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“…This one too is from Kyuushuu. It’s too far and the situation there is the hardest to grasp. As expected it makes one feel a little worried.”
 
“…This one too is from Kyuushuu. It’s too far and the situation there is the hardest to grasp. As expected it makes one feel a little worried.”
   
Regardless of how dangerous this quest was, a lot of the students’ reason to gather and volunteer was also because of this. The Knight Academy gathered students from the whole country after all―what would happen to western Japan, many of the students’ hearts were crushed with feelings of anxiety.
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Regardless of how dangerous this quest was, a lot of the students’ reason to gather and volunteer was also because of this. The Knight Academy gathered the students from the whole country―what would happen to the west Japan, many of the students’ heart were crushed with feeling of anxiety.
   
“Yosh, the volunteers have been gathered with this.”
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“Yosh, the volunteers had been gathered with this.”
   
 
Kanon-senpai and Akane-senpai came along to the student council room.
 
Kanon-senpai and Akane-senpai came along to the student council room.
   
Behind them several females wearing the Knight Order uniform were also following along in succession.
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Behind them several female wearing the Knight Order uniform were also following along in succession.
   
One person among them was, “Never thought I’d be coming back to the Knight Academy in this shape” and laughed ironically.
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One person among them was, “Never thought I’ll be going back to the Knight Academy in this shape” and laughed ironically.
   
“From among the people that escaped together with us, the third years that were in the middle of training also want to come together. Because everyone said that they want to come back to the Knight Academy after so long. Though let’s omit the introductions.”
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“From among the people that escaped together with us, the third years that are in the middle of training also want to come together. Because everyone said that they want to come back to the Knight Academy after so long. Though let’s omit the introduction.”
   
 
“Ee―, that’s really mean Akanee―! Even though I also want to become acquainted with Chief President-san!”
 
“Ee―, that’s really mean Akanee―! Even though I also want to become acquainted with Chief President-san!”
   
After one person raised their voice, the other third years started to make a ruckus ‘kya kya’.
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After one person raised their voice, the whole third years started to make a ruckus ‘kya kya’.
   
“Awe―some! There really is a male wearing the uniform of the Magic Division!”
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“Awe―some! There is really a male wearing the uniform of the Magic Division!” “He really look better than those swordsmen of the Knight Order!” “So unfair Otonashi Kaguya! It should be more effective if you are the one that is in the field so switch with me!”
“He really looks better than those swordsmen of the Knight Order!”
 
“So unfair Otonashi Kaguya! It should be more effective if you are the one that is in the field so switch with me!”
 
   
Kazuki faltered from the impolite gazes of the girls. Seeing that they immediately “He's shyy―!” and such voices were raised. They were two years older than him so they felt like an older lady to him for the most part and it made him feel timid.
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Kazuki faltered from the impolite gazes of the girls. Seeing that they immediately “He is shyy―!” and such voices were raised. They were two years older than him so they felt like an older lady to him for the most part and it made him felt timid.
   
“Fufufu, a timid Kazuki is so cute. It makes me want to hug him and break his neck…”
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“Fufufu, a timid Kazuki is so cute. It make me want to hug him and break his neck…”
   
Mixed with the high pitched voices of the third year girls…he could hear a voice that said strange words in a deep voice.
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Mixed with the high pitched voice of the third year girls…he could hear a voice that said strange words in a deep voice.
   
“Eh?” Thinking it was strange he directed his gaze at the direction of the voice. There at the end of the line of the third years who were wearing white knight order uniforms, three women wearing black Einherjar uniforms were secretly coming along. The third years just now noticing them were “Eh, no way, what is this person saying…” and got startled.
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“Eh?” Thinking it was strange he directed his gaze at the direction of the voice. There at the end of the line of the third years who were wearing white knight order uniforms, three woman wearing black Einherjar uniform were secretly coming along. The third years seemingly not noticing them were “Eh, no way, what is this person say…” and got startled.
   
 
“Who, who are you…” Kanon-senpai asked timidly with eyes as if she was seeing a degenerate.
 
“Who, who are you…” Kanon-senpai asked timidly with eyes as if she was seeing a degenerate.
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“Fufufu, I am…Beatrix-chan!”
 
“Fufufu, I am…Beatrix-chan!”
   
“…Hey, why is the captain recently so crazy about adding ‘chan’ to her own name?”
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“…Hey, why is the captain recently, she got so crazy about adding ‘chan’ to her own name?”
   
