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Miyabi-senpai and Shinobu-senpai didn’t mix with everyone and went away somewhere….
 
Miyabi-senpai and Shinobu-senpai didn’t mix with everyone and went away somewhere….
   
Kazuki, who was learning to operate the boat in isolation on the sea was finished in less than an hour.
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Kazuki who was learning to operate the boat in isolation on the sea was finished in less than an hour.
   
 
“Kazuki-oniisan, how much confidence do you have in the strategy this time desu?”
 
“Kazuki-oniisan, how much confidence do you have in the strategy this time desu?”
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Lotte was honest in all respects towards Kazuki, but it was not like she harbored that attitude toward just anyone.
 
Lotte was honest in all respects towards Kazuki, but it was not like she harbored that attitude toward just anyone.
   
Rather for Lotte who was born and raised in a royal court which was a whirlpool of schemes and plots, she would use Telepathy on anyone she met directly and unless she had confirmed that the other party didn’t hold any ill will she absolutely wouldn’t open up her heart.
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Rather for Lotte who was born and raised in a royal court which was a whirlpool of scheme and plot, she would use Telepathy to anyone she directly met and unless she had confirmed that the other party didn’t hold any ill will she absolutely wouldn’t open up her heart.
   
 
“I, think that the operation this time is dangerous desu. I don’t understand it well if I’m asked why I think that but…it’s like our direction is completely guided…”
 
“I, think that the operation this time is dangerous desu. I don’t understand it well if I’m asked why I think that but…it’s like our direction is completely guided…”
   
Kazuki nodded. Kazuki had a similar feeling like that too.
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Kazuki nodded. Kazuki too had a similar feeling like that.
   
 
The enemy’s hand didn’t reach until the seaside and its security was easy to infiltrate.
 
The enemy’s hand didn’t reach until the seaside and its security was easy to infiltrate.
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It was as if the government of Yamato didn’t think of Ise Imperial Shrine as important, their wariness was thin.
 
It was as if the government of Yamato didn’t think of Ise Imperial Shrine as important, their wariness was thin.
   
Those guys might also be unaware that if Amaterasu was defeated all the other Japanese Divas would also recover their sanity. After all, in a state of being a Wild God the Diva couldn’t communicate normally, so it was not odd even if they didn’t know but…they were too full of openings.
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Those guys might also be unaware that if Amaterasu was defeated all the other Japanese Divas would also recover their sanity. After all in a state of being a Wild God the Diva couldn’t communicate normally, so it was not odd even if they didn’t know but…they were too full of opening.
   
If this strategy succeeded against the enemy that was full of openings, the enemy’s battle strength would plummet and the victory and defeat would be decided. There was no other way but to use this strategy. However….
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If this strategy succeeded against the enemy that was full of opening, the enemy’s battle strength would plummet and the victory and defeat would be decided. There was no other way but to use this strategy. However….
   
 
“Certainly, this is just too convenient.”
 
“Certainly, this is just too convenient.”
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If in the worst case, the enemy force was waiting in ambush, then both Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai would be trapped in a desperate situation.
 
If in the worst case, the enemy force was waiting in ambush, then both Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai would be trapped in a desperate situation.
   
What if this convenient situation, [by some chance was set by someone?]
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What if this convenient situation, ''by some chance was set by someone? ''
   
“Is it that Commander Yamagata, doesn’t think well of Kazuki-oniisan?”
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“Is it that Commander Yamagata, doesn’t think well about Kazuki-oniisan?”
   
“I also think that might be the case. It doesn’t matter even if it’s a trap, maybe he thinks of me as something like a sacrificial pawn.”
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“I also think that it might be so. It doesn’t matter even if it’s a trap, maybe he think of me as something like a sacrificial pawn.”
   
The King of Solomon. For the humans that had already seized power in Japan presently, Kazuki’s existence couldn’t be said to be someone that they would necessarily welcome. Such an attitude was something that he had experienced personally in the past.
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The King of Solomon. For the humans that had already seized power in Japan presently, Kazuki’s existence couldn’t be said as someone that they would necessarily welcome. Such attitude was something that he had experienced personally in the past.
   
Actually, there was also another <ref>I'm not sure if the translator had any reason for this but i'll change it until otherwise stated</ref> reason to be hesitating. …Beatrix, who had covered him and fell into magic intoxication still hadn’t opened her eyes. If he could, he didn’t want to be separated from her side. There was something he wanted to immediately say the moment she was awake, even while she was still asleep he wanted to wait beside her.
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Actually there was also another<ref>I'm not sure if the translator had any reason for this but i'll change it until otherwise stated</ref> reason to be hesitating. …Beatrix who had covered him and fell into magic intoxication still hadn’t opened her eyes. If he could, he didn’t want to be separated from her side. There was something he wanted to immediately say the moment she was awake, even while she was still asleep he wanted to wait beside her.
   
 
“If onii-san feels any kind of danger, please escape immediately.”
 
“If onii-san feels any kind of danger, please escape immediately.”
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Lotte hugged Kazuki’s left arm tightly.
 
Lotte hugged Kazuki’s left arm tightly.
   
