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“A seal will be performed on her Stigmata to make her unable to use magic power completely. I have made an arrangement with the Knight Order for a <{{furigana|Limiter|Stigmata Suppression Device}}>. It’s the newest measure for illegal magicians with minor offences.”
 
“A seal will be performed on her Stigmata to make her unable to use magic power completely. I have made an arrangement with the Knight Order for a <{{furigana|Limiter|Stigmata Suppression Device}}>. It’s the newest measure for illegal magicians with minor offences.”
   
“You aren't going to use the <Stigmata Removal Operation> that was recommended before for Otouto-kun?”
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“You are not going to use the <Stigmata Removal Operation> that was recommended before for Otouto-kun?”
   
 
Kaguya-senpai asked. In comparison to seal by tool, removing Stigmata by operation was thought to be a more fundamental solution. But Headmaster Amasaki shook his head.
 
Kaguya-senpai asked. In comparison to seal by tool, removing Stigmata by operation was thought to be a more fundamental solution. But Headmaster Amasaki shook his head.
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“What is called Limiter is a tool that reads the wavelength of the magic power that flows inside the Stigmata and makes it so magic power cannot flow into the Stigmata. On top of fixing this tool on her, she is also going to be sent to a <detention facility>.”
 
“What is called Limiter is a tool that reads the wavelength of the magic power that flows inside the Stigmata and makes it so magic power cannot flow into the Stigmata. On top of fixing this tool on her, she is also going to be sent to a <detention facility>.”
   
Detention facility―the establishment that detains the illegal magicians the Knight Order captures. They are safely managed there; at the same time, it is also a facility for keeping them away at a distance so that they wouldn’t become a victim of persecution and revenge.
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Detention facility―the establishment that detains the illegal magicians who the Knight Order captures. They are safely managed there; at the same time, it is also a facility for keeping them away at a distance so that they wouldn’t become a victim of persecution and revenge.
   
 
It could also be reworded as [the prison you wouldn’t be able to leave until you die].
 
It could also be reworded as [the prison you wouldn’t be able to leave until you die].
   
“Please wait a second, there's no need to go that far, right!?”
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“Please wait a second, there is no need to go that far, right!?”
   
Kazuki objected in a panic, but Headmaster Amasaki opposed imposingly.
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Kazuki objected in panic, but Headmaster Amasaki opposed imposingly.
   
 
“Why do you think so? Of course there is a need to go that far. You realize if the limiter is broken or removed, this girl is just going to use dangerous Summoning Magic again?”
 
“Why do you think so? Of course there is a need to go that far. You realize if the limiter is broken or removed, this girl is just going to use dangerous Summoning Magic again?”
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A resolute fury stained the words of Headmaster Amasaki―in regard to someone that exposed the students to danger. ‘I’m going to send this girl to a detention facility for sure’, that is the kind of face that he is currently making.
 
A resolute fury stained the words of Headmaster Amasaki―in regard to someone that exposed the students to danger. ‘I’m going to send this girl to a detention facility for sure’, that is the kind of face that he is currently making.
   
“That was because of Hayashi Shizuka’s order that made her do it! This girl was just manipulated! Despite that, for this girl’s life to be closed here, I won’t allow such behavior!!”
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“That was because of Hayashi Shizuka’s order that made her do it! This girl was just manipulated! Despite so, for this girl’s life to be closed here, I won’t allow such behavior!!”
   
 
“How could you know that she did it just because of the brainwashing? How much of it was by Katsura Karin’s own will, how much of it was not, can you really judge it accurately?”
 
“How could you know that she did it just because of the brainwashing? How much of it was by Katsura Karin’s own will, how much of it was not, can you really judge it accurately?”
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“That…when the person concerned herself wakes up, we could ask her…”
 
“That…when the person concerned herself wakes up, we could ask her…”
   
“The word of the person concerned herself couldn’t become proof.”
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“The word of the person concerned herself couldn’t become a proof.”
   
 
That was just like a suspect that cried of his own innocence in a trial. There was no persuasiveness inside it at all.
 
That was just like a suspect that cried of his own innocence in a trial. There was no persuasiveness inside it at all.
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At that time, a voice came from beyond the curtains that partitioned them from the neighboring bed.
 
At that time, a voice came from beyond the curtains that partitioned them from the neighboring bed.
   
“Don’t screw around, I won’t allow you bastards to send Karin-chan to a place that looked like jail huh!!”
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“Don’t screw around, I won’t allow you bastard to send Karin-chan to a place that looked like jail huh!!”
   
