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Normally, it was a common magic that was rarely used because it was subtly inconvenient even though it appeared so.
 
Normally, it was a common magic that was rarely used because it was subtly inconvenient even though it appeared so.
   
First, sending a thought message to another party who didn’t open their heart, even if they sent it unilaterally, it would get deflected by <The Wall of Heart>. It couldn’t be done without informing the other party beforehand that a message would be sent.
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First, using a thought message to another party who didn’t open their heart, even if they sent it one-sidedly, would get it deflected by <The Wall of Heart>. It couldn’t be done without informing the other party beforehand that a message would be sent.
   
 
Moreover, when matching their consciousness and hearts with each other, not only the message, but even thoughts and emotions could flow on its own accord to the other party.
 
Moreover, when matching their consciousness and hearts with each other, not only the message, but even thoughts and emotions could flow on its own accord to the other party.
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“Why are you being added to the conquering targets!?”
 
“Why are you being added to the conquering targets!?”
   
“That ring…record my positivity level huh? Loki is proud of his eyes in appraising things. You see, that positivity level is the embodiment of the lending of our power in this united front, Onii-chan. I hope that this can be proof that there is no double-dealing in our cooperation with Onii-chan.”
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“That ring…recorded my positivity level huh? Loki is proud of his eyes in appraising things. You see, that positivity level is the embodiment of the lending of our power in this united front, Onii-chan. I hope that this can be proof that there is no double-dealing in our cooperation with Onii-chan.”
   
 
Certainly the ring acknowledged the existence of Kaya in front of him. If Loki was actually disguising himself as Kaya, then the ring shouldn’t show the value of positivity level of 50.
 
Certainly the ring acknowledged the existence of Kaya in front of him. If Loki was actually disguising himself as Kaya, then the ring shouldn’t show the value of positivity level of 50.
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“At first I was also scared because Loki drove me to the wall mentally to steal my flesh efficiently. I was made to think to kill various people. But now that I am already absorbed―it feels so good. The fools who obtained power according to their wishes, and in the end integrated with god or devil…that is not repulsive. In the first place, the humans that have a hand in illegal contracts were nothing but humans that pursued <Chaos> somewhere deep in their heart.”
 
“At first I was also scared because Loki drove me to the wall mentally to steal my flesh efficiently. I was made to think to kill various people. But now that I am already absorbed―it feels so good. The fools who obtained power according to their wishes, and in the end integrated with god or devil…that is not repulsive. In the first place, the humans that have a hand in illegal contracts were nothing but humans that pursued <Chaos> somewhere deep in their heart.”
   
“…What are you saying, chaos... is?”
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“…What are you saying, chaos was?”
   
 
She said that was Loki’s objective, but….
 
She said that was Loki’s objective, but….
   
“See, what is called Chaos is the other side of the Mythology. Illusions going toward sweet decadence, the desire and impulse of living things called humans that they can’t deny. If the gods on the front side of the mythology start to control humans with the thing called <Order>, then we, the gods of the opposing side will start to move seeking those things that belonged to Chaos!”
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“See, what is called Chaos is the other side of the Mythology. Illusions going toward sweet decadence, the desire and impulse of living things called humans that they can’t deny. If the gods on the front side of the mythology start to control humans with the thing called <Order>, then we, the gods of the reverse side will start to move seeking those things that belonged to Chaos!”
   
 
The gods of the front side that she mentioned―was she referring to the Mythology of the magic advanced countries that demanded faith?
 
The gods of the front side that she mentioned―was she referring to the Mythology of the magic advanced countries that demanded faith?
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Loki and Thor were both Divas from the Norse’s mythology.
 
Loki and Thor were both Divas from the Norse’s mythology.
   
It was even depicted in the mythology that both of them were [close] friends .
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It was even depicted in the mythology that both of them were completely [mutual close friends].
   
 
“The fundamental is for Onii-chan to endure the opponent’s close-quarter attack. There Onii-chan will obstruct her from chanting the spell for area-attack magic while also whittling her magic power. But if Thor succeeds in chanting high level magic, it’s already over at that point in time. That’s the lifeline.”
 
“The fundamental is for Onii-chan to endure the opponent’s close-quarter attack. There Onii-chan will obstruct her from chanting the spell for area-attack magic while also whittling her magic power. But if Thor succeeds in chanting high level magic, it’s already over at that point in time. That’s the lifeline.”
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Lotte whispered frailly like a flower petal that was scattered in the wind.
 
Lotte whispered frailly like a flower petal that was scattered in the wind.
   
That expression made Kazuki’s chest feel painfully tight.
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That expression made Kazuki’s chest feel painfully crushed.
   
 
“You are not a bother.”
 
“You are not a bother.”
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“…Why desu? For all that it’s my fault that we were attacked…”
 
“…Why desu? For all that it’s my fault that we were attacked…”
   
“Because I’m very happy that I met Lotte. The plus is much bigger than the minus, so don’t think that you are a bother. To not have any place to belong to anywhere in the world, you must not think such sad things.”
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“Because I’m so glad that I met Lotte. The plus is much bigger than the minus, so don’t think that you are a bother. To not have any place to belong to anywhere in the world, you must not think such sad things.”
   
