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==Act 4==
 
==Act 4==
   
“I want to meet a Blacksmith called Azu Bahash.”
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“I want to meet a blacksmith called Azu Bahash.”
   
 
Kusla shoved the Guild door aside without knocking, and stormed in, finding a man standing in front of the leader’s table. His hair had the flair of a Knight, but his clothing was like a bandit’s.
 
Kusla shoved the Guild door aside without knocking, and stormed in, finding a man standing in front of the leader’s table. His hair had the flair of a Knight, but his clothing was like a bandit’s.
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He was lanky, but it appeared he was strong.
 
He was lanky, but it appeared he was strong.
   
<i>A Blacksmith, huh?</i> Right when Kusla deduced this quietly, a young voice could be heard from the side.
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<i>A blacksmith, huh?</i> Right when Kusla deduced this quietly, a young voice could be heard from the side.
   
 
“Dickens.”
 
“Dickens.”
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“Were you rather free over the past two days? Now then? What are you here for?”
 
“Were you rather free over the past two days? Now then? What are you here for?”
   
“I want to meet the Blacksmith called Azu Bahash.”
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“I want to meet the blacksmith called Azu Bahash.”
   
 
Kusla said as he approached the duty desk.
 
Kusla said as he approached the duty desk.
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Irine appeared to be collating the account books, and a large ledger was laid out in front of her.
 
Irine appeared to be collating the account books, and a large ledger was laid out in front of her.
   
“I don’t remember a Blacksmith with such a name around here.”
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“I don’t remember a blacksmith with such a name around here.”
   
 
“Really? But it was said there was such a person.”
 
“Really? But it was said there was such a person.”
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“Go back.”
 
“Go back.”
   
In this town, where the leader was not respected, the Blacksmiths would not be sweating hard.
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In this town, where the leader was not respected, the blacksmiths would not be sweating hard.
   
 
Dickens probably had an eye for the young widow Irine. One had to wonder whether he was captivated by her personality, or allured by the authority that Irine inherited from Brunner.
 
Dickens probably had an eye for the young widow Irine. One had to wonder whether he was captivated by her personality, or allured by the authority that Irine inherited from Brunner.
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But after a little pondering, Kusla shrugged, and muttered in his heart, whatever,
 
But after a little pondering, Kusla shrugged, and muttered in his heart, whatever,
   
“About the refining process, how it is like, I was informed of this without missing out on anything. The Blacksmiths in this town are really helpful.”
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“About the refining process, how it is like, I was informed of this without missing out on anything. The blacksmiths in this town are really helpful.”
   
 
Irine merely frowned, her face not showing too drastic a change.
 
Irine merely frowned, her face not showing too drastic a change.
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“Those men only think for their own sakes.”
 
“Those men only think for their own sakes.”
   
Ings and the others never cared of the pride of a Blacksmith, and never respected the Guild when they told Kusla the matter of Damascus steel. All they cared about was their own profits.
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Ings and the others never cared of the pride of a blacksmith, and never respected the Guild when they told Kusla the matter of Damascus steel. All they cared about was their own profits.
   
 
“I’m the same too.”
 
“I’m the same too.”
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“Oh?”
 
“Oh?”
   
Kusla immediately reached his arm out to grab Irine by her shirt. He assumed she would be a little intimidated, but even if it was figurative, this person in front of him was the leader of a bunch of stubborn Blacksmiths.
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Kusla immediately reached his arm out to grab Irine by her shirt. He assumed she would be a little intimidated, but even if it was figurative, this person in front of him was the leader of a bunch of stubborn blacksmiths.
   
 
The moist eyes remained undaunted as they stared at Kusla.
 
The moist eyes remained undaunted as they stared at Kusla.
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“…”
 
“…”
   
“If we have a way to create Damascus Steel, why aren’t we doing so? It’s because such a thing doesn’t exist now! Do you know how foolish an Alchemist and those dolts who don’t understand the honor of a Blacksmith look seeking an art that doesn’t exist? Robert will be laughing with me in his grave!”
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“If we have a way to create Damascus Steel, why aren’t we doing so? It’s because such a thing doesn’t exist now! Do you know how foolish an Alchemist and those dolts who don’t understand the honor of a blacksmith look seeking an art that doesn’t exist? Robert will be laughing with me in his grave!”
   
