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===Part 8===
 
===Part 8===
   
“If we have arrived here already, then it’ll only take a little more until the Imperial Shrine’s sacred main temple.”
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“If we have arrived until here, it’ll only take a little more until the Imperial Shrine’s sacred main temple.”
   
 
The Takasugi brothers had also left following Ikousai.
 
The Takasugi brothers had also left following Ikousai.
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They were finally going to reach the end of their journey.
 
They were finally going to reach the end of their journey.
   
After they advanced through the gravel path drawing a gentle arc, they hit into a stone stairway. Ahead of the stone stairs there was a shrine archway. Passing through it, finally they saw [that].
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After they advanced through the gravel path drawing a gentle arc, they hit into a stone stair. Ahead of the stone stair there was a shrine archway. Passing through it, finally they saw [that].
   
An architectural style of ancient times that even made them feel the connection with Takakura-style warehouses from the Yayoi period. It was built based from <the only Shinmei Dzukuri> <ref>Shinmei Dzukuri is a unique phrase in Japan. Shinmei here can refer to Amaterasu or god. While Shinmei Dzukuri means building a shrine with an architecture style based on that of Ise Imperial Shrine. So the meaning of the phrase in the brackets here is that the building that Kazuki and co are seeing is the originator of all the Ise style shrines throughout Japan.</ref>, yet the feel of the material felt like it was brand new. That was because every twenty years the main building of Ise Imperial Shrine was remodeled and <Shikinen Senguu> <ref>Construction of a new shrine and transfer of the enshrined objects from the old to the new, occurring at a regular, preordained time</ref> was performed. Because the only Shinmei Dzukuri was built using ancient construction techniques, its endurance was short and resulted in the necessity of reconstruction periodically no matter what.
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An architectural style of ancient times that even made them feel the connection with Takakura-style warehouse from Yayoi period. It was built based from <the only Shinmei Dzukuri><ref>Shinmei Dzukuri is a unique phrase in Japan. Shinmei here can refer to Amaterasu or god. While Shinmei Dzukuri means building a shrine with architecture style based on that of Ise Imperial Shrine. So the meaning of the phrase in the bracket here is that the building that Kazuki and co are seeing is the originator of all the Ise style shrine in the whole Japan.</ref>, yet the feel of the material felt like it was brand new. That was because every twenty years the main building of Ise Imperial Shrine was remodeled and <Shikinen Senguu><ref>Construction of a new shrine and transfer of the enshrined object from the old to the new, occurring at a regular, preordained time</ref> was performed. Because the only Shinmei Dzukuri was built using ancient construction technique, its endurance’s age was short and it resulted in the necessity of reconstruction periodically no matter what.
   
At the time of its reconstruction, it followed the style and all the rituals from the ancient times strictly and thoroughly. Its appearance from time immemorial was obstinately protected just like how it originally was. This building was not in an unchanging condition since the ancient times until the olden days. Yet exactly because of the periodic rebuilding, its unchanging appearance could be preserved for more than a thousand years in the truest meaning.
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At the time of its reconstruction, it followed the style and all the ritual from the ancient times strictly and thoroughly. Its appearance from time immemorial was obstinately protected just like how it originally was. This building was not in unchanging condition since the ancient times until the olden days. Yet exactly because of the periodic rebuilding, its unchanging appearance could be preserved for more than a thousand years in the true meaning.
   
 
Of course with that method it would take far more expense and labor compared to merely preserving the building.
 
Of course with that method it would take far more expense and labor compared to merely preserving the building.
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“From here on, normal people are not allowed to enter.” Saying that, Kazuha-senpai hesitated to proceed.
 
“From here on, normal people are not allowed to enter.” Saying that, Kazuha-senpai hesitated to proceed.
   
“That’s true, but if you two don’t enter then we cannot begin anything.”
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“That’s so, but if you two don’t enter then we cannot begin anything.”
   
 
Yatagarasu entered without care with bobbing steps inside as if this building was its own home.
 
Yatagarasu entered without care with bobbing steps inside as if this building was its own home.
   
The gate opened automatically on its own.
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The gate opened automatically by its own.
   
There was another archway inside the outer fence. The inner wall obstructed the path. There were several layers of closed walls and gates in order to reject visitors coming to the inner sanctuary.
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There was an archway again inside the outer fence. The inner wall obstructed the path. There were several layers of closed walls and gates in order to reject visitors coming to the inner sanctuary.
   
