Editing Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 07 Chapter 1

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The arrow drew the orbit of a mountain, and flew as it were sucked towards the enemy squad who were set up with longbows. It went and pierced the forehead of one soldier. When that soldier fell down, confusion began to spread among the other soldiers.
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The arrow drew the orbit of a mountain, and flew as it were sucked towards the enemy squad who were set up eith longbows. It went pierced the forehead of one soldier. When that soldier fell down, confusion spread among the other soldiers.
   
 
Tigre, without particularly showing joy, like a craftsman, who kept working silently, nocked a new arrow to the bow. It was not as if he was aiming at random. His aim was set.
 
Tigre, without particularly showing joy, like a craftsman, who kept working silently, nocked a new arrow to the bow. It was not as if he was aiming at random. His aim was set.

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