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Inevitably, the people that originally lived on the soil that became a Haunted Ground were evacuated.
 
Inevitably, the people that originally lived on the soil that became a Haunted Ground were evacuated.
   
Consequently, the longer the Haunted Ground was left alone, the harder it would be to control the situation.
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Like this, the longer the Haunted Ground was left alone, the harder it would be to control the situation.
   
The dispatching of the Knight Order prioritized urban areas at any cost while forest and mountain Haunted Grounds were lower priority and tend to be distributed as quests for Knight Academy's students.
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The dispatching of the Knight Order prioritized urban areas at any cost while forest and mountain Haunted Grounds were easily postponed and tend to be distributed as quests for Knight Academy's students.
   
 
Kazuki and Mio headed for the gate that served as the only entrance for the Haunted Ground. {{furigana|Ex-knight|Old person}} was standing guard at the gate to inspect the people that tried to enter the Haunted Ground.
 
Kazuki and Mio headed for the gate that served as the only entrance for the Haunted Ground. {{furigana|Ex-knight|Old person}} was standing guard at the gate to inspect the people that tried to enter the Haunted Ground.
   
"We were dispatched from the Knight Academy, please allow us to enter."
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"We were dispatched from the Knight Academy and came here, please allow us to enter."
   
 
"...Cheh, the academy brats huh. Moreover, only two came."
 
"...Cheh, the academy brats huh. Moreover, only two came."
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The guard spat out in a whisper and started the processing of Kazuki and Mio's entry.
 
The guard spat out in a whisper and started the processing of Kazuki and Mio's entry.
   
"Why doesn't the Knight Order come here themselves, they are making light of the refugees here. ...Then I'll start the scan, so let your magic power flow into your Stigma until it shines. Hm? What is this stigma?"
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"Why doesn't the Knight Order come here themselves, they are making light of the refugees here. ...Then I'll do the scan, so let your magic power flow into your Stigma until it shines. Hm? What is this stigma?"
   
 
The guard put his hand and scanned the magic light of the stigma at the back of Kazuki's hand with the <Scanner Device>. Next, Mio's stigma was also scanned by peeking at her neck from behind.
 
The guard put his hand and scanned the magic light of the stigma at the back of Kazuki's hand with the <Scanner Device>. Next, Mio's stigma was also scanned by peeking at her neck from behind.
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"Why are you saying things like that~!!"
 
"Why are you saying things like that~!!"
   
While advancing forward with Mio repeatedly hitting Kazuki, the scenery gradually changed into strange and crooked things. It was a country road that could exist anywhere, but it turned into wetlands filled with moisture, and the surrounding trees' colors changed into poisonous colors. The Demon Beasts' presences were starting to drift around in the surroundings.
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While advancing forward with Mio repeatedly hitting Kazuki, the scenery gradually changed into strange and crooked things. It was a country road that could exist anywhere, but it turned into wetlands filled with moisture, and the surrounding trees' color changed into poisonous colors. The Demon Beasts' presences were starting to drift around in the surroundings.
   
 
...And then, three hours later, Mio's flag splendidly became reality.
 
...And then, three hours later, Mio's flag splendidly became reality.
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"There... There is no way that I'll run, right!? Before, it was the rank E Kazuki who challenged me to a duel, and now it is you who is challenging me... Bring it on!"
 
"There... There is no way that I'll run, right!? Before, it was the rank E Kazuki who challenged me to a duel, and now it is you who is challenging me... Bring it on!"
   
Far from turning tail, Mio pointed her finger at Koyuki with her twin tails shaking.
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Far from turning tail, Mio pointed her finger at Koyuki with her twintails shaking.
   
 
"I'll finish you quick and easy, and prove that I am an appropriate A rank for sure!!"
 
"I'll finish you quick and easy, and prove that I am an appropriate A rank for sure!!"
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The students of Knight Academy could perform duels under the presence of the student council.
 
The students of Knight Academy could perform duels under the presence of the student council.
   
A duel was a mock battle performed under a safe rule, where if each side's magic power were reduced to zero then the attacks are stopped. Acknowledgement was needed from the student council president for the execution of the duel.
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A duel was a mock battle performed under a safe rule where if each other's magic power were shaved until zero then the attacks were stopped. Acknowledgement was needed from the student council president for the execution of the duel.
   
 
The student council president of {{furigana|Magic Division|Magika}}—— Kaguya-senpai, if it was her I thought she would stop this quarrel.
 