 
With the guidance of Yatagarasu, they passed through several gates.
 
With the guidance of Yatagarasu, they passed through several gates.
   
And then the inner sanctuary that even resembled the Takakura-style warehouse in history textbooks appeared in front of their eyes. It had a simple architecture with a thatch roof, but its linear shape made them feel its artificial bearing rather than a respect towards nature.
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And then the inner sanctuary that even resembled the Takakura-style warehouse in the history textbook appeared in front of their eyes. It had a simple architecture with thatch roof, but its linear shaping made them feel its artificial bearing rather than a respect towards nature.
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Yatagarasu proceeded forward through the stair that ascended the raised-floor building with bobbing advance and gestured Kazuki to go inside.
   
Yatagarasu proceeded forward through the stairs that ascended the raised-floor building with a bobbing advance and gestured Kazuki to go inside.
 
   
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One surface of the inside was stained with blood.
 
One surface of the inside was stained with blood.
   
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Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai were dumbfounded and lost their words. The bloodstains had blackened and permeated into the surface. It was clear just with one glance that a long time had passed since the blood was spilled. The amount of the bloodstains was enough to make them able to imagine that a person had died in that space.
 
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Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai were dumbfounded and lost their words. The bloodstain had blackened and permeated into the surface. It was clear just with one glance that a long time had passed since the blood was spilled. The amount of the bloodstain was enough to make them able to imagine that a person had died in that space.
   
 
“Amaterasu’s contractor was killed here through the hands of Yamato’s government and Susanoo.”
 
“Amaterasu’s contractor was killed here through the hands of Yamato’s government and Susanoo.”
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A cold shiver ran through Kazuki’s spine.
 
A cold shiver ran through Kazuki’s spine.
   
Don’t tell me…are they going to ask me to [conquer a ghost]!?
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Don’t tell me…are they going to ask me to ''conquer a ghost''!?
   
“The body of Amaterasu’s contractor had been annihilated, but Amaterasu narrowly managed to save her soul and sealed it inside Amaterasu’s Territory. On top having no physical body, if the situation stays like this then her fate will be to naturally vanish together with Amaterasu. That’s why your cooperation…the <power of bonds> that you possess is necessary. If Amaterasu recovers her power and from there also ties a bond with you and obtains power, the girl will be able to regain her physical body.”
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“The body of Amaterasu’s contractor had been annihilated, but Amaterasu narrowly managed to save her soul and sealed it inside Amaterasu’s Territory. On top having no flesh body, if the situation stays like this then her fate will be to naturally vanish together with Amaterasu. That’s why your cooperation…the <power of bond> that you possessed is necessary. If Amaterasu recovers her power and from there she also ties a bond with you and obtain power, the girl will be able to regain her flesh body.”
   
“You're saying that a dead human can be restored to life!?”
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“You are saying that a dead human can be restored to life!?”
   
Was such a thing possible? Kazuki had also once resurrected Mio from the grip of death using Phoenix’s level 10 magic. But such an event was supposed to be completely different compared to reviving an existence that didn’t even have her corpse remaining and the only thing left behind of her was the bloodstains that had already dried on the floor.
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Was such a thing possible? Kazuki too had once resurrected Mio from the grip of death using Phoenix’s level 10 magic. But such event was supposed to be completely different compared to reviving an existence that didn’t even have her corpse remaining and the only thing left behind of her was the bloodstain that had already dried on the floor.
   
“The girl still hasn’t welcomed a complete death yet. Her soul is preserved through Amaterasu’s power. But the currently weakened Amaterasu simply doesn’t have enough strength. If she can borrow that power by becoming a subordinate to Solomon's Mythology…”
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“The girl still hasn’t welcomed a complete death yet. Her soul is preserved through Amaterasu’s power. But the currently weakened Amaterasu simply doesn’t have enough strength. If she can borrow that power by becoming a subordinate to Solomon Mythology…”
   
 
“Does Amaterasu want to save that contractor so much that she will even go as far as subordinating herself to another Mythology?”
 
“Does Amaterasu want to save that contractor so much that she will even go as far as subordinating herself to another Mythology?”
   
Yatagarasu was trotting ahead to the center of the sacred main temple’s floor. Over there was the center of the bloodstains' spread.
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Yatagarasu was trotting ahead to the center of the sacred main temple’s floor. Over there was the center of the blood stain’s spread.
   
