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The Sword Division fell into panic.
 
The Sword Division fell into panic.
   
The sound of explosions caused by magic and the sounds of the wooden school building crumbling down were continuing intermittently, screams were resounding widely.
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The sound of explosion caused by magic and the sound of the wooden school building crumbling down were continuing intermittently, screams were resounding widely.
   
The catastrophe was coming from the Magic Division. The ten Quad-core Magica that were finally coming into the empty ground where there was no presence of people because classes were in progress, when the school building that ought to be their target entered their line of sight, they immediately began to chant their magic. When the building was destroyed and the students inside were brought into the open, the target of the offensive magic was altered to the students. The classes were interrupted and the students became panicked.
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The catastrophe was coming from the Magic Division. The ten Quad-core Magica that were finally coming into the empty ground where there was no presence of people at all because the classes were in progress, when the school building that ought to be their target entered their line of sight, they immediately began to chant their magic. When the building was destroyed and the students inside were brought into the open, the target of the offense magic was altered to the students. The classes were interrupted and the students became panicked.
   
 
The students who were planted with complexes toward the Magica Stigma couldn’t even think about resisting, they were only running about trying to escape in earnest.
 
The students who were planted with complexes toward the Magica Stigma couldn’t even think about resisting, they were only running about trying to escape in earnest.
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School building number one that contained the staff room was located in the farthest place from the Magic Division. Perhaps school building number one was constructed in the corner of the grounds because they had anticipated the fight that would break out someday with the Magic Division. Because of that, they escaped direct harm.
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The school building number one that contained the staff room was located in the farthest place from the Magic Division. Perhaps this school building number one was constructed in the corner of the ground because they had anticipated the fight that would break out someday with the Magic Division. Because of that, they were exempted from direct harm.
   
“Illegal magician’s attack! Their numbers are ten!!”
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“Illegal magician’s attack! Their number are ten!!”
   
 
The teachers were becoming discomposed from the report that came flying through the roughly opened door.
 
The teachers were becoming discomposed from the report that came flying through the roughly opened door.
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“What did you say…is it Loki!?”
 
“What did you say…is it Loki!?”
   
“No, there is no appearance of Loki…Their appearance is different from the illegal magicians that had appeared in all the incidents until now!! A more ominous…!!”
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“No, there is no appearance of Loki…Their appearance are different from the illegal magicians that had appeared in all the incidents until now!! A more ominous…!!”
   
 
“But, why are the illegal magicians invading from the Magic Division!!?”
 
“But, why are the illegal magicians invading from the Magic Division!!?”
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Even while in the middle of that report, the thunderous roar was still audible from far away.
 
Even while in the middle of that report, the thunderous roar was still audible from far away.
   
“We had contacted the Magic Division's staff room, but…the Magic Division students had already begun to take refuge. The Sword Division is to wait for reinforcements from the Knight Order and…”
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“We had contacted the staff room of the Magic Division, but…the students of the Magic Division had began to take refuge, the Sword Division is to wait for reinforcement from the Knight Order and…”
   
 
The staff room fell into silence in an instant after hearing the words of the teacher that was holding a cellphone in one hand.
 
The staff room fell into silence in an instant after hearing the words of the teacher that was holding a cellphone in one hand.
   
It was a silence where boiling rage and impatience were mixing as one.
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It was a silence where a boiling rage and impatience were mixing as one.
   
“Those guys, even though they usually are so big headed, but now they're going to just abandon the Sword Division!? The Magica Stigma of the Magic Division should have the power to fight, shouldn’t they!?”
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“Those guys, even though they usually are so big headed, but they are going to just abandon the Sword Division now!? The Magica Stigma of the Magic Division should have the power to fight, shouldn’t they!?”
   
 
One teacher was raising an angry voice.
 
One teacher was raising an angry voice.
   
For a teacher who was entrusted with parents' children to help and protect, that way of thinking was mistaken, but thinking of the combat ability of the Magic Division’s students, it was only natural.
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For a teacher who was entrusted with the children of the parents to help and protect, that way of thinking was mistaken, but thinking of the battle ability of the Magic Division’s students, that was only natural.
   
“Waiting for the Knight Order…what time do they think the reinforcements are going to come!”
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“Waiting for the Knight Order…what time they think the reinforcement are going to come!”
   
 
The teachers understood better than anyone that the Knight Order couldn’t come anytime soon.
 
The teachers understood better than anyone that the Knight Order couldn’t come anytime soon.
   
