Editing Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 09 Chapter 2

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“But, I…”
 
“But, I…”
   
“If you don’t run away first, I won’t be able to escape, depending on the situation. Besides, it’d be better that there is no ally around in order for Vanadis-sama to wield her whip.”
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“If you don’t run away first, I won’t be able to escape. Depending on the situation. Besides, it’d be better that there is no ally around in order for Vanadis-sama to wield her whip.”
   
Naum said in a tone which posed as a joke. While Urz was wondering to what extent he was serious, the distance between Elizavetta and Ilda was shortening.
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Naum said in a tone which posed as a joke. While Urz was wondering to what extent he was serious, the distance Elizavetta and Ilda was shortening.
   
 
“Vanadis-dono. I thank you for accepting a discussion in spite of such time. I would like to ask without delay, but why are you here?”
 
“Vanadis-dono. I thank you for accepting a discussion in spite of such time. I would like to ask without delay, but why are you here?”
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“I understand your feelings.”
 
“I understand your feelings.”
   
When Elizavetta asked Ilda the name of his attendant, she prayed to the gods for the dead soul to rest in peace. Ilda deeply bowed with a sad look.
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When Elizavetta asked Ilda the name of his attendant, she prayed to the gods for the dead’s soul to rest in peace. Ilda deeply bowed with a sad look.
   
 
“I thank you for praying for my attendant.”
 
“I thank you for praying for my attendant.”

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