 
The curtain was opened violently. The source of the voice was Mibu Akira. The girl, together with Asamiya-senpai, who fainted in the finals, were laid in the adjacent bed.
 
The curtain was opened violently. The source of the voice was Mibu Akira. The girl, together with Asamiya-senpai, who fainted in the finals, were laid in the adjacent bed.
   
“Karin-chan didna’ do anything bad…no really, she might do something just a little bad but…but Karin-chan isn’ someoneee bad okay!”
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“Karin-chan didna’ do anything bad…no really she might do something just a little bad but…but Karin-chan isn’ someoneee bad okay!”
   
 
“That’s right―, what Aneki said you know―!”
 
“That’s right―, what Aneki said you know―!”
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Against that high handed attitude, Mibu-senpai and Asamiya-senpai became even more worked up.
 
Against that high handed attitude, Mibu-senpai and Asamiya-senpai became even more worked up.
   
“I was fightin’ for Karin-chan’s sake! Karin-chan…honestly I don’ know how far she was brainwashed. There is also some aspect of Karin-chan that chose to fight. But, that was only because she was made to choose! Karin-chan’s [own will] was not regarded at all! This girl just wanted to get recognized by her stepsister as family!! I wanna help her with that. Me and also Karin-chan don’t give a damn one bit about whether China is backing us up or whatever! No way I’m fighting for such a thing!!”
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“I was fightin’ for Karin-chan’s sake! Karin-chan…honestly I don’ know how far she was brainwashed. There is also some aspect of Karin-chan that choose to fight. But, that was only because she was made to choose! Karin-chan’s [own will] was not regarded at all! This girl just wanted to get recognized by her stepsister as family!! I wanna help her with that. Me and also Karin-chan don’t give a damn one bit about whether China is backing us up or whatever! No way I’m fighting for such thing!!”
   
 
“Wishing to get recognized as family…?” Kazuki was dumbfounded and leaked out a voice in a murmur.
 
“Wishing to get recognized as family…?” Kazuki was dumbfounded and leaked out a voice in a murmur.
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Mibu-senpai faltered. After looking down with anxious eyes, she said a [girlish basis].
 
Mibu-senpai faltered. After looking down with anxious eyes, she said a [girlish basis].
   
“…Because that girl always made lonely eyes. If she really had gone bad, if she didn’t give a damn about the world and despaired, she wouldn't even feel any loneliness or anything like that. If she had really gone bad then she gonna become a monster that keeps cool no matter what screwed up things she get done. But it’s still not too late for guys that get lonely. If a kind hand is reached out to ‘em by someone, there's no way it’s too late for ‘em!!”
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“…Because that girl always made lonely eyes. If she really had gone bad, if she didn’t give a damn about the world and despaired, she won’t even feel any loneliness or the like. If she had really gone bad then she gonna become a monster that keeps cool no matter what screwed things she get done. But it’s still not too late for guys that get lonely. If a kind hand is reached out to ‘em by someone, there is no way it’s too late for ‘em!!”
   
 
From those words, the infirmary became enveloped in silence.
 
From those words, the infirmary became enveloped in silence.
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I…if there existed a powerless person that got oppressed and fell into a fate of sorrow, it was something that I couldn’t allow.
 
I…if there existed a powerless person that got oppressed and fell into a fate of sorrow, it was something that I couldn’t allow.
   
As expected, I wanted to help Karin. Even in the case of the existing possibility that the girl was a future [enemy], even so, he wanted to discover the possibility of happiness for the girl.
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As expected, I wanted to help Karin. Even in the case of the existing possibility that the girl was a future [enemy], even so he wanted to discover the possibility of happiness for the girl.
   
 
“It’s not worth considering. What you called as your basis is only a really subjective story from your side.”
 
“It’s not worth considering. What you called as your basis is only a really subjective story from your side.”
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“Anyway you two, don’t forget that you are also people in suspicion. No matter how much you say that she is not bad, it was nothing more than your attempt to cover for your comrade.”
 
“Anyway you two, don’t forget that you are also people in suspicion. No matter how much you say that she is not bad, it was nothing more than your attempt to cover for your comrade.”
   
“Shit-, is it because we're delinquents…?! Really, until now we just kept doing whatever the hell we wanted and then suddenly askin’ to just believe what we're sayin’ it’s really askin’ too much but still…”
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“Shit-, is it because we are delinquents…?! Really until now we just kept doing whatever the hell we wanted and then suddenly askin’ to just believe what we are sayin’ it’s really askin’ too much but still…”
   
 
Mibu-senpai dropped her shoulders dejectedly, Asamiya-senpai too “Aneki…” had her eyes glistening with tears.
 