The student council president of {{furigana|Magic Division|Magika}}—— Kaguya-senpai, if it was her I thought she would stop this quarrel.
   
"Nnn... because when I heard the circumstances, I thought this was for the best?"
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"Nnn... because when I heard the circumstance, I thought this was for the best?"
   
 
"So you think that using the principle of strength to decide right and wrong is the best... right?"
 
"So you think that using the principle of strength to decide right and wrong is the best... right?"
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Kazuki, Liz Liza-sensei, and others were attending in the guest seats that surrounded the ground.
 
Kazuki, Liz Liza-sensei, and others were attending in the guest seats that surrounded the ground.
   
"...Amasaki Mio had made up her mind, huh. But to show whether she has the strength as a rank A or not, certainly this is the easiest method to understand that."
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"...Amasaki Mio had made up her mind, huh. But to show whether she has the strength as a rank A or not, certainly this is the easiest setup to understand that."
   
 
That was what sensei said. Because this duel was performed so suddenly, there were no other curious students that were watching.
 
That was what sensei said. Because this duel was performed so suddenly, there were no other curious students that were watching.
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"Well then... Begin!" With that cry, Hoshikaze-senpai pulled the trigger for the start of the duel.
 
"Well then... Begin!" With that cry, Hoshikaze-senpai pulled the trigger for the start of the duel.
   
Both Mio and Koyuki emitted their magic power's light at the same time and began the chanting of their spell.
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Both Mio and Koyuki emitted their magic power's light at the same time and began the chanting of a spell.
   
 
The one who finished her chant first was—— Koyuki. An avatar of a mermaid floated on her back.
 
The one who finished her chant first was—— Koyuki. An avatar of a mermaid floated on her back.
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The emerging icebergs soared fiercely into the sky towards the flying Mio in order to skewer her. Mio slammed her flame wings to oppose one of the icebergs assaulting her.
 
The emerging icebergs soared fiercely into the sky towards the flying Mio in order to skewer her. Mio slammed her flame wings to oppose one of the icebergs assaulting her.
   
Large scale destruction magics crashed into each other, flame and ice offset each other mutually.
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Large scale destruction magics crashed into each other, flame and ice offseted each other mutually.
   
 
"Mio-chan is really skilled at manipulating magic power from Astrum you know. If she falls into a pinch she is able to draw out a large amount of magic from Astrum."
 
"Mio-chan is really skilled at manipulating magic power from Astrum you know. If she falls into a pinch she is able to draw out a large amount of magic from Astrum."
   
The alternate world connected from the depth of the mental world—— Astrum. Enormous magic power at the root of a human's mind roiled in a whirlpool inside that world.
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The alternate world connected from the depth of the mental world—— Astrum. Enormous magic power at the root of a human's mind rolled in a whirlpool inside that world.
   
 
When a human's magic power reached the bottom, the person's mind could access Astrum and draw magic power from there. However if someone carelessly drew magic power from Astrum, that human's mind would be the one that was pulled into Astrum, and there would be a risk of fainting. That state was called <Magic Intoxication>.
 
When a human's magic power reached the bottom, the person's mind could access Astrum and draw magic power from there. However if someone carelessly drew magic power from Astrum, that human's mind would be the one that was pulled into Astrum, and there would be a risk of fainting. That state was called <Magic Intoxication>.
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While saying that Mio willfully pulled one of Kazuki's arms to the place where her head was located and used it as a pillow.
 
While saying that Mio willfully pulled one of Kazuki's arms to the place where her head was located and used it as a pillow.
   
The aroma of citrus fruit drifted from the honey colored hair with its twin tails unfastened. The body was covered by the pajama, but the cloth was thin, and a girl's softness could be felt from the location where their bodies touched each other. Sweet heat that tickled a man's instinct filled the night.
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The aroma of citrus fruit drifted from the honey colored hair with its twintails unfastened. The body was covered by the pajama, but the cloth was thin, and a girl's softness could be felt from the location where their bodies touched each other. Sweet heat that tickled a man's instinct filled the night.
   
 
"Wha, what is your intention, is this a test of my willpower as a swordsman, is that it?"
 
"Wha, what is your intention, is this a test of my willpower as a swordsman, is that it?"
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——Hearing those words, it was impossible for Kazuki to not be sympathetic.
 
——Hearing those words, it was impossible for Kazuki to not be sympathetic.
   
