Editing Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 07 Chapter 1

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“There’s no way that soldiers would be deployed in a place like this. Or even if they were deployed, only a small number of people would be able to effortlessly break through. Honestly, even I don’t want to clash with an enemy ten times superior in number. Even if it’s possible to win because the enemy is tired from the forced march.”
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“There’s no way that soldiers would be deployed in a place like this. Or even if they were deployed, only a small number of people would be able to effortlessly break through. Honestly, even I don’t want to clash with an enemy ten times superior in number. Even if it’s possible to win because the enemy will be tired by the forced march.”
   
If they misread the level of enemy exhaustion, they would be easily repelled. If they did not act carefully, they could be surrounded in a flash and destroyed. It was far too dangerous to bet on it.
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If they misread the degree of exhaustion of the enemy, they would be easily repelled. If they did not act carefully, they could be surrounded in a flash and destroyed. It was far too dangerous to bet on it.
   
As Elliot judged and anticipated that there would be no more than ten thousand enemies ahead of their route, there was no doubt that they were advancing at a surprisingly tremendous speed. Tigre could not help shivering. Though not to the extent of using swords, the smoke of war had already begun.
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As Elliot judged so and anticipated that there would be no enemy numbered more than ten thousand ahead of their route, there was no doubt that they were advancing at a surprising tremendous speed. Tigre could not help shivering. Though not to the extent of using swords, the smoke of war has already begun.
   
Tigre quickly took a pen and paper and wrote a letter. Then he called a messenger.
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Tigre quickly took pen and paper and wrote a letter. Then he called a messenger.
   
“Return quickly to Fort Lux and give this to Ludra-dono.”
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“Return quickly to the Fort Lux now, and give this to Ludra-dono.”
   
The messenger, who had received the letter, carefully put it in his breast pocket, bowed and left.
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The messenger who had received the letter, carefully put it in his breast pocket, bowed and left.
   
Olga and Matvey, who were waiting behind Tigre, looked at each other. Since he did not verbally pass the message, it meant that the contents were not addressed to the soldiers. Thinking whether or not it might have anything to do with the night attack scheduled to begin after this, Olga asked hesitantly.
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Olga and Matvey, who were waiting behind Tigre, looked at each other. Since he did not verbally pass the message, it meant that the content was not addressed to the soldiers. Thinking whether or not it might have anything to do with the night attack scheduled to begin after this, Olga asked hesitantly.
   
 
“What about the night attack?”
 
“What about the night attack?”
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“We will do it.”
 
“We will do it.”
   
Tigre briefly asserted to show his determination.
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Tigre briefly asserted so to show his determination.
   
 
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