When push comes to shove he had to consider about the right timing to escape. Kazuki had acquired several magics that could fly in the sky. Because all of it was too flashy he couldn’t use them in the for infiltrations, but in the case of escape it didn’t matter even if he used those magics. If he flew to the sky using [Deep Striker] or [Blazing Wings] while accelerating himself using [Ride Lightning], there wouldn't be many magicians who could pursue him at that speed.
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When push comes to shove he had to consider about the right time to escape. Kazuki had acquired several magic that could fly in the sky. Because all of it was too flashy he couldn’t use them in the case of infiltration, but in the case of escape it didn’t matter even if he use those magic. If he flew to the sky using [Deep Striker] or [Blazing Wings] while accelerating himself using [Ride Lightning], there wasn’t supposed to be many magician who could pursue him at that speed.
   
He had to make a precise self-defense…above all, Kazuha-senpai was also together with him.
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He had to make a precise self-defense…above all Kazuha-senpai too was together with him.
   
Kazuha-senpai’s contracted Diva was Futsunushi no Kami of Japanese Mythology. That was why, even in the case he really fell into the worst situation, the enemy might overlook Kazuha-senpai as long as he presented himself….
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Kazuha-senpai’s contracted Diva was Futsunushi no Kami of Japanese Mythology. That was why even in the case he really fell into the worst situation, the enemy might overlook Kazuha-senpai as long as he presented himself….
   
“I won’t forgive Kazuki-oniisan if you yourself don’t get home either, okay desu?”
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“I won’t forgive Kazuki-oniisan if you yourself don’t get home too okay desu?”
   
Perhaps Lotte felt Kazuki’s feelings slightly, she was glaring at Kazuki with a scowl. Kazuki was “Sorry” and smiled wryly. He couldn’t help it that such feelings flashed inside his head for a moment though.
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Perhaps Lotte felt Kazuki’s feeling slightly, she was glaring at Kazuki with a scowl. Kazuki was “Sorry” and smiled wryly. However he couldn’t help it that such feeling flashed inside his head for a moment.
   
 
“I’m saying this because I’m just alone with Lotte but…”
 
“I’m saying this because I’m just alone with Lotte but…”
   
Surely the big shots of the government still hadn’t recognize Kazuki completely. Also, Solomon's 72 Pillars were still only in the stage of testing Kazuki. In regards to that, the combination of Lotte and Prometheus, for Kazuki was truly [companions that had no lies]. They are a duo that absolutely hid nothing from him.
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Surely the big shots of the government still hadn’t recognize Kazuki completely, the Solomon 72 Pillars was also still only in the stage of testing Kazuki. In regards to that the combination of Lotte and Prometheus, for Kazuki was truly [companions that had no lie]. They are a duo that absolutely had no hidden side from him.
   
If it was with them he had the feeling that he could be frank and spoke his true feelings.
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If it was with them he had the feeling that he could be frank and spoke his true feeling.
   
Of course Leme was also listening in on this conversation without <ref>I'm not sure if this was a mistake by the translators so I won't be changing them for now.</ref> butting in.
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Of course Leme was also listening in on this conversation with out<ref>i'm not sure if this was a mistake by the translators so i won't be changing them for now.</ref> butting in about anything.
   
“Futsunushi-no-Kami too, feels suspicious for some reason. Even though he doesn’t have any excuse like Leme or Prometheus that lost their memory, he only gave a small amount of information when he talked. He might have some kind of reason but…the one who created the chance for the strategy this time was Futsunushi-no-Kami.”
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“Futsunushi-no-Kami too, feels suspicious for some reason. Even though he doesn’t have any excuse like Leme or Prometheus that lost their memory, he only gave small amount of information when he talked. He might have some kind of reason but…the one who created the chance for the strategy this time was Futsunushi-no-Kami.”
   
 
If in the case that this strategy was led on by someone, the one who would fall under suspicion at the top of the list was Futsunushi-no-Kami.
 
If in the case that this strategy was led on by someone, the one who would fall under suspicion at the top of the list was Futsunushi-no-Kami.
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“Is Futsunushi-no-Kami-san a spy from Yamato and is he luring Kazuki-oniisan right now?”
 
“Is Futsunushi-no-Kami-san a spy from Yamato and is he luring Kazuki-oniisan right now?”
   
As expected, even for Lotte she couldn’t sense as far as a Diva’s state of mind.
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As expected, even for Lotte she couldn’t sense until as far as a Diva’s state of mind.
   
 
“No, I don’t think that Futsunushi-no-Kami is in Yamato’s camp…”
 
“No, I don’t think that Futsunushi-no-Kami is in Yamato’s camp…”
   
The explanation of [the nature possessed by Wild Gods] that Futsunushi no Kami gave to Kazuki had already been proven as truth presently, from how Ame-no-Uzume returned to her senses.
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The explanation of [the nature possessed by Wild God] that Futsunushi no Kami gave to Kazuki had already been proven as truth presently, from how Ame-no-Uzume returned to her sanity.
   
In the first place, from how Kazuki could use Futsunushi-no-Kami’s magic, [there was no doubt that Futsunushi no Kami was fundamentally an ally, but]….
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In the first place from how Kazuki could use Futsunushi-no-Kami’s magic, ''there was no doubt that Futsunushi no Kami was fundamentally an ally, but''….
   
 
“Futsunushi-no-Kami too, might be planning to test me. He is not luring me into a trap from Yamato, but perhaps he is inviting me to the trial location of Japanese Mythology…?”
 
“Futsunushi-no-Kami too, might be planning to test me. He is not luring me into a trap from Yamato, but perhaps he is inviting me to the trial location of Japanese Mythology…?”

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