Editing Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 3 Chapter 4

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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
Board Chairman Amasaki spurred his old bones and dashed with all his strength.
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The Board Chairman Amasaki spurred his old bones and dashed with all his strength.
   
He went through the waves of students that were escaping, while pushing through the pitch black rubble burned down by fire magic, he was running around looking for just one figure of a student inside the mist.
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He went through the wave of the students that were escaping, while pushing through the pitch black rubble that were burned down by fire magic, he was running around looking for just one figure of a student inside the mist.
   
 
“Mio…where is my [Mio-tan]!?”
 
“Mio…where is my [Mio-tan]!?”
   
Board Chairman Amasaki knew that his daughter was sheltered together with Hayashizaki Kazuki somewhere in the Sword Division. But that Sword Division was now under attack by mysterious illegal magicians.
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Board Chairman Amasaki knew that his daughter was sheltered together with Hayashizaki Kazuki somewhere in the Sword Division. But that Sword Division was now met with an attack of mysterious illegal magicians.
   
Despite there being nothing that could be done by an old man like him, he was still running around inside the confusion. His wrinkle covered face was drenched with sweat and his breathing was becoming wildly disordered in no time. Even so, he refused to stop his feet.
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Despite there was nothing that could be done by an old man like him, he was still running around inside the confusion. His wrinkle covered face was drenched with sweat, his breath was becoming wildly disordered in no time. Even so, he refused to stop his feet.
   
 
―And then he saw the battlefield.
 
―And then he saw the battlefield.
   
What entered his sight were the ten illegal magicians that were rapid-firing Summoning Magic with tremendous force.
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What entered his eyes were the ten illegal magicians that were rapid-firing Summoning Magic with tremendous forces.
   
No, their atmosphere were different from illegal magicians. Their control was just too great. They were also too emotionless. What in the world is this?
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No, their atmosphere were different from illegal magicians. Their control were just too great. And then they were also too unemotional. What in the world is that?
   
No, what he should be surprised at was not that. The eyes of Board Chairman Amasaki were opened wide in a flash.
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No, what he should be surprised at was not that. The eyes of Board Chairman Amasaki were widely opened in a flash.
   
As the Board Chairman of the Knight Academy, he who once was an expert in the field of magic doubted his own eyes.
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As the Board Chairman of the Knight Academy, he who once was an expert at the field concerned with magic doubted his own eyes.
   
…The magic that those guys are using, isn'that the summoning magic of Solomon's 72 Pillars!?
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…The magic that those guys are using, aren’t those Solomon 72 Pillar’s Summoning Magic!?
   
 
“What in the world is going on, this is…!?”
 
“What in the world is going on, this is…!?”

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