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The sky was clear blue, and under the glittering sun, the sea was boundlessly spreading with vividness as if melting the jasper<ref> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jasper </ref>. The fleet of Lebus appeared from the other side of the sea.
 
The sky was clear blue, and under the glittering sun, the sea was boundlessly spreading with vividness as if melting the jasper<ref> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jasper </ref>. The fleet of Lebus appeared from the other side of the sea.
   
Similarly, the warships of Lebus were composed of two types of ships like Legnica, that’s, the small galley ships and the large galley ships. Although the details were different, they were not that much different in terms of performance (efficiency).
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Similarly, the warships of Lebus were composed of two types of ships like Legnica, that’s, the small galley ships and the large galley ships. Although the details were different, they were not that much different in term of performance (efficiency).
   
 
The flagship of the Lebus troops was a small galley ship called “Margarita”. Unlike in Legnica, which often used the name of animals, in Lebus female names were mainly given to ships.
 
The flagship of the Lebus troops was a small galley ship called “Margarita”. Unlike in Legnica, which often used the name of animals, in Lebus female names were mainly given to ships.
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Sasha’s reply considered the other party’s viewpoint. If she did not feel the need, she would just have cut in by saying “it’s impossible”.
 
Sasha’s reply considered the other party’s viewpoint. If she did not feel the need, she would just have cut in by saying “it’s impossible”.
   
“But, in that case, they would then throw away their advantage of large army. Furthermore, they would expose their back and flank to us, who are chasing them in return. Also, if the enemy number is around ten ships, they would probably be being held in the port town. We should just advance while crushing each one of them.”
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“But, in that case, they would then throw away their advantage of large army. Furthermore, they would expose their back and flank to us, who are chasing them in return. Also, if the enemy number is around ten ships, they would probably being held in the port town. We should just advance while crushing each one of them.”
   
 
The captain of Lebus shook his big body and groaned, and Elizavetta from the side butted in.
 
The captain of Lebus shook his big body and groaned, and Elizavetta from the side butted in.
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What broke it was the reaction of Elizavetta, who could not hide her amazement. Sasha and Matvey looked at each other so as to say that her expression was understandable. But, they could not afford to end the talk like this.
 
What broke it was the reaction of Elizavetta, who could not hide her amazement. Sasha and Matvey looked at each other so as to say that her expression was understandable. But, they could not afford to end the talk like this.
   
“I didn’t say this to surprise (scare) or deceive you. There is no helping if you hear so, but it is true.”
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“I don’t say this to surprise (scare) or deceive you. There is no helping if you hear so, but it is true.”
   
 
Sasha winked at Matvey next to her. It was for this purpose that she had him to be there since the war council.
 
Sasha winked at Matvey next to her. It was for this purpose that she had him to be there since the war council.
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What was deployed there was, like earlier, a merciless infringement by Valitsaif. Moreover, since the pirates here were already crossing blades with the Lebus soldiers, it became the form where they were incessantly attacked from two directions.
 
What was deployed there was, like earlier, a merciless infringement by Valitsaif. Moreover, since the pirates here were already crossing blades with the Lebus soldiers, it became the form where they were incessantly attacked from two directions.
   
Elizavetta wielded her black whip and continually created a bloody wind on the deck. The morale of the Lebus soldiers, who saw her figure, increased more and more and the pirates saw their number decreasing very fast.
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Elizavetta wielded her black whip and continually createda bloody wind on the deck. The morale of the Lebus soldiers, who saw her figure, increased more and more and the pirates saw their number decreasing very fast.
   
 
However, Elizavetta, more than the control, had her attention focused on another thing. Though she boarded the ship from the port <ref> here means the left side of the ship </ref>, she crossed the deck straight ahead while kicking about the pirates and headed to the starboard.
 
However, Elizavetta, more than the control, had her attention focused on another thing. Though she boarded the ship from the port <ref> here means the left side of the ship </ref>, she crossed the deck straight ahead while kicking about the pirates and headed to the starboard.
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“Well done.”
 
“Well done.”
   
Elizavetta praised the captain’s judgment. The Lebus troops had already divided their force in two. Further dividing their force here was dangerous.
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Elizavetta praised the captain’s judgment. The Lebus troops had already divided their force in two. To further dividing their force here was dangerous.
   
 
While the {{furigana|Flash Princess of the Thunder Swirl|Isgrifa}} was checking the situation, five pirate ships were brought under control one after another. The Lebus troops which were here were fifteen ships. So, it was respectively three warships against one pirate ship. In addition, there was also Elizavetta who literally showed the ability of being a match for a thousand.
 
While the {{furigana|Flash Princess of the Thunder Swirl|Isgrifa}} was checking the situation, five pirate ships were brought under control one after another. The Lebus troops which were here were fifteen ships. So, it was respectively three warships against one pirate ship. In addition, there was also Elizavetta who literally showed the ability of being a match for a thousand.
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While standing at the prow of the Margarita and glaring at the enemy who gradually increased and her ships allies, Elizavetta spoke bitterly.
 
