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A man-made underground labyrinth made from simple undressed concrete.
 
A man-made underground labyrinth made from simple undressed concrete.
   
There the number of the Demon Beasts was kept in fixed numbers and restrained from invading the surface, [a controlled Haunted Ground].
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There the number of the Demon Beasts was kept in fixed number and restrained from invading the surface, [a controlled Haunted Ground].
   
 
His [laboratory] existed inside that labyrinth.
 
His [laboratory] existed inside that labyrinth.
   
Even though it was closed off from the outside world, using the ether light rechargeable batteries that were brought in, electricity could be supplied, the inside of the charmless room was illuminated by pale light. The man sat down on the desk depending on that light and turned his face to the monitors. The monitors reflected the results of various research.
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Even though it was closed off from the outside world, using the ether light rechargeable batteries that were brought in, electricity could be supplied, the inside of the charmless room was illuminated by pale light. The man sat down on the desk depending on that light and turned his face to the monitors. The monitors reflected the result of various researches.
   
These were the compilation of all the things that he has performed in this underground for so long…
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These were the compilation of all the things that he has performed in this underground for a long time…
   
 
The fruits of all the unforgivable sins he had piled up.
 
The fruits of all the unforgivable sins he had piled up.
   
…He wouldn’t recognize such tripe like the [King of Solomon's 72 Pillars]. While vacantly staring at the fruits of his research, that man, Headmaster of the knight academy, Otonashi Tsukikurou thought once more.
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…He wouldn’t recognize such tripe like a King of Solomon 72 Pillar. While vacantly staring at the fruits of his researches, that man―Headmaster Otonashi of the knight academy, Otonashi Tsukikurou thought once more.
   
 
The one who governed the Knight Order should be a king of men brought forth by man’s own hand.
 
The one who governed the Knight Order should be a king of men brought forth by man’s own hand.
   
From that point the perfect army of Order was born. The foremost organization of the country, the Knight Order was not an organization that could be pulled left and right on the whim of Solomon's 72 Pillars.
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From that point the perfect army of Order was born. The foremost one organization of the country, the Knight Order was not an organization that could be pulled left and right on the whim of Solomon 72 Pillar.
   
For that purpose, he dirtied his hands in this underground with blasphemous research that should be despised.
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For that purpose, he dirtied his hand in this underground with blasphemous research that should be despised.
   
―Forcibly drawing out the power of Solomon's 72 Pillars, the Stigmata transplanting operation.
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―Drawing out the power of Solomon 72 Pillar forcefully, Stigmata’s transplanting operation.
   
―For the purpose of creating stronger Magica Stigma, the magic faculty expansion operation.
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―For the purpose of creating stronger Magica Stigma, magic faculty expansion operation.
   
He performed various human experiments. He witnessed many of the subjects' minds and flesh fall into destruction. Before he knew it, he didn’t feel anymore guilt.
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He performed various human experiments. He witnessed many of the subject’s mind and flesh fall into destruction. Before he knew it, he didn’t feel anymore guilt.
   
Due to these research projects, my beloved daughter will be sublimed as the King made by human hands. If it’s for that, I don’t mind how much ill repute I will leave in the future. The thought of the father who prayed for his daughter’s glory is a magnificent thing.
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Due to these researches, my beloved daughter will be sublimed as the King made by human’s hand. If it’s for that, I don’t mind how much ill repute I will leave in the future. The thought of the father who prayed for his daughter’s glory is a magnificent thing.
   
I don’t mind what happens to me.
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I don’t mind whatever happens to me.
   
There was nothing left to be added to his fruits of research that were projected on the monitors. He was only waiting for that time to come while watching them vacantly.
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There was nothing left to be added to his fruits of research that were projected in the monitors. He was only waiting for that time to come while watching the monitors vacantly.
   
 
The voice that led him to these researches whispered softly. That voice couldn’t be heard by ear, it echoed directly inside his cranium, a voice that nobody else knew.
 
