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When he opened his eyes, there was the sleeping face of Koyuki in front of his eyes.
 
When he opened his eyes, there was the sleeping face of Koyuki in front of his eyes.
   
(This was…that Hiakari-san was hugging me while half asleep!?)
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This was…that Hiakari-san was hugging me while half asleep!?
   
Kazuki fell into a light panic. However if he moved unskillfully he would wake her up. The outside of the window was still dark. Kazuki’s morning was early because of his habit as a swordsman to practice.
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Kazuki fell into a light panic. However if he moved unskillfully he would wake up the girl. The outside of the window was still dark. Kazuki’s morning was early because of his habit as a swordsman to practice.
   
Suddenly the rabbit plush doll that was placed on top of the bed in Koyuki’s room crossed his mind. The girl might have completely mistook Kazuki as her plush doll.
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Suddenly it crossed his head about the rabbit plush doll that was placed on top of the bed in Koyuki’s room. The girl might have mistook Kazuki completely as her plush doll.
   
 
“…zu, ki…”
 
“…zu, ki…”
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Koyuki was circling her hands around Kazuki’s neck, even now the distance between their lips were in almost touching range. Both of her legs were touching Kazuki’s body, she used her whole body in her embrace.
 
Koyuki was circling her hands around Kazuki’s neck, even now the distance between their lips were in almost touching range. Both of her legs were touching Kazuki’s body, she used her whole body in her embrace.
   
Across the thin pajamas, the undulation of Koyuki’s body and the sense of touch, everything was transmitted to him.
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Across the thin pajama, the undulation of Koyuki’s body and the sense of touch, everything was transmitted to him.
   
 
Kazuki’s right arm was thrust inside the triangle that was drawn from Koyuki’s thighs and nether region, there was a squishy feeling of ‘punipuni’ in his palm.
 
Kazuki’s right arm was thrust inside the triangle that was drawn from Koyuki’s thighs and nether region, there was a squishy feeling of ‘punipuni’ in his palm.
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Her white cheeks were soft and full with her smile, this time he poked those cheeks with his finger. The sleeping Koyuki was nuzzling her cheek against the poking finger. Somehow she looked so cute.
 
Her white cheeks were soft and full with her smile, this time he poked those cheeks with his finger. The sleeping Koyuki was nuzzling her cheek against the poking finger. Somehow she looked so cute.
   
Next Kazuki pushed her nose. The girl’s noble face was warped slightly along with a strange “funya” voice that she leaked out. This girl was also really cute when she was this defenseless.
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Next Kazuki pushed her nose. The girl’s noble face was warped slightly along with a strange “funya” voice that she leaked out. This girl was also so cute when she was this defenseless.
   
A heart mark flew out from her chest. She might have felt something about Kazuki inside her subconsciousness. Then her sleep talk before, just as he thought, perhaps she was calling his name.
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A heart mark flew out from her chest. She might have felt something about Kazuki inside her sub-consciousness. Then her sleep talk before, just as he thought, perhaps she was calling his name.
   
 
When Kazuki’s finger was drifting around wondering about where he was going to poke next, Koyuki’s face that was supposed to be sleeping was reacting mysteriously, ‘paku’ in a snap the tip of the finger was held inside her lips.
 
When Kazuki’s finger was drifting around wondering about where he was going to poke next, Koyuki’s face that was supposed to be sleeping was reacting mysteriously, ‘paku’ in a snap the tip of the finger was held inside her lips.
   
While Kazuki was startled somewhere else, Koyuki sucked out ‘chuu’ Kazuki’s index finger just like a child who was sucking a pacifier.
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While Kazuki was startled somewhere else, Koyuki sucked out ‘chuu’ Kazuki’s index finger just like a child who was sucking a milk pacifier. Uwaa…Hiakari-san’s lips, so soft…
 
(Uwaa…Hiakari-san’s lips, so soft…)
 
   
 
Feeling fretful because there was nothing coming out from Kazuki’s fingertip, Koyuki started to lick Kazuki’s fingertip.
 