Mibu-senpai dropped her shoulders dejectedly, Asamiya-senpai too “Aneki…” had her eyes glistening with tears.
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Kaguya-senpai suddenly became flustered.
 
Kaguya-senpai suddenly became flustered.
   
“I said that you are delinquents, but I don’t think that you are this academy’s shit or anything like that at all! I just thought that I wanted us to do our best together as fellow Knight candidates, that’s all!
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“I said that you are delinquents, but I don’t think that you are this academy’s shit or the like at all! I just thought that I wanted us to do our best together as a fellow Knight candidate, that’s all!
   
“I get it, really. But I couldna’ take an offered hand like that! Because that’s too shameful right!? When I got treated kindly, that just made me get awareness of my own wrongs!”
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“I get it, really. But I couldna’ take an offered hand like that! Because that’s too shameful right!? When I got treated kindly, that just made me get awareness of my own wrong!”
   
 
“Aneki…” Asamiya-senpai watched over Mibu-senpai whose eyes were wet with tears.
 
“Aneki…” Asamiya-senpai watched over Mibu-senpai whose eyes were wet with tears.
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“Ca, cake store!?” Hearing those too unexpected words, not only Kaguya-senpai, everyone was surprised too.
 
“Ca, cake store!?” Hearing those too unexpected words, not only Kaguya-senpai, everyone was surprised too.
   
“What’s strange with that, isn’t a cake store the best! I’m gonna open my own shop in a small town, getting the auntie and the girls going home from school as my regulars…. At Christmas or birthdays, if there is something to celebrate everyone is gonna come to my shop, picking out the cake with eyes bright with hope…. For the sake of answering that hope every morning I’m gonna wake up early, I got confidence in my magic power so I’m gonna make my own flavor with Alchemy Cooking, everyone gonna say that it’s delicious…even though I have a dream like that…this arm that is for the sake of whipping up cream was suddenly got fixed with Enigma!”
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“What’s strange with that, isn’t a cake store the best! I’m gonna open my own shop in a small town, getting the auntie and the girls going home from school as my regulars…. At Christmas or birthday, if there is something to celebrate everyone is gonna come to my shop, picking out the cake with eyes bright with hope…. For the sake of answering that hope every morning I’m gonna wake up early, I got confidence in my magic power so I’m gonna make my own flavor with Alchemy Cooking, everyone gonna say that it’s delicious…even though I have a dream like that…this arm that is for the sake of whipping up cream was suddenly got fixed with Enigma!”
   
From Mibu-senpai’s eyes, tears were overflowing in droves, spilling out messily.
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From Mibu-senpai’s eyes, tears were overflowing in drove, spilling out messily.
   
“That’s why…what responsibility of knights, I don’ know anything like that, like that I rebelled against the academy. I don’t have any plan of doing anything mistaken, so I don’t plan to reflect on myself or anything like that. But…I noticed it while looking at Kaguya-chan.”
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“That’s why…what responsibility of knight, I don’ know anything like that, like that I rebelled against the academy. I don’t have any plan of doing anything mistaken, so I don’t plan to reflect on myself or anything like that. But…I noticed it while looking at Kaguya-chan.”
   
 
“M, me? Looking at me?” Kaguya-senpai pointed at herself and blinked with surprise.
 
“M, me? Looking at me?” Kaguya-senpai pointed at herself and blinked with surprise.
   
“Kaguya-chan was always piling up harsh training on herself, she even challenged dangerous quests energetically. Moreover, many times she reached out her hands to shit like me sayin’ [let’s do our best together]. Not just that, despite being the student council president of the Magic Division she insisted to have an equal relationship with the Sword Division…even though there is dissenting opinion, she stuck to her own will for the sake of those guys in weak positions. …That made me think if this kind of person is what a [knight] really is. I got aware of that. If no one is fightin’ as a knight then it’s gonna be like that [Tokyo Great Destruction] fifteen years ago, there is gonna be no place for cake stores. If no one is gonna fight…even I get it that I canna’ just waste away the great power that I finally got my hands on uselessly like that. But after thoroughly saying [This academy is the one that’s bad] [I’m not the one that’s bad] continuously, I slapped away Kaguya-chan’s hand. There is no way after all that I coulda just suddenly say shameful things like [I’m going to aim as a Knight]! Kaguya-chan is just too bright, I can't take that hand…. When I see Kaguya-chan….my own shittiness is just too pathetic!”
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“Kaguya-chan was always piling up harsh training on herself, she even challenged dangerous quests energetically. Moreover, many times she reached out her hands to shit like me sayin’ [let’s do our best together]. Not just that, despite being the student council president of the Magic Division she insisted to have an equal relationship with the Sword Division…even though there is dissenting opinion, she stuck to her own will for the sake of those guys in weak position. …That made me think if this kind of person is what a [knight] really is. I got aware of that. If no one is fightin’ as a knight then it’s gonna be like that [Tokyo Great Destruction] fifteen years ago, there is gonna be no place for cake store. If no one is gonna fight…even I get it that I canna’ just waste away the great power that I finally got my hands on uselessly like that. But after thoroughly saying [This academy is the one that’s bad] [I’m not the one that’s bad] continuously, I slapped away Kaguya-chan’s hand. There is no way after all that I coulda just suddenly say shameful things like [I’m going to aim as a Knight]! Kaguya-chan is just too bright, I cannot take that hand…. When I see Kaguya-chan….my own shittiness is just too pathetic!”
   
