Editing Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 6 Chapter 2

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But that feeling was sinking gloomily little by little. He became fed up before long.
 
But that feeling was sinking gloomily little by little. He became fed up before long.
   
Of course it was not because he held any dissatisfaction between the two of them. The problem was the enemy.
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Of course it was not because he held any dissatisfaction between the two of them. The problem was—the enemy.
   
He cut and cut and felt the thick defensive magic power where the enemy kept standing back up, this crowd of armored warriors. While he kept cutting down the armored warriors no matter how many times, “This is bad” he couldn’t clear away such anxiety inside him.
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He cut and cut and felt the thick defensive magic power where the enemy kept standing back up, this crowd of armored warrior. While he kept cutting down the armored warriors no matter how many time, “This is bad” he couldn’t clear away such anxiety inside him.
   
There was still some allowance in his stamina and magic power. However even now the armored warriors that were scattered all over the Haunted Ground ought to be converging in on their location here following the mark of the cloud string that was hanging down from the sky.
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There was still some allowance in his stamina and magic power. However even now the armored warriors that were scattered all over the Haunted Ground ought to be converging in their location here following the mark of the cloud string that was hanging down from the sky.
   
The situation had become something he couldn’t laugh at. …What’s going on with this enemy’s toughness?
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The situation had become something he couldn’t laugh about. …What’s going on with this enemy’s toughness?
   
 
In the first place, what in the world are these enemies? Were they human or Demon Beast, he couldn’t even make that distinction.
 
In the first place, what in the world are these enemies? Were they human or Demon Beast, he couldn’t even make that distinction.
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Their number and toughness became a dreadful pressure, they kept surging forward.
 
Their number and toughness became a dreadful pressure, they kept surging forward.
   
At that time in spite of the dome of clouds that isolated the Haunted Ground, above Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s head something was traversing fast―it was a single crow, perching on top of the power pole at the side of the street.
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At that time in spite of the dome of cloud that isolated the Haunted Ground, above Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s head something was traversing fast―it was a single crow, perching on top of the electricity pole at the side of the street.
   
Yatagarasu―a polished bright copper disk was caught between its beak.
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Yatagarasu―a polished bright copper disk was caught between its beaks.
   
 
Yatagarasu raised a high-pitched voice from the edge of its beak. That was a spell.
 
Yatagarasu raised a high-pitched voice from the edge of its beak. That was a spell.
   
“…O exalted light illuminating the seven seas and all nations! Gather in my lord’s idol, emit the light that purifies the defilement…Yata no Kagami <ref>Yata no Kagami (the eight-span mirror; one of the Imperial Regalia)</ref>・{{furigana|Youka Issen|Sun Flower Flash}}!”
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“…O exalted light illuminating the seven seas and all nations! Gather in my lord’s idol, emit the light that purify the impurity…Yata no Kagami<ref>Yata no Kagami (the eight-span mirror; one of the Imperial Regalia)</ref>・{{furigana|Youka Issen|Sun Flower Flash}}!”
   
The disk appended in the beak, the <bronze mirror> released a powerful light.
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The disk appended in the beak&mdash;the <bronze mirror> released a powerful light.
   
He reflexively closed his eyes, but even so, the light was so intense it felt like his retina was burned with whiteness.
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He reflexively closed his eyelids, but even so it was light so abundant it felt like his retina was burned with whiteness.
   
 
Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai who had their eyes closed were supposed to become defenseless, but there was no attack coming at all during that interval.
 
Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai who had their eyes closed were supposed to become defenseless, but there was no attack coming at all during that interval.
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When they opened their eyes, there were a lot of young people in casual clothes collapsed unconsciously in front of Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s eyes.
 
When they opened their eyes, there were a lot of young people in casual clothes collapsed unconsciously in front of Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s eyes.
   
There were no armored warriors, he couldn’t think of any explanation other than that the light that Yatagarasu emitted made the armored warriors become like this. The fainted young people had fallen into symptoms that looked like magic intoxication.
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There were no armored warriors&mdash;no, he couldn’t think of any explanation other than that the light that Yatagarasu emitted made the armored warriors become like this. The fainted young people had fallen into symptoms that looked like magic intoxication.
   
