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“Sorry, sorry. Well, I'm fine like this. You were worrying too much. Are you feeling better?”
 
“Sorry, sorry. Well, I'm fine like this. You were worrying too much. Are you feeling better?”
   
Ellen waved gently with an unapologetic smile after seeing Lim sulk. Those words were directed toward both her subordinate and the blue-haired Vanadis. Mira turned away and let out a small noise.
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Ellen waved gently with an unapologetic smile seeing Lim sulk. Those words were directed toward both her subordinate and the blue-haired Vanadis. Mira turned away and let out a small noise.
   
 
When the women finished bathing, they returned to the camp. They headed to the Commander's tent. The smell of alcohol and milk coming from the camp grounds stimulated their appetite.
 
When the women finished bathing, they returned to the camp. They headed to the Commander's tent. The smell of alcohol and milk coming from the camp grounds stimulated their appetite.
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Ellen asked with folded arms, and Regin responded while thoroughly searching her memory.
 
Ellen asked with folded arms, and Regin responded while thoroughly searching her memory.
   
“There are three passages that enter the Sacred Grounds of the Palace. One is in the center of Artishem. Another is in the small temple of Mosha, the Goddess of Mother Earth to the southeast of Artishem. The third is at a cemetery in the east end of the city.”
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“There are three passages that enter the Sacred Grounds of the Palace. One is in the center of Artishem. Another is in a small temple to Mosha, the Goddess of Mother Earth to the southeast of Artishem. The third is at a cemetery in the east end of the city.”
   
 
“The temple of Mosha would be closest to our position.”
 
“The temple of Mosha would be closest to our position.”

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