 
“Aneki is seriously…Kaguya-chan’s fan really…”
 
“Aneki is seriously…Kaguya-chan’s fan really…”
   
Asamiya-senpai too, together with her elder sister figure, Mibu-senpai, became messed up with spilling tears.
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Asamiya-senpai too, together with her elder sister figure, Mibu-senpai, became messed with spilling tears.
   
 
“Err, someone like me is really not that great.” Kaguya-senpai was all shook up.
 
“Err, someone like me is really not that great.” Kaguya-senpai was all shook up.
   
“I want to become like Kaguya-chan, so I secretly piled up magic training. But this late I already can't go back to become an honor student. Then at that time, Shizuka came invitin’ me into the battle election. If I made great showin’ in the battle election, then maybe everyone woulda looked at me differently. Everyone would get to recognize that I’m not shit, that I coulda take Kaguya-chan’s offered hand unashamedly like that, that was what I was thinking.”
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“I want to become like Kaguya-chan, so I secretly piled up magic training. But this late I already cannot go back to become an honor student. Then at that time, Shizuka came invitin’ me into the battle election. If I made great showin’ in the battle election, then maybe everyone woulda looked at me differently. Everyone would get to recognize that I’m not a shit, that I coulda take Kaguya-chan’s offered hand unashamedly like that, that was what I was thinking.”
   
“Me and Aneki, didn’t get told of Shizuka’s objectives or anything like that. We know that girl sometimes gave us special training in a secret location, she called us out. She planned to make us pawns that were easy to handle and also quite strong as the occasion suited. For that girl, we were nothing more than pawns. But for us, whatever those guys' objective were didn’t really matter at all.”
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“Me and Aneki, didn’t get told of Shizuka’s objective or anything like that. We know that girl sometimes gave us special training in a secret location, she called us out. She planned to make us pawns that were easy to handle and also quite strong as the occasion suited. For that girl, we were nothing more than pawns. But for us, whatever those guys' objective were didn’t really matter at all.”
   
“But gradually the matter about ourselves too didna really matter! Karin-chan had a much more crappy experience than someone like me. Compared to her, my worries are just a simple half-baked thing…she was treated like trash by Shizuka! If we complained or whined that Shizuka beat us blue until magic intoxication…after that, we became reluctan’ to say any complaints to Shizuka…”
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“But gradually the matter about ourselves too didna really matter! Karin-chan had a much more crappy experience than someone like me. Compared to her, my worries are just a simple half-baked thing…she was treated like trash by Shizuka! If we complained or whined that Shizuka beat us blue until magic intoxication…after that, we became reluctan’ to say any complain to Shizuka…”
   
 
…Mibu-senpai definitely received brainwashing. But what was overwritten by the brainwashing was not their motive for fighting but only the pecking order between them.
 
…Mibu-senpai definitely received brainwashing. But what was overwritten by the brainwashing was not their motive for fighting but only the pecking order between them.
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Mio, who until now had kept quiet and watched the situation, gave her assistance to Kazuki as well.
 
Mio, who until now had kept quiet and watched the situation, gave her assistance to Kazuki as well.
   
“Ughh…even though papa is just taking a prudent stance for the sake of the academy, even Mio now…”
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“Ughh…even though papa is just taking a prudent stance for the sake of the academy, even up to Mio…”
   
 
Headmaster Amasaki made a grimace that added even more wrinkles in his wrinkled-covered face.
 
Headmaster Amasaki made a grimace that added even more wrinkles in his wrinkled-covered face.
   
“Well then headmaster, pease, at least wait before sending her immediately to the detention facility. I will take the role of monitoring Karin for a while and make sure of Karin’s true feelings. Just like when before Kaguya-senpai did that for me and I was put in the Witch’s Manor!”
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“Well then headmaster, at least please wait before sending her immediately to the detention facility. I will take the role of monitoring Karin for a while and make sure of Karin’s true feelings. Just like when before Kaguya-senpai did that for me and I was put in the Witch’s Mansion!”
   