The Knight Order was pressured to the extreme by Loki’s frequent raid incident. Moreover within that lack of personnel, the Knight Order was thinning the deployment in the Knight Academy’s surroundings. They had decided that when something happens in the Knight Academy, then the students themselves need to be the ones to do something about it.
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The Knight Order was pressured to the extreme by Loki’s frequent raid incident. Moreover within those lack of personnel, the Knight Order was thinning the deployment of personnel in the Knight Academy’s surrounding. They had decided that when something happen in the Knight Academy, then the students need to do something by their own power.
   
In reality, the students were already performing as the substitute of the Knight Order when undertaking quests. They had the strength to fight after all.
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In reality, the students were already performing as the substitute of the Knight Order when undertaking a quest. They had the strength to fight.
   
The situation was an extreme mess where they had little information. All the teachers of the Magic Division, why, to order [a joke operation of taking refuge] to the students who had power to fight…!?
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The situation was an extreme turmoil where they had little information. All the teachers of the Magic Division, why, to order [a joke operation of taking refuge] to the students who had power to fight…!?
   
 
“Is there no student in the Sword Division that is attempting to oppose them!? It’s only ten people right!?”
 
“Is there no student in the Sword Division that is attempting to oppose them!? It’s only ten people right!?”
   
A teacher of the Sword Division, Tsukahara Hisatada was shouting.
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The teacher of the Sword Division, Tsukahara Hisatada was shouting.
   
Tsukahara was the teacher who was backing Kohaku’s anti Magic Division faction. He was also secretly giving the students Sacred Treasures that he obtained from the Knight Order’s illegal channels. Because of his thoughts and beliefs, he couldn’t accept falling into despair just because they had been abandoned by the students of the Magic Division.
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Tsukahara was the teacher who was backing Kohaku’s group that were anti Magic Division. He was also secretly giving the students Sacred Treasures that he obtained from the Knight Order’s illegal channels. Because of his thought and beliefs, he couldn’t accept to fall into despair just because they had been abandoned by the students of the Magic Division.
   
The students of the Sword Division must break through this situation through their own efforts.
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The students of the Sword Division must break through this situation by using their own effort.
   
“Tsukahara-sensei, we're going! We will use the Sacred Treasures!!”
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“Tsukahara-sensei, we are going! We will use the Sacred Treasures!!”
   
Running against the stampede of escaping students, one group was barging into the staff room. Those students were ignoring all the other teachers that had fallen into a panic and only looking for instructions from Tsukahara.
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Running against the stampede of the escaping students, one group of students was barging into the staff room. Those students were ignoring all the other teachers that had fallen into panic and only looking for instruction from Tsukahara.
   
The one that stood at the head of the group was Kohaku, the now current Sword Division student council president.
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The one that stood at the head of the group was Kohaku who was the current student council president.
   
 
“The opponents are unknown but…can you do it?”
 
“The opponents are unknown but…can you do it?”
   
“This one has the intention to win against the Magic Division. We will show you if it is only this much.”
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“This one have the intention to win against the Magic Division. We will show you if it is only this much.”
   
 
Toward Kohaku’s reply, Tsukahara nodded sharply like he was saying ‘That’s exactly what I thought’.
 
Toward Kohaku’s reply, Tsukahara nodded sharply like he was saying ‘That’s exactly what I thought’.
   
“…Alright, go stop those guys. But do it while prioritizing the rescue of students that have fallen into magic intoxication.”
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“…Alright, go stop those guys. But do it while prioritizing to rescue the students that had fallen into magic intoxication.”
   
There were a considerable number of students that were already swallowed by the magic. The students who possessed defensive magic power wouldn’t get done in with just one shot of magic.
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There were considerable number of students that were already swallowed by the magic. The students who possessed the defensive magic power wouldn’t get done in with just one shot of magic.
   
But if those who were already in the condition of losing their magic power were to get swallowed by magic again, naturally it would affect their life.
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But if those who were already in the condition of losing their magic power were to get swallowed into magic again, naturally it would affect their life.
   
 
“Of course!”
 
“Of course!”
   
Kohaku and the others answered valiantly and exited the staff room.
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Kohaku and others answered valiantly and exited the staff room.
   
Tsukahara saw them off while tightly grasping his own beloved ornamental sword.
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Tsukahara saw off those backs while grasping tightly his own ornamental beloved sword.
   
The adults whose magic power was already declining, had no power to fight.
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The adults whose magic power were already declining, had no power to fight.
   
 
===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===

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