 
The distance between Kusla and Irine was enough for the former to land a fist at the latter’s delicate chin.
 
The distance between Kusla and Irine was enough for the former to land a fist at the latter’s delicate chin.
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“So in other words, you’re checking on where those who know about Damascus Steel come from?”
 
“So in other words, you’re checking on where those who know about Damascus Steel come from?”
   
Kusla assumed that the immigrant Blacksmiths would make use of Damascus Steel to migrate, and started investigating from Irine. However, Weyland started off somewhere else.
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Kusla assumed that the immigrant blacksmiths would make use of Damascus Steel to migrate, and started investigating from Irine. However, Weyland started off somewhere else.
   
 
Kusla believed that if he put some thought into it, he would ultimately come up with such a way, but he did not know if he could do so immediately.
 
Kusla believed that if he put some thought into it, he would ultimately come up with such a way, but he did not know if he could do so immediately.
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Most of the were concentrated at the North, and some were at the East, with a few at a southwestern island. Unexpectedly however, none of them came from the desert region that produced the mythical Damascus Steel.
 
Most of the were concentrated at the North, and some were at the East, with a few at a southwestern island. Unexpectedly however, none of them came from the desert region that produced the mythical Damascus Steel.
   
“This is actually a Pagan town, and I don’t think the Blacksmiths are willingly gathered here, leisurely building the town. The Crusade began not too long ago at that time, and the resistance back then should be strong beyond our imaginations. Leaving aside the Knights and Mercenaries, the Blacksmiths were probably gathered in masses here, prepared for a fight to the death. It’s not impossible that they just want to monopolize wealth.”
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“This is actually a Pagan town, and I don’t think the blacksmiths are willingly gathered here, leisurely building the town. The Crusade began not too long ago at that time, and the resistance back then should be strong beyond our imaginations. Leaving aside the Knights and Mercenaries, the blacksmiths were probably gathered in masses here, prepared for a fight to the death. It’s not impossible that they just want to monopolize wealth.”
   
 
“So, naturally, we can kind of think that those people from Clazini are able to accumulate such wealth for some clear reason…”
 
“So, naturally, we can kind of think that those people from Clazini are able to accumulate such wealth for some clear reason…”
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“A secret art inherited from the workshop, or something? Doesn’t feel like it…”
 
“A secret art inherited from the workshop, or something? Doesn’t feel like it…”
   
“It’s a little troublesome, but I guess we have to investigate the Blacksmiths one by one, don’t we? It’s the easiest thing to start with.”
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“It’s a little troublesome, but I guess we have to investigate the blacksmiths one by one, don’t we? It’s the easiest thing to start with.”
   
 
Kusla said, and Fenesis recalled the conversation he had with Irine, watching him with tragic eyes.
 
Kusla said, and Fenesis recalled the conversation he had with Irine, watching him with tragic eyes.
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Ings seemed to have obtained his answer from the silence.
 
Ings seemed to have obtained his answer from the silence.
   
“Y-you said it… wh-why!? How do you expect me to have a footing in the Guild!? If news of me asking an Alchemist for help gets out there, I won’t be able to stand as a Blacksmith!”
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“Y-you said it… wh-why!? How do you expect me to have a footing in the Guild!? If news of me asking an Alchemist for help gets out there, I won’t be able to stand as a blacksmith!”
   
 
There was no one around in sight, but he actually yelled out loud on the road. Perhaps he had lost his marbles after all.
 
There was no one around in sight, but he actually yelled out loud on the road. Perhaps he had lost his marbles after all.
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Unlike that fool Ings, Sophites might appear demure, but there was a presence of an ancient lurking in him.
 
Unlike that fool Ings, Sophites might appear demure, but there was a presence of an ancient lurking in him.
   
The street, passing through the Blacksmiths’ area, was called the Rust Street; it was narrow, and the buildings on both sides were clustered, the passers-by having the refreshed looks of people who worked hard. Each household looked plain, and the fragrance of dinner lingering from every single one.
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The street, passing through the blacksmiths’ area, was called the Rust Street; it was narrow, and the buildings on both sides were clustered, the passers-by having the refreshed looks of people who worked hard. Each household looked plain, and the fragrance of dinner lingering from every single one.
   