“Amaterasu deeply loved that [girl]. Therefore she didn’t raise that girl to become Wakoku King and abandoned her battle with Susanoo. Yamato's government and Susanoo were furious because of that and killed the girl before pressing Amaterasu to choose a new contractor to become King. But for Amaterasu it was inconceivable to even make a contract with another human. And so Amaterasu abandoned everything and shut herself inside the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. …Please follow me.”
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“Amaterasu deeply loved that [girl]. Therefore she didn’t raise that girl to become Wakoku King and abandoned her battle with Susanoo. Yamato government and Susanoo were furious because of that and killed the girl before pressing Amaterasu to choose a new contractor to become King. But for Amaterasu it was inconceivable to even make a contract with another human. And so Amaterasu abandoned everything and shut herself inside the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. …Please follow me.”
   
 
With a jerk, Yatagarasu kicked the floor of the sacred main temple. Thereupon the floorboard came off and a hole was opened.
 
With a jerk, Yatagarasu kicked the floor of the sacred main temple. Thereupon the floorboard came off and a hole was opened.
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“<The True August Pillar>…This is the entrance to Amaterasu’s residence, the path leading to the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. Amaterasu is ahead through this.”
 
“<The True August Pillar>…This is the entrance to Amaterasu’s residence, the path leading to the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. Amaterasu is ahead through this.”
   
“How do we enter inside through this miniature sized thing?”
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“How do we enter inside through this miniature size thing?”
   
“Of course its destination is <Astrum>. The Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave is a district of Amaterasu’s Territory. Being sealed inside that healing space and isolated from everything else, Amaterasu can just barely hold her ground of having herself vanishing little by little. Supply power to Amaterasu from the outside, if she cannot go out from the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave then like this she also cannot talk with you. Touch your hand to this True August Pillar and close your eyes, then please unify your {{furigana|consciousness and subconsciousness|Trance}}. If you do that then it will synchronize with the mind of you two and can guide you to Astrum.”
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“Of course its destination is <Astrum>. The Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave is a district of Amaterasu’s Territory. Being sealed inside that healing space and isolated from everything else, Amaterasu can just barely hold her ground of having herself vanishing little by little. Supply power to Amaterasu from the outside, if she cannot go out from the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave then like this she also cannot talk with you. Touch your hand to this True August Pillar and close your eyes, then please unify your {{furigana|consciousness and subconsciousness|Trance}}. If you do that then it will synchronize with the mind of you two and it can guide you to Astrum.”
   
Kazuki remembered about the contract ceremony after the entrance ceremony. At that time he was guided by Kaguya-senpai and dove into the Diva’s Territory in Astrum. What he was going to do after this was the same thing as that.
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Kazuki remembered about the contract ceremony after the entrance ceremony. At that time he was guided by Kaguya-senpai and dove into the Diva’s Territory in Astrum. What he was going to do after this was the same thing like that.
   
“Pass through <Yomotsu Hirasaka> <ref>Yomotsu Hirasaka is a hill where it can lead to Yomi (world of the dead) in Japanese Myth.</ref> and head to <the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave>.”
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“Pass through <Yomotsu Hirasaka><ref>Yomotsu Hirasaka is a hill where it can lead to Yomi (world of the dead) in Japanese Myth.</ref> and head to <the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave>.”
   
“…Isn’t Yomotsu Hirasaka the place that continues to the world after death?”
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“…Isn’t Yomotsu Hirasaka the place that continue to the world of after death?”
   
 
Kazuki asked frightfully with ominous presentiment. He came along with them this far believing that their interest matched each other, but he was going to be troubled if he became a dead person just like this.
 
Kazuki asked frightfully with ominous presentiment. He came along with them this far believing that their interest matched each other, but he was going to be troubled if he became a dead person just like this.
   
“That’s a misinterpretation of the myth. …Yomotsu Hirasaka is a corridor that linked the world with different worlds. It is the exit and entrance that leads to Takamagahara <ref>The heavens</ref> which is the Territory of Japanese Divas.”
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“That’s a misinterpretation of the myth. …Yomotsu Hirasaka is a corridor that linked the world with different worlds. It is the exit and entrance that leads to Takamagahara<ref>The heavens</ref> which is the Territory of Japanese Divas.”
   
 
Yatagarasu went on “Anyway, please close your eyes.”, like that it prompted Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai to proceed.
 
Yatagarasu went on “Anyway, please close your eyes.”, like that it prompted Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai to proceed.

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