Editing Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 11 Chapter 3

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The dome city Las Vegas was destroyed in a flash.
 
The dome city Las Vegas was destroyed in a flash.
   
The asphalt of the ground split. The ceiling of the dome was smashed and rained down. Buildings were torn up from small cracks.
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The asphalt of the ground split. The ceiling of the dome was smashed and rained down. Buildings were tore up from small cracks.
   
 
And then the asphalt’s crack, the ceiling’s crack, the cracks everywhere in the city ― from all the cracks, dozens of snakes were creeping out.
 
And then the asphalt’s crack, the ceiling’s crack, the cracks everywhere in the city ― from all the cracks, dozens of snakes were creeping out.

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