 
It would require great courage to barge into another person’s daily life.
 
It would require great courage to barge into another person’s daily life.
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He knocked on the door, and called out the name.
 
He knocked on the door, and called out the name.
   
The passing Blacksmiths stared at Kusla in surprise, and then quickly hurried on.
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The passing blacksmiths stared at Kusla in surprise, and then quickly hurried on.
   
 
Kusla knocked again, and right when he was about to call out the name, he sensed movement behind the door.
 
Kusla knocked again, and right when he was about to call out the name, he sensed movement behind the door.
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Kusla sat down, and faced the dinner.
 
Kusla sat down, and faced the dinner.
   
“I guess this is to be expected of a Blacksmith capable of having his name recorded in the tax books. Quail for dinner, I suppose?”
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“I guess this is to be expected of a blacksmith capable of having his name recorded in the tax books. Quail for dinner, I suppose?”
   
 
[[Image:Magdala de Nemure 02 BW 14.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[Image:Magdala de Nemure 02 BW 14.jpg|thumb]]
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It was a simple meal, but so delicious that he was mesmerized.
 
It was a simple meal, but so delicious that he was mesmerized.
   
“So, for a Blacksmith’s standard, what do you think of this?”
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“So, for a blacksmith’s standard, what do you think of this?”
   
 
“You have still yet to talk about that.”
 
“You have still yet to talk about that.”
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No, he was actually smiling.
 
No, he was actually smiling.
   
Seated in front of Kusla was a Blacksmith who participated in the building of this town with his own skills, with strident conditions as compared to this point.
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Seated in front of Kusla was a blacksmith who participated in the building of this town with his own skills, with strident conditions as compared to this point.
   
 
Surely, before he was retired, he was utterly feared by his apprentices.
 
Surely, before he was retired, he was utterly feared by his apprentices.
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“How interesting, these words.”
 
“How interesting, these words.”
   
“That’s because I feel you’re different from the ordinary Blacksmiths. You have something very similar to us.”
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“That’s because I feel you’re different from the ordinary blacksmiths. You have something very similar to us.”
   
 
Sophites maintained the fake smile, and slowly turned his face away.
 
Sophites maintained the fake smile, and slowly turned his face away.
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Kusla was a little startled, and said,
 
Kusla was a little startled, and said,
   
“Irine said that those with dreams will never become good Blacksmiths.”
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“Irine said that those with dreams will never become good blacksmiths.”
   
 
“!”
 
“!”
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Sophites said, letting out a sear sigh.
 
Sophites said, letting out a sear sigh.
   
As expected, they did not get married due to lust, or to greed of personal wealth. Irine was fascinated by Robert Brunner’s skills, and for a Blacksmith, there was not anything greater than this.
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As expected, they did not get married due to lust, or to greed of personal wealth. Irine was fascinated by Robert Brunner’s skills, and for a blacksmith, there was not anything greater than this.
   
Thus, Irine was entrusted with this. Robert confided a ‘little’ wish to her– to protect this thing the Blacksmiths Robert and Sophites built up, and were proud of.
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Thus, Irine was entrusted with this. Robert confided a ‘little’ wish to her– to protect this thing the blacksmiths Robert and Sophites built up, and were proud of.
   
 
“Right now, I’m on my last legs. All I can do is to tell tales about turning lead into gold.”
 
“Right now, I’m on my last legs. All I can do is to tell tales about turning lead into gold.”
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“Out of her obsession for metal.”
 
“Out of her obsession for metal.”
   
<i>You have heard of such a line before, have you not?</i> The sly ex-Blacksmith’s eyes were giving a cheeky glint as he alluded to this.
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<i>You have heard of such a line before, have you not?</i> The sly ex-blacksmith’s eyes were giving a cheeky glint as he alluded to this.
   
 
“That girl herself probably wanted to migrate to Kazan, and may have thought that Damascus Steel is a way to fulfill this dream. It is a matter of whether she will cooperate, and that skill is basically that kind…”
 
“That girl herself probably wanted to migrate to Kazan, and may have thought that Damascus Steel is a way to fulfill this dream. It is a matter of whether she will cooperate, and that skill is basically that kind…”

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