“She learned that in Japan a cute girl had ‘chan’ added after their name…it seems she is planning to appeal as a cute girl like this.” <ref>Damian also talked like a thug and Eleonora talked with polite language.</ref>
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“She learned that in Japan a cute girl had ‘chan’ added after their name…it seems she is planning to appeal as a cute girl like this.”<ref>Damian also talked like a thug and Eleonora talked with polite language.</ref>
   
 
Behind Beatrix, Damian and Eleonora were exchanging conversation in secret.
 
Behind Beatrix, Damian and Eleonora were exchanging conversation in secret.
   
“Cute girl? Couldn’t the captain be mistaken for a wild gorilla…”
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“Cute girl? Isn’t the captain could be mistaken as a wild gorilla…”
   
“FUNN!” Beatrix visited a lariat on Damian, that small statured body was blown away to the end of the hall. …Kazuki was not looking at that pleasant exchange.
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“FUNN!” Beatrix visited a lariat on Damian, that small statured body was blown away until the end of the corridor. …Kazuki was not looking at that pleasant exchange.
   
 
“Beatrix, why are you here…”
 
“Beatrix, why are you here…”
   
“I heard that you are forming a unit to attack the revolting western Japan see. Because of that, we who have no ties of obligation the most and can move freely are the one that get dispatched the most. And also…Loki is in western Japan right? He is also most likely there.
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“I heard that you are forming a unit to counterattack the revolting west Japan see. Because of that we who have no ties of obligation the most and can move freely are the one that get dispatched at the foremost. And also…Loki is in the west Japan right? He is most likely there.
   
 
“We are not hearing about any of this though?” Akane-senpai questioned Beatrix in detail with a sullen expression.
 
“We are not hearing about any of this though?” Akane-senpai questioned Beatrix in detail with a sullen expression.
   
“We're going on ahead and coming here where the movement speed will be faster, rather than waiting for those slow procedures of the Knight Order to get finished. Fufufu, though there is also my wanting to see Kazuki’s shocked face that made me hurry here.”
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“We are going on ahead and coming here where the movement speed will be faster rather than waiting for those slow procedure in the Knight Order got finished. Fufufu, though there is also me wanting to see Kazuki’s shocked face that made me hurrying here.”
   
“Don’t take every single one of your actions with the purpose of making me shocked. It really did surprise me you know.”
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“Don’t take every single one of your action with the purpose of making me shocked. It really made me get surprised.”
   
 
In front of Kazuki’s eye, a magic vision that could only be seen by Kazuki floated.
 
In front of Kazuki’s eye, a magic vision that could only be seen by Kazuki floated.
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Beatrix―72 Damian―27 Eleonora―22
 
Beatrix―72 Damian―27 Eleonora―22
   
…Positivity level. It was temporary, but it was a display of proof that they were becoming comrades that were going to fight together with the King of Solomon. There was also a case like this where Kaya’s positivity level appeared temporarily in his vision.
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…Positivity level. It was temporary, but it was a display of proof that they were becoming a comrade that was going to fight together with the King of Solomon. There was also a case like this where Kaya’s positivity level appeared temporarily in his vision.
   
…However 72. This was already a positivity level where he could use her magic up to level 2.
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…However 72. This was already a positivity level where he could use her magic until level 2.
   
“I think they can be trusted, Akane-senpai. Loki, who is included in Yamato’s forces is also a sworn enemy for them after all. I have no doubt that they will become an important war potential.”
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“I think they can be trusted, Akane-senpai. Loki who is included in Yamato’s force is also a sworn enemy for them after all. I have no doubt that they will become an important war potential.”
   
“Is that so? Well, if you say so.”
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“Is that so? Well, if you said so.”
   
 
“Fuu―nn…well, isn’t it fine if they are strong? So then what are we going to do after this? Akane?”
 
“Fuu―nn…well, isn’t it fine if they are strong? So then what are we going to do after this? Akane?”
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Kanon-senpai looked back at Yagumo-senpai and tilted her head.
 
Kanon-senpai looked back at Yagumo-senpai and tilted her head.
   
“We will organize these 150 volunteers as a <Knight Academy regiment>. First we are going to form platoons with the high ranked students as the platoon captain.”
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“We will organize these 150 volunteers as <Knight Academy regiment>. First we are going to compose platoons with the high ranked students as the platoon captain.”
   