Feeling fretful because there was nothing coming out from Kazuki’s fingertip, Koyuki started to lick Kazuki’s fingertip.
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There, Koyuki’s eyes opened.
 
There, Koyuki’s eyes opened.
   
“Kajuki?” She whispered in a half asleep voice. Her mouth was gaping open absentmindedly and the finger that was covered in her saliva was dropped from her mouth.
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“Kajuki?” She whispered in half asleep voice. Her mouth was gaping open absentmindedly and the finger that was covered in her saliva was dropped from her mouth.
   
She started to comprehend the situation little by little, then in the blink of an eye her expression was colored with shock and shame.
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She started to comprehend the situation little by little, then in the blink of eye her expression was colored with shock and shame.
   
However when she noticed that the ones that embraced Kazuki strongly were her own arms and legs, she could express neither her complaint nor her disparagement, only tremble in silence. She turned her back and shrank in embarrassment.
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However when she noticed that the ones that embraced Kazuki strongly were her own arms and legs, she couldn’t express neither her complaint nor her disparagement, she was trembling in silence. She turned her back and shrank in embarrassment.
   
 
“I saw a strange dream and clung to you like that. ...Forgive me.”
 
“I saw a strange dream and clung to you like that. ...Forgive me.”
   
What kind of dream did she see? In any case, this wasn't something she needed to apologize for.
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What kind of dream that she saw? In any case, this was not something she needed to apologize for.
   
“Liar, like this…I only did embarrassing things since yesterday…”
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“You lie, like this…I only did embarrassing things since yesterday…”
   
“That’s not true Hiakari-san…rather if I had to say, you were really cute so it’s fine.”
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“That’s not true Hiakari-san…rather if I say, you were really cute so it’s fine.”
   
 
Kazuki said so with the intention to follow up, but with a tiny voice the girl was,
 
Kazuki said so with the intention to follow up, but with a tiny voice the girl was,
   
“…I don’t understand what you see from me that's fine or cute, Idiot.” She whispered.
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“…I don’t understand what did you see from me that was fine or cute, Idiot.” She whispered so.
   
   
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When he saw senpai fight for the first time, he couldn’t do a thing. That magic was something he absolutely needed a countermeasure for.
 
When he saw senpai fight for the first time, he couldn’t do a thing. That magic was something he absolutely needed a countermeasure for.
   
“Yes. I never expected that kind of magic before, so my mind was consumed and thrown out of order completely into a wreck, but―if beforehand I could enter a state of Trance and [resolve] myself, I should be able to endure to a certain degree desu.”
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“Yes. I never expected that kind of magic before, so my mind was consumed and thrown out of order into a wreck completely, but―if beforehand I could enter a state of Trance and [resolve] myself, I should be able to endure to a certain degree desu.”
   
 
Resolve…if it’s resolve, he has it.
 
Resolve…if it’s resolve, he has it.
   
Trance was a state where he controlled every nook and corner of his mind, including the subconscious area. A mental magic skill where [one's self] was completely in control of one’s own emotions and senses.
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Trance was a state where he controlled every nook and corner of his mind including the subconscious area. A mental magic skill where oneself was completely in control of one’s own emotions and senses.
   
“Lotte, I ask you to consent to something unreasonable. I want to Trace Lotte’s method of Trance. For that I want you to remove your wall of heart for me.”
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“Lotte, I ask you to consent for something unreasonable. I want to Trace Lotte’s method of Trance. For that I want you to remove your wall of heart for me.”
   
Hoshikaze-senpai had once before aligned her mind with Kazuki and Traced the way Kazuki’s body moved, with that she learned the kata<ref>Standard form of a movement, posture, etc. in martial arts, sport, etc.</ref> of Kazuki’s sword style. That great efficiency was something one should be surprised at.
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Hoshikaze-senpai had once before aligned her mind with Kazuki and Traced the way Kazuki’s flesh body moved, with that she learned the kata<ref>Standard form of a movement, posture, etc. in martial arts, sport, etc.</ref> of Kazuki’s sword style. That great efficiency was something one should be surprised at.
   