Kazuki looked around his surrounding and what he saw made his eyes open even wider. The surrounding area was recovering from being a Haunted Ground into a normal street corner. The original scenery of Ise's city street was returning.
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Kazuki looked around his surrounding and what he saw made his eyes open even wider. The surrounding area was recovering back from a Haunted Ground into a normal street corner. The original scenery of Ise city’s street was returning there.
   
“The light just now is…offensive magic? It shaved off that thick defensive magic power with one attack? All those enemies!?”
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“The light just now is…offensive magic? It shaved off that thick defensive magic power with one attack? All that number of enemies!?”
   
 
“…No, that magic just now is purge magic. It has a power that can purify even stronger evil than what Futsunushi no Kami’s level 3 magic [Futsu no Mitama] can do. It’s the only power I in this form can use.”
 
“…No, that magic just now is purge magic. It has a power that can purify even stronger evil than what Futsunushi no Kami’s level 3 magic [Futsu no Mitama] can do. It’s the only power I in this form can use.”
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Yatagarasu pointed at the fainted young people with its beak.
 
Yatagarasu pointed at the fainted young people with its beak.
   
“These young people had Wild Gods reside in their bodies and acted violently because of that magic power. But because the light from before got rid of [the connections with the Wild Gods] that were embedded within their minds, they are now returned to their original human appearance.”
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“These young people had Wild Gods reside in their body and they acted violently because of that magic power. But because the light from before got rid of [the connections with the Wild Gods] that were embed within their mind, they are now returned to their original human appearance.”
   
The contents of the armored warriors; everyone of the fainted young people were between their teens to their twenties. Many were female but a few males were mixed in. They were people of the generation that were most strong in magic power.
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The contents of the armored warriors&mdash;everyone of the fainted young people were between their teens until twenties. Many were female but a few male were mixed. They were people of the generation that were most strong in magic power.
   
 
“…So we were saved by you.”
 
“…So we were saved by you.”
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Kazuki stared at Yatagarasu while still maintaining his vigilance. Even while being vigilant―he had to obtain information regarding this mysterious situation from this guy.
 
Kazuki stared at Yatagarasu while still maintaining his vigilance. Even while being vigilant―he had to obtain information regarding this mysterious situation from this guy.
   
All the armored warriors in this Haunted Ground weren’t supposed to be completely annihilated just with this, but the surroundings were strangely filled with silence.
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All the armored warriors in this Haunted Ground weren’t supposed to be completely annihilated just with this, but the surrounding was strangely filled with silence.
   
“Even if you said that I saved you two, these people could return to their original appearance only because the both of you had inflicted damage to them. As long as their defensive magic power was still considerably thick, even that light won’t be able to reach to the depths of that curse. To defeat them efficiently, there is a need for us to cooperate.”
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“Even if you said that I saved you two, these people could return to their original appearance only because the both of you had inflicted damage to them. As long as their defensive magic power was still considerably thick, even that light won’t be able to reach until the depth of the curse. To defeat them efficiently, there is a need for us to cooperate.”
   
 
Yatagarasu lightly flapped its wings and perched on top of Kazuki’s shoulder. It was an action that was appealing to him that they were comrades.
 
Yatagarasu lightly flapped its wings and perched on top of Kazuki’s shoulder. It was an action that was appealing to him that they were comrades.
   
“…Were these people transformed into Demon Beasts?”
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“…Were these people transformed into Demon Beast?”
   
 
Kazuki asked while looking around his surroundings. The scenery where the buildings looked abandoned with the loss of color and weathered condition had returned into a normal street of stores and houses. However, it only applied to Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s immediate surroundings, in the distance―the direction of the Haunted Ground’s center still looked like an extensive Haunted Ground.
 
Kazuki asked while looking around his surroundings. The scenery where the buildings looked abandoned with the loss of color and weathered condition had returned into a normal street of stores and houses. However, it only applied to Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s immediate surroundings, in the distance―the direction of the Haunted Ground’s center still looked like an extensive Haunted Ground.

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