 
Pushing out her face from Yumeno-san’s side, Akane-senpai peered into Yumeno-san’s PC screen.
 
Pushing out her face from Yumeno-san’s side, Akane-senpai peered into Yumeno-san’s PC screen.
   
“Let’s make 15 platoons of ten people. Otonashi Kaguya, Hoshikaze Hikaru, Hayashizaki Kanae, and Hikita Kohaku, these four people will establish four or five platoons each as company commanders. Above these four people, Hayashizaki Kazuki will stand as the regimental commander.”
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“Let’s make 15 platoon of ten people. Otonashi Kaguya, Hoshikaze Hikaru, Hayashizaki Kanae, and Hikita Kohaku, these four people will establish four or five platoon each as company commanders. Even further above than this four people, Hayashizaki Kazuki will stand as the regimental commander.”
   
 
“I see, and then even higher than him is me right✩”
 
“I see, and then even higher than him is me right✩”
   
An orderly organization chart rose to the fore in Kazuki’s head. With organization then the order of communication would also become smoother.
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An orderly organization chart rose to the fore in Kazuki’s head. With organization then the communication of order would also become smoother.
   
 
“The Einherjar too, they will follow Hayashizaki Kazuki as one platoon.”
 
“The Einherjar too, they will follow Hayashizaki Kazuki as one platoon.”
   
“Kazuki’s subordinate? Just as I wished!” Beatrix gave a broad smile happily.
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“Kazuki’s subordinate? Just as I wish!” Beatrix gave a broad smile happily.
   
“Kaguya, Kanae-san, choose highly ranked and powerful students that have leadership quality from inside this list as platoon captains and form the platoons. As soon as the formation is complete, we are going to head to Shizuoka garrison. Because we left behind the 200 strong soldiers that escaped together with us there.”
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“Kaguya, Kanae-san, choose high ranked powerful students that have leadership quality from inside this list as platoon captain and form the platoons. As soon as the formation is over, we are going to head to Shizuoka garrison. Because we left behind the 200 strong soldiers that escaped together with us in Shizuoka.”
   
What she meant by garrison was the location where the soldiers were stationed. The word ‘base’ fitted Kazuki’s image more, but the word ‘base’ indicated a place that was equipped with particular modern facilities of the navy, the air force and the like. In regards to that, the force that the army was using didn’t need any special facility and had a mobile position, that was why it was called a garrison. In the era where the magicians became the main force of war, a fixed base was mostly unneeded and garrisons basically became the main position of the army.
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What she meant by garrison was the location where the soldiers were stationed. The word ‘base’ fitted Kazuki’s image more, but the word ‘base’ indicated a place that was equipped with particular modern facilities of the navy and the air force and the like. In regards to that, the force that the army was using didn’t need any special facility and had mobile position, that was why it was called garrison. In the era where the magicians became the main force of war, a fixed base was mostly unneeded and garrison basically became the main position of the army.
   
 
“200 people…is it?”
 
“200 people…is it?”
   
From the military force of 1200 people in western Japan, only a sixth of that force was able to escape to eastern Japan.
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From the military force of 1200 people in the west Japan, only a sixth of that force was able to escape to east Japan.
   
Looking at Kazuki whose thoughts came out in his expression, Akane-senpai looked down as if feeling responsibility in this.
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Looking at Kazuki whose thought came out in his expression, Akane-senpai looked down as if feeling a responsibility in this.
   
“With Chubu jurisdiction captured at the foremost, the archipelago was divided into parts completely. Because of that, the knights that were fighting even further west than Chubu jurisdiction were unable to escape to eastern Japan. If only we could hold out more, we would be able to make a path of retreat, however…”
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“With Chubu jurisdiction captured at the foremost, the archipelago was divided into parts completely. Because of that the knights that were fighting even further west than Chubu jurisdiction were unable to escape to east Japan. If only we could hold out more, we would be able to make a path of retreat however…”
   
 
“However it’s not like the remaining 1000 people were all captured as prisoners of war. Even if they couldn’t escape to eastern Japan, they went into hiding in towns and became resistance groups that still continue to fight even now. There should be many knights that are like that there! The ones who are commencing guerilla war is not only the enemy!!”
 
“However it’s not like the remaining 1000 people were all captured as prisoners of war. Even if they couldn’t escape to eastern Japan, they went into hiding in towns and became resistance groups that still continue to fight even now. There should be many knights that are like that there! The ones who are commencing guerilla war is not only the enemy!!”

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