"I'm saying this myself, but... I was training in desperation, struggling to the death. Because I was recognized for my talent of magic. With the passage of time, an enigma appeared on me and I was skipping grades, but even so I didn't lose to my surroundings, and then I entered the magic division as an A rank..."
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"I'm saying this myself, but... I was training in desperation, struggling to the death. Because I was recognized for my talent of magic. On the way an enigma appeared on me and I was skipping grades, but even so I didn't lose to my surroundings, and then I entered the magic division as an A rank..."
   
 
Kazuki was also the same. For a long time he thought that his only worth was his talent in the sword, there was a time when he couldn't believe his step-father and Kanae's [love as a family].
 
Kazuki was also the same. For a long time he thought that his only worth was his talent in the sword, there was a time when he couldn't believe his step-father and Kanae's [love as a family].
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Both of them staggered around while in the position of embracing——for a while it looked like a complicated exchange of energy like when they were locking swords, but in the end both of them tumbled down onto the lawn.
 
Both of them staggered around while in the position of embracing——for a while it looked like a complicated exchange of energy like when they were locking swords, but in the end both of them tumbled down onto the lawn.
   
Blue light of defensive magic power burst out. Thanks to that there was no pain.
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Blue light of defensive magic power burst out. Thanks to it there was no pain.
   
 
Kazuki was wrapped with warmth and softness. When he opened his eyes, his head was buried into Hoshikaze-senpai’s chest that was covered with gym clothes. It was soft, a sweet aroma of a girl’s sweat tickled his nose.
 
Kazuki was wrapped with warmth and softness. When he opened his eyes, his head was buried into Hoshikaze-senpai’s chest that was covered with gym clothes. It was soft, a sweet aroma of a girl’s sweat tickled his nose.
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“————The strongest sword-style? You want to marry for the sake of strengthening the sword-style, is that it?”
 
“————The strongest sword-style? You want to marry for the sake of strengthening the sword-style, is that it?”
   
“Quite so. Both of ourselves<ref>If anyone want to edit Kohaku’s speech, keep in mind that her way of talking is quite archaic and polite.</ref> inherited ancient schools of sword-style used in real battle that are almost extinct in the present Japan. It can be said that it is our duty as the successors to advance this precious art, wouldn’t it?”
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“Quite so. Both of ourselves<ref>If anyone want to edit Kohaku’s speech, keep in mind that her way of talking is quite archaic and polite.</ref> inherited ancient schools of sword-style used in real battle that are almost extinct in the present Japan. It can be said that it is our duty as the successors to advance this precious art, couldn’t it?”
   
 
What the... To suddenly be proposed out of nowhere, for that kind of reason.
 
What the... To suddenly be proposed out of nowhere, for that kind of reason.
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“I can understand the talk about the school’s sake but... to decide a marriage partner based on that is not good. Marriage is for the sake of staying together with your truly important person for your whole life after all.”
 
“I can understand the talk about the school’s sake but... to decide a marriage partner based on that is not good. Marriage is for the sake of staying together with your truly important person for your whole life after all.”
   
Hoshikaze-senpai was nodding alongside Kazuki while saying “Yes, yes, just like that!”
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Hoshikaze-senpai was nodding along beside Kazuki while saying “Yes, yes, just like that!”
   
 
“Prioritizing free love rather than the sword-style... Kazuki-dono is unexpectedly a modern youth.”
 
“Prioritizing free love rather than the sword-style... Kazuki-dono is unexpectedly a modern youth.”
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“Certainly Hayashizaki-style is as important as my life... However, we must not advance the path of swords at the cost of people’s happiness. If we do that, you too will be hurt for sure.”
 
“Certainly Hayashizaki-style is as important as my life... However, we must not advance the path of swords at the cost of people’s happiness. If we do that, you too will be hurt for sure.”
   
“Hmm... If ourselves become husband and wife, one’s self doesn't think that ourselves will become that unhappy but... if that is Kazuki-dono’s sense of values then one’s self will act in accordance with that. If one’s self will wed with Kazuki-dono, then one’s self needs to go through the wall of free love! That is a field that one’s self is poor at, but there is nothing to be done about that!”
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“Hmm... If ourselves become husband and wife, one’s self doesn't think that ourselves will become that unhappy but... if that is Kazuki-dono’s sense of values then one’s self will act in accordance with that. If one’s self will wed with Kazuki-dono, then one’s self needs to go through the wall of free love! That is a field that one’s self is poor at, but there is nothing to be done other that!”
   
 
“Eh, you don’t have any intention to give up?”
 
“Eh, you don’t have any intention to give up?”

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