The voice that led him to these researches whispered softly. That voice couldn’t be heard by ear, it echoed directly inside his cranium, a voice that nobody else knew.
   
Otonashi Tsukikurou could be said to possess self-confidence in his own sanity, but he was hearing the whispering voice and seeing the hallucination even right now. The avatar of an ominous figure was dancing boisterously inside his cranium.
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Otonashi Tsukikurou could be said to possess self-confidence in his own sanity, but he was hearing the whispering voice and seeing the hallucination even right now. An avatar of an ominous figure was dancing boisterously inside his cranium.
   
Sphinx that grew a human head, a man with pitch black skin holding a cane of snake in his hand and wearing a red robe, an ugly woman that swelled out like a blob of fat, a creature with countless tentacles that grew from its cone-shaped head…all of those had one common feature...[no face].
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Sphinx that grew a human head, a man with pitch black skin holding a cane of snake in hand and wearing a red robe, an ugly woman that swelled out like a blob of fat, a creature with countless tentacles that grew from its cone-shaped head…all of those had one common feature of [no face].
   
 
<Faceless God>―The Faceless God was whispering. The wisdom that Otonashi Tsukikurou sought out.
 
<Faceless God>―The Faceless God was whispering. The wisdom that Otonashi Tsukikurou sought out.
   
The Faceless God answered the prayer of Tsukikurou. However its method was deviating from human morals. But when Tsukikurou dirtied his own hands, he changed and didn’t mind whatever happened to him. For the sake of his noble goal, his guilt vanished like smoke.
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The Faceless God answered the prayer of Tsukikurou. However its method was deviating from human’s morals. But when Tsukikurou dirtied his own hands, he changed and didn’t mind whatever happened to him. For the sake of his noble goal, his guilt vanished like smoke.
   
 
Yellow lights were flickering inside his head, the avatar was dancing around in circles boisterously.
 
Yellow lights were flickering inside his head, the avatar was dancing around in circles boisterously.
   
His precious daughter―for Otonashi Kaguya to reign as King. The influence and prestige that he accumulated for his whole life, everything that he owned now would be passed on to that child. All the necessary arrangements in the Knight Order and the government had been finished for that purpose. When the foolish rabble’s greed were tickled and their fears were fanned, they could be manipulated easily. All the vested interests, and even the power of Solomon's 72 Pillars, everything would be passed on to the man-made King.
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His precious daughter―for Otonashi Kaguya to reign as King. The influence and prestige that he accumulated for his whole life, everything that he owned now would be passed on to that child. All the necessary arrangements in the Knight Order and the government had been finished for that purpose. When the foolish rabble’s greed were tickled and their fears were fanned, they could be manipulated easily. All the vested interests, and even the power of Solomon 72 Pillar, everything would be passed on to the man-made King.
   
 
…No, maybe he should say, to the parasite of the man-made King.
 
…No, maybe he should say, to the parasite of the man-made King.
   
Even more than the young man that Lemegeton chose, his precious daughter was far more appropriate as King. He would prove his daughter by his own hands. There was no factor that could make her lose even in the one in a thousand chances. As a father he must give a push to that glorious back. He was not insane…
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Even more than the young man that Lemegeton chose, his precious daughter was far more appropriate as King. He would prove his daughter by his own hand. There was no factor that could make her lose even in the one in a thousand chances. As a father he must give a push to that glorious back. He was not insane…
   
 
Otonashi Tsukikurou was staring at the displays vacantly while merely waiting for the time to pass.
 
Otonashi Tsukikurou was staring at the displays vacantly while merely waiting for the time to pass.
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Above the ground, it was a suitable time for the swordsmen to clash swords against each other. That sound could be heard even in his own ears.
 
Above the ground, it was a suitable time for the swordsmen to clash swords against each other. That sound could be heard even in his own ears.
   
The night where the curtain opened had come. It would not be long until the stars were right.
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The night where the curtain opened had came. It would not be long until the stars were right.
   
 
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