well.
   
Having so many people with poor relations with one another in close proximity would inevitably lead to trouble. Thus far, Tigre and the others did their best to arrange them to avoid such an outcome.
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Many people with poor relations with one another were in close proximity which would inevitably lead to trouble. Tigre and the others did their best to arrange them to avoid such an event happening.
   
 
''--- I guess there's no other way...''
 
''--- I guess there's no other way...''

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