Lotte learned Japanese language by aligning her mind with the surrounding humans’ minds and Traced their emotion and the interrelation of their vocal chords’ movements. The time that she spent to learn the Japanese language was a mere period of three days.
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Lotte learned Japanese language by aligning her mind with the surrounding humans’ minds and Traced their emotion and the interrelation of their vocal chords’ movements. The time that she spent to learn Japanese language was a mere period of three days.
   
 
Kazuki thought that he could learn the technique to manipulate his sense of pain with the state of Trance by aligning his mind with Lotte, in the same way Lotte learned language.
 
Kazuki thought that he could learn the technique to manipulate his sense of pain with the state of Trance by aligning his mind with Lotte, in the same way Lotte learned language.
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But it was difficult to Trace the depth of the mind. Because if his mind trespassed the {{furigana|bottom of the mind of other people|Mind Hack}}, he would be repelled by the defense mechanism called <Wall of the Heart>.
 
But it was difficult to Trace the depth of the mind. Because if his mind trespassed the {{furigana|bottom of the mind of other people|Mind Hack}}, he would be repelled by the defense mechanism called <Wall of the Heart>.
   
Thus, Kazuki proposed for Lotte to remove the wall of her heart beforehand and let him Trace her completely defenseless mind.
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There Kazuki proposed for Lotte to remove the wall of her heart beforehand and let him Traced her completely defenseless mind.
   
…Normally that was a request that absolutely couldn’t be asked. For the wall of the heart to be removed, it was an action of nothing less than surrendering every nook and cranny of her own heart to other people.
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…Normally that was a request that absolutely couldn’t be asked. For the wall of the heart to be removed, it was an action of nothing other than surrendering every nook and cranny of her own heart to other people.
   
Every secret of her heart would be exposed, there was even the risk of her will being hypnotized by the other party.
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Every secret of her heart would be exposed, there was even risk of her will being hypnotized by the other party.
   
Even so, for the sake of victory against Kaguya-senpai, that was an absolutely needed step.
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Even so for the sake of victory against Kaguya-senpai, that was an absolutely needed step.
   
 
If for example he requested this from Mio, she would reject him for sure in embarrassment of getting all her shame exposed to Kazuki. That was not a problem of the high and low of the positivity level, but a problem of personality. However if it was Lotte―
 
If for example he requested this from Mio, she would reject him for sure in embarrassment of getting all her shame exposed to Kazuki. That was not a problem of the high and low of the positivity level, but a problem of personality. However if it was Lotte―
   
“I don’t mind at all. Because I don’t have any feelings that I want to hide from Onii-san, none at all desu.”
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“I don’t mind at all. Because I don’t have any feeling that I want to hide from Onii-san, none at all desu.”
   
 
She said so quite indifferently as though that request had nothing to do with her.
 
She said so quite indifferently as though that request had nothing to do with her.
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“We are going to do it in this kind of place?”
 
“We are going to do it in this kind of place?”
   
Kazuki, who was the one that asked for it in the first place was bewildered.
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Kazuki who was the one that asked for it in the first place was bewildered.
   
 
“Kazuki-oniisan, please sit down there.”
 
“Kazuki-oniisan, please sit down there.”
   
Lotte brought down the cover of the toilet seat as she was talking and sat Kazuki there. Then she sat on top of Kazuki’s knees with her legs out to the side, only her head was facing toward Kazuki. Both their eyes drew near each other.
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Lotte brought down the cover of the toilet seat as she was talking and sat down Kazuki there. Then she sat on top of Kazuki’s knees with her legs out to the side, only her head was facing toward Kazuki. Both their eyes drew near each other.
   
 
“By all means, go on.” Lotte closed her eyes and readily cleared her wall of the heart.
 
“By all means, go on.” Lotte closed her eyes and readily cleared her wall of the heart.
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“Thank you, Lotte.”
 
“Thank you, Lotte.”
   
Kazuki also closed his eyes, he poured all his concentration to synchronize with Lotte’s heart.
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Kazuki also closed his eyes, he poured all his concentration to sympathize with Lotte’s heart.
   