While standing at the prow of the Margarita and glaring at the enemy who gradually increased and her ships allies, Elizavetta spoke bitterly.
   
“We were splendidly outwitted; to think that they easily abandoned their allies. I should say it’s as expected of the pirates.”
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“We were splendidly outwitted; to think that they easily abandon their allies. I should say it’s as expected of the pirates.”
   
 
The distance to the enemy ships narrowed. If they advanced straight like that, they would probably strike the squad led by Moritz from the side or behind. However, Elizavetta gave an order other than advancing.
 
The distance to the enemy ships narrowed. If they advanced straight like that, they would probably strike the squad led by Moritz from the side or behind. However, Elizavetta gave an order other than advancing.
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“––{{furigana|Burn and Split Heaven and Earth|Gron Lazriga}}!”
 
“––{{furigana|Burn and Split Heaven and Earth|Gron Lazriga}}!”
   
Nine flashes of lightning growled and burst in the pirate ships and lightning illuminated the area. A huge column of water blew up along with a thunderous sound, and poured down over the pirate ships and the Margarita in a rain of sea water containing a large quantity of wood chips. Screams rose from the pirate ships and many sounds of water followed it.
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Nine flashes of lightning growled and burst in the pirate ships and lightning illuminated the are. A huge column of water blew up along with a thunderous sound, and poured down over the pirate ships and the Margarita in a rain of sea water containing a large quantity of wood chips. Screams rose from the pirate ships and many sounds of water followed it.
   
 
The time that lightning melted in the air and that the humans’ eyes recovered the view of the surroundings, the stern of the pirate ships were greatly destroyed and were sinking with a tremendous force.
 
The time that lightning melted in the air and that the humans’ eyes recovered the view of the surroundings, the stern of the pirate ships were greatly destroyed and were sinking with a tremendous force.
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The next moment, the redhead pirate’s view made an about-turn. The dagger cut the sky and Gerhard’s big frame was slammed on the deck.
 
The next moment, the redhead pirate’s view made an about-turn. The dagger cut the sky and Gerhard’s big frame was slammed on the deck.
   
As Elizavetta who did not even try to avoid the dagger extended her empty left hand and casually grabbed Gerhard’s face, she dragged it down with all her might. Not by destroying his balance to make him fall down, but with physical strength and grip.
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As Elizavetta who did not even trying to avoid the dagger extended her empty left hand and casually grabbed Gerhard’s face, she dragged it down with all her might. Not by destroying his balance to make him fall down, but with physical strength and grip.
   
 
It was an unbelievable strength enough to make one think that even the term “superhuman” was somewhat kind to describe it with. Gerhard’s big frame covered with muscles was heavy to the extent that it would be difficult even for an adult to lift it. But a young girl who had not yet reached 20-year-old managed it with one hand.
 
It was an unbelievable strength enough to make one think that even the term “superhuman” was somewhat kind to describe it with. Gerhard’s big frame covered with muscles was heavy to the extent that it would be difficult even for an adult to lift it. But a young girl who had not yet reached 20-year-old managed it with one hand.
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“This is as far as I can go, huh… I would not even be able to apologize for letting the soldiers and sailors entrusted to me by Vanadis-sama die”
 
“This is as far as I can go, huh… I would not even be able to apologize for letting the soldiers and sailors entrusted to me by Vanadis-sama die”
   
On board a ship which can no longer keep fighting with the fire, Zaul regretted. While the rain of arrows poured incessantly, he ordered to his remaining subordinates to take down all the boats for operation on the reef. And then, that they picked up the soldier and sailors on them and escaped to the sea as far as possible.
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On board a ship which no longer keep fighting with the fire, Zaul regretted. While the rain of arrows poured incessantly, he ordered to his remaining subordinates to take down all the boats for operation on the reef. And then, that they picked up the soldier and sailors on them and escaped to the sea as far as possible.
   
 
However, he himself would remain to the end and share the same fate with the burning ship. The time that his body disappeared within the flames, it was said that more than thirty arrows were stuck to his body.
 
However, he himself would remain to the end and share the same fate with the burning ship. The time that his body disappeared within the flames, it was said that more than thirty arrows were stuck to his body.
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There were only two remaining ships on the pirate side, but both, full of damages, were no longer in a state to fight.
 
There were only two remaining ships on the pirate side, but both, full of damages, were no longer in a state to fight.
   
Above all else, due to the lost of their commander Albert, they were not able to decide how they should move.
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Above all else, due to the lost of their commander Albert, they were not able decide how they should move.
   
 
As they pulled up their comrades who were floating on the sea surface, based on the talk between those who were playing the supporting role, they arrived at the conclusion to observe a good time and join with their allies. Then, they began to move slowly.<!-- 主だった者たちで話しあい、頃合いを見て味方と合流しようという結論を出す。-->
 
As they pulled up their comrades who were floating on the sea surface, based on the talk between those who were playing the supporting role, they arrived at the conclusion to observe a good time and join with their allies. Then, they began to move slowly.<!-- 主だった者たちで話しあい、頃合いを見て味方と合流しようという結論を出す。-->

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