 
“Yo, you―, you’re gonna help Karin-chan!?”
 
“Yo, you―, you’re gonna help Karin-chan!?”
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Kaguya-senpai murmured worriedly.
 
Kaguya-senpai murmured worriedly.
   
“The Hayashizaki-style is surprise attack proof.”
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“Hayashizaki-style is surprise attack proof.”
   
“When we first met, didn’t I creep up behind you unnoticed and prank you [Gu―ess who!]?”
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“When we first met, didn’t I creep up behind you unnoticed and prank you [Who― is it?]?”
   
Kaguya-senpai too launched a swift tsukkomi, Kazuki was “Tha, that was because senpai didn’t have any killing intent!” and made some justification in fluster. Moreover, just before this, he had been pranked [Gu―ess who!] by Beatrix.
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Kaguya-senpai too launched a swift tsukkomi, Kazuki was “Tha, that was because senpai didn’t have any killing intent!” and made some justification in fluster. Moreover, just before this, he had been pranked [Who― is this?] by Beatrix.
   
 
This was bad, from some time ago, he let out too many excuses. The persuasiveness was just too doubtful even if he said so himself.
 
This was bad, from some time ago, he let out too many excuses. The persuasiveness was just too doubtful even if he said so himself.
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“War Preparation Spirit?” Everyone other than Kazuki tilted their heads. In place of Kazuki, Kanae made her explanation.
 
“War Preparation Spirit?” Everyone other than Kazuki tilted their heads. In place of Kazuki, Kanae made her explanation.
   
“The Hayashizaki-style is an old school of Iai. Iai’s original doctrine is [to never let shown an opening no matter what kind of time, always being ready to sword draw and counterattack immediately no matter against any kind of attack], like that. That surprise attacks don’t work against Nii-sama is a fact. The Hayashizaki-style can detect [killing intent] even while sleeping….What is called killing intent is not a concept like the occult. Killing intent, namely the emission of offensive-like magic power. In order to be able to sense it even in the subconscious, the subconscious of oneself has to be mastered―that is the War Preparation Spirit. In short, it is a kind of Trance technique.”
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“Hayashizaki-style is an old school of Iai. Iai’s original doctrine is [to never let shown an opening no matter what kind of time, always being ready to sword draw and counterattack immediately no matter against any kind of attack], like that. That surprise attacks don’t work against Nii-sama is a fact. Hayashizaki-style can detect [killing intent] even while sleeping….What is called killing intent is not a concept that like an occult. Killing intent, namely the emission of offensive-like magic power. In order to be able to sense it even in the subconscious, the subconscious of oneself has to be mastered―that is the War Preparation Spirit. In short, it is a kind of Trance technique.”
   
 
The surrounding bunch felt the persuasiveness inside Kanae’s words and nodded their heads "I see".
 
The surrounding bunch felt the persuasiveness inside Kanae’s words and nodded their heads "I see".
   
“Putting on the War Preparation Spirit, in short if I sleep with my mind still in a half-awakened state, even if I am attacked in my sleep I could immediately wake up. That’s why it’s impossible for Karin to kill me. Headmaster, please give me time to spend with Karin! …If you recognize me as a possessor of the power of a King, then please!”
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“Putting on the War Preparation Spirit, in short if I sleep with my mind still in a half-awakened state, even if I am attacked in my sleep I could immediately wake up. That’s why it’s impossible for Karin to kill me. Headmaster, please give me time to spend with Karin! …If you recognize me as a possessor of the power of King, then please!”
   
 
King. With that word brought out, Headmaster Amasaki grudgingly accepted that proposal.
 
King. With that word brought out, Headmaster Amasaki grudgingly accepted that proposal.
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“You said don’t leave her side for even a moment…Certainly if she is a dangerous character, then a monitoring around the clock is needed, but then that means Kazuki is going to have a life of constant attendance with this child Karin? For one week too?”
 
“You said don’t leave her side for even a moment…Certainly if she is a dangerous character, then a monitoring around the clock is needed, but then that means Kazuki is going to have a life of constant attendance with this child Karin? For one week too?”
   
Mio talked in a whisper. And then with a blushing red face, she let out an unparalleled thoughtless remark.
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Mio talked in whisper. And then with a blushing red face, she claimed an unparalleled thoughtless remark.
   
 
“…That’s totally unfair!!”
 
“…That’s totally unfair!!”

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