Editing Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 5 Chapter 5

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“…What’s with you, calling out someone like me.”
 
“…What’s with you, calling out someone like me.”
   
Before moving out to implement the plan for real, Kazuki wanted to talk with Kazuha-senpai and called her out to the hall.
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Before moving out to implement the tactic for real, Kazuki wanted to talk with Kazuha-senpai and called her out to the corridor.
   
“There's a little something I want to give to senpai…though it’s not really that significant.”
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“There is a little something I want to give to senpai…though it’s not really something significant.”
   
“Give me something?”
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“Giving something?”
   
 
Kazuki suddenly presented a handmade bouquet created from the small flowers piling up in the hills and fields.
 
Kazuki suddenly presented a handmade bouquet created from the small flowers piling up in the hills and fields.
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“Yo, you especially picked them up for me…?”
 
“Yo, you especially picked them up for me…?”
   
“Yes. The atmosphere had become bloodthirsty from the battle and the attack. I was wondering whether I could soften the atmosphere a little and when I realized it, I had dashed to gather this.”
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“Yes. The atmosphere had became bloodthirsty from the battle and the attack. I was wondering whether I could soften the atmosphere a little and when I realized I had dashed to gather this.”
   
Kazuki was out of breath and talked while sweat was showing on his forehead. Although there was Enchant Aura, making a round trip to the mountain that he noticed from inside the bus and back at this busy time was not easy.
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Kazuki was out of breath and talked while sweats were showing on his forehead. Although there was Enchant Aura, but making a round trip to the mountain that he noticed from inside the bus and back in this busy time was not easy.
   
“Are you an idiot doing something like that in this kind of situation!? Something like flowers…for someone like me…”
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“Are you an idiot doing something like that in this kind of time!? Something like flower…for someone like me…”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai’s face reddened and looked the other way with a huff.
 
Kazuha-senpai’s face reddened and looked the other way with a huff.
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“I’m sorry, is this a bother for senpai?”
 
“I’m sorry, is this a bother for senpai?”
   
“It’s a bother-! Even if I receive flowers in this kind of place, I don’t have anything like a flower vase, it’s just too pitiful for the flowers if it was plucked and then withered away!!”
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“It’s a bother-! Even if I receive flowers in this kind of place, I don’t have anything like a flower vase, it’s just too pitiful for the flower if it was plucked and then withered away!!”
   
“Is, is that so…” So the flowers are a failure, thinking that, Kazuki became despondent.
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“Is, is that so…” So the flower is a failure, thinking that, Kazuki became despondent.
   
“…But to think of me when you looked at flowers and wanting to give them to me, even though you're tired after the fighting you went out of your way to collect them as a present for me….”
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“…But to think of me when you looked at flower and wanting to give it to me, so even though you are tired after the fighting you went out of your way to collect this and came to present it to me….”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai hugged the flower bouquet tightly on her chest and then a large heart mark come flying.
 
Kazuha-senpai hugged the flower bouquet tightly on her chest and then a large heart mark come flying.
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“Kazuha-senpai, actually after this…”
 
“Kazuha-senpai, actually after this…”
   
Kazuki spoke frankly about his plan for launching a surprise attack on the enemy by the students of the Knight Academy after this.
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Kazuki spoke frankly about his tactic of launching a surprise attack to the enemy by the students of the Knight Academy after this.
   
Kazuha-senpai gulped after hearing the importance of the fact that was just disclosed for her. Kazuki said to the bewildered girl.
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Kazuha-senpai gulped after hearing the importance of the fact that was just disclosed for her. Kazuki said to the taken-aback girl.
   
“That’s why if the plan goes well, please go on a date with me for the reward.”
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“That’s why if the tactic goes well, please go on a date with me for the reward.”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai became taken aback with all strength leaving her body.
 
Kazuha-senpai became taken aback with all strength leaving her body.
   
“What’s with that, when I thought that you were going to talk about a serious matter you suddenly asked for a reward!?”
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“What’s with that, when I thought that you were going to talk about a serious matter you suddenly asked for reward!?”
   
“Because, if there is a reward waiting then I’ll be able to work even harder.”
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“Because, if there is a reward waiting then I’ll be able to work even harder for that.”
   
“So you said that if you can go on a date with me then…you will be able to work harder?”
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“So you said that if you can go on a date with me then…you will be able to work hard?”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai asked Kazuki with an exhausted red face, as if she was utterly amazed by Kazuki’s approach. Her defense had been pushed back to the limit already. Kazuki nodded repeatedly with great enthusiasm.
 
Kazuha-senpai asked Kazuki with an exhausted red face, as if she was utterly amazed by Kazuki’s approach. Her defense had been pushed back to the limit already. Kazuki nodded repeatedly with great enthusiasm.
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However a heart mark came flying once more, then she talked with a reluctant appearance.
 
However a heart mark came flying once more, then she talked with a reluctant appearance.
   
“…Okay. But, only if you make a great achievement and this plan is a success, only after that.”
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“…Okay. But, only if you make a great achievement and this tactic is a success, only after that.”
   
 
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