Several blue strings of magical light were extending from Kazuki. They enveloped Lotte completely.
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Several blue strings of magic power’s light was lengthening from Kazuki. It enveloped Lotte completely.
   
 
Kazuki perceived all the ripples that were produced from Lotte’s heart.
 
Kazuki perceived all the ripples that were produced from Lotte’s heart.
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Lotte’s positivity level was 106. But all these thoughts were the real contents of that number.
 
Lotte’s positivity level was 106. But all these thoughts were the real contents of that number.
   
Her good will spontaneously grew, at the same time the heart mark that symbolizes the increase of positivity level also flew over.
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Her good will spontaneously grew, at the same time the heart mark that symbolize the increase of positivity level also flew over.
   
 
{Thank you Lotte}
 
{Thank you Lotte}
   
Kazuki accepted every one of those thoughts and conveyed his gratitude.
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Kazuki accepted everything of those and conveyed his gratitude.
   
 
This was a training method that absolutely couldn’t come into existence without a partner like Lotte. He felt Lotte’s heart and Traced all the performance of Lotte’s mind’s movements.
 
This was a training method that absolutely couldn’t come into existence without a partner like Lotte. He felt Lotte’s heart and Traced all the performance of Lotte’s mind’s movements.
   
―A little after an hour passed, Kazuki could somehow get the hang of the trick.
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―A little after a hour passed, Kazuki could somehow get the hang of the trick.
   
 
When the Telepathy was over, Lotte laughed “ehehe” and came flying, hugging Kazuki tightly.
 
When the Telepathy was over, Lotte laughed “ehehe” and came flying, hugging Kazuki tightly.
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Kazuki strongly thought of nonresistance, then his defensive magic power was cancelled.
 
Kazuki strongly thought of nonresistance, then his defensive magic power was cancelled.
   
Lotte pulled Kazuki’s cheek strongly. Sense of pain was primarily the work of the subconscious mind. But he seized it with the Trance and controlled it.
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Lotte pulled Kazuki’s cheek strongly. Sense of pain was primarily the work of subconscious mind. But he seized it with the Trance and controlled it.
   
 
The pain was softly abating like being enveloped in silk floss.
 
The pain was softly abating like being enveloped in silk floss.
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He still couldn’t shut out the pain completely. However he had to reach the level where he could shut out the brutal agony of Kaguya-senpai’s magic and persevere through it.
 
He still couldn’t shut out the pain completely. However he had to reach the level where he could shut out the brutal agony of Kaguya-senpai’s magic and persevere through it.
   
“If Onii-san couldn’t deal with unexpected and sudden pain, than all this would also be in vain desu.”
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“If Onii-san couldn’t deal with unexpected and sudden pain, than all this would be also in vain desu.”
   
 
When Lotte said that, she suddenly drew near Kazuki’s face and bit Kazuki’s ear in a snap.
 
When Lotte said that, she suddenly drew near Kazuki’s face and bit Kazuki’s ear in a snap.
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“Thank you Lotte.”
 
“Thank you Lotte.”
   
Kazuki hugged Lotte who was biting his earlobe like she was fawning at him.
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Kazuki hugged back Lotte who was biting his earlobe like she was fawning at him.
   
 
“Right now I can sense Onii-san’s feelings, this is somehow enjoyable desu.”
 
“Right now I can sense Onii-san’s feelings, this is somehow enjoyable desu.”
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With a joking tone, Kazuki pinched Lotte’s cheek that felt like touching a smooth silk.
 
With a joking tone, Kazuki pinched Lotte’s cheek that felt like touching a smooth silk.
   
“Plese don’t pull my cheek~. Ehehe, Onii-san is not going to bite my ear desu?”
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“Plese don’t pull my cheek~. Ehehe, Onii-san is not going to bit my ear desu?”
   
 
Lotte was happily coming to pursue a skinship with Kazuki.
 
Lotte was happily coming to pursue a skinship with Kazuki.

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