 
Kazuki remembered the time when he was an orphan. Even that me was found by people who gave me a place to belong. Then I too, for this girl…
 
Kazuki remembered the time when he was an orphan. Even that me was found by people who gave me a place to belong. Then I too, for this girl…
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“Let’s go for a date. Just the two of us.”
 
“Let’s go for a date. Just the two of us.”
   
Immediately, blue spark scattered around Lotte and she understood Kazuki’s honest feelings.
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Immediately, blue spark scattered around Lotte and she undsrstood Kazuki’s honest feelings.
   
 
The cheek that was kept between Kazuki’s hand suddenly burned hotly.
 
The cheek that was kept between Kazuki’s hand suddenly burned hotly.
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A diva felt that galge was magnificent…?
 
A diva felt that galge was magnificent…?
   
“In short, this is the place where greed was materialized by the transcendence of material control using their mental activity…the human race does not need to be shackled by their flesh anymore regarding their sexual desire. The significance of flesh was eliminated in an ultimate civilization. The people who have their mind sublimated using this galge have transcended the concept of their flesh and transformed into hermaphroditic angels, though having said that is not an exaggeration at all. Like what was mentioned in Kabbalah, when the conclusion of the age of the Earth come and humans step into the age of the Ram. The most beautiful of the human race is already here! Lotte, let’s go buy a souvenir and return home.”
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“In short, this is the place where greed was materialized by the transcendence of material control using their mental activity…the human race does not need to be shackled by their flesh anymore regarding their sexual desire. The significance of flesh was eliminated in an ultimate civilization. The people who have their mind sublimated using this galge have transcended the concept of their flesh and transformed into hermaphroditic angels, though having said that is not an exaggeration at all. Like what was mentioned in Kabbalah, when the conclusion of the age of the Earth come and humans step into the age of the Ram. The most beautiful of the human race are already here! Lotte, let’s go buy one souvenir and return home.”
   
 
With tensions that looked completely like a drunk person, Prophet said some incomprehensible things.
 
With tensions that looked completely like a drunk person, Prophet said some incomprehensible things.
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“I somehow…have no other person I can rely other than Onii-san, so I’m scared of my own feelings desu. Somehow keeping like this, I want to cling to Onii-san so much…Is it really okay, for me to be spoiled by Onii-san…”
 
“I somehow…have no other person I can rely other than Onii-san, so I’m scared of my own feelings desu. Somehow keeping like this, I want to cling to Onii-san so much…Is it really okay, for me to be spoiled by Onii-san…”
   
Rather, Kazuki thought that Lotte is too over-conscious to the atmosphere of their surroundings.
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Rather, Kazuki thought that Lotte is too over-conscious to the expression of their surroundings.
   
 
Her telepathy magic might be a sad tendency, because it made her learn that there were only people that she couldn’t rely on around her.
 
Her telepathy magic might be a sad tendency, because it made her learn that there were only people that she couldn’t rely on around her.
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“All these devices just for the sake of playing…what a lovely pointlessness isn’t it?”
 
“All these devices just for the sake of playing…what a lovely pointlessness isn’t it?”
   
“Looks like it’s not the style of this town to consider playing as pointless. What kind of game shall we play?”
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“Looks like it’s not the style of this town to consider playing as pointless. What kind of game should we play?”
   
 
Without even a bit of hesitation, Lotte chose the gun-shooting zombie to the death action game that can be experienced in person.
 
Without even a bit of hesitation, Lotte chose the gun-shooting zombie to the death action game that can be experienced in person.
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With white and brown patterns characteristic of the Saint Bernard, it also had the trait of clever and friendly personality to humans. Saint Bernard was a type of dog that was large and strong, but there was nothing but puppies in this place.
 
With white and brown patterns characteristic of the Saint Bernard, it also had the trait of clever and friendly personality to humans. Saint Bernard was a type of dog that was large and strong, but there was nothing but puppies in this place.
   
The puppy that was just born not long ago had a cute and chubby face, its round eyes looked up to Kazuki with a sure-kill devilish cuteness. Kazuki couldn’t hold back anymore and finally “Shit, it’s cute! This animal…is super cute!”, he buried his face in the puppy to enjoy its fluffiness and smoothness like a man possessed.
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The puppy that was just born not long ago had a cute and chubby face, its round eyes looked up to Kazuki with a sure-kill devilish cuteness. Kazuki couldn’t hold back anymore and finally “Shit, it’s cute! This animal…is super cute!”, he buried his face to the puppy to enjoy its fluffiness and smoothness like a man possessed.
   
 
“Onii-san, I have finished changing!”
 
“Onii-san, I have finished changing!”
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“This is the best day in my life desu♪” Lotte was laughing while saying that.
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“This is the best day in my life desu♪” With those Lotte was laughing.
   
   
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Lotte's positivity level increased up to 80.
 
Lotte's positivity level increased up to 80.
   
It is possible to use Prophet’s magic up to level 3 with those numbers.
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It was possible to use Prophet’s magic up to level 3 with those numbers.
   
 
―Thus in the next day, Kazuki would face the fight of his destiny.
 
―Thus in the next day, Kazuki would face the fight of his destiny.

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