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On the surface of that darkness, a faint ripple spread. This was supposed to be the guide according to Yatagarasu. The flow of the ripple showed Kazuki’s consciousness the direction he needed to go.
 
On the surface of that darkness, a faint ripple spread. This was supposed to be the guide according to Yatagarasu. The flow of the ripple showed Kazuki’s consciousness the direction he needed to go.
   
Kazuki moved forward through the darkness as if swimming. Gradually, Kazuki became able to feel a different someone’s consciousness heading in the same direction and getting close to his own consciousness. This is…Kazuha-senpai’s warmth.
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Kazuki moved forward through the darkness as if swimming. Gradually, Kazuki became able to feel a different someone’s consciousness heading to the same direction getting close to his own consciousness. This is…Kazuha-senpai’s warmth.
   
Gradually he could feel their own sense of existence and the surrounding darkness solidifying, becoming a definite something. Even inside the Astrum, Kazuki’s appearance was still wearing the casual Japanese clothes for use in the infiltration operation. Kazuha-senpai, who walked together with him side-by-side was in her Magic Dress appearance.
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Gradually he could feel their own sense of existence and the surrounding darkness solidifying, becoming a definite something. Even inside the Astrum, Kazuki’s appearance was still wearing the casual Japanese clothes for the use in the infiltration operation. Kazuha-senpai who walked together with him side-by-side was in her Magic Dress appearance.
   
 
In the darkness in front of their eyes, a wide hill that shone slightly came to the front.
 
In the darkness in front of their eyes, a wide hill that shone slightly came to the front.
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“What’s with you, don’t touch me as you please.”
 
“What’s with you, don’t touch me as you please.”
   
Hearing words so cold it made him doubt his ears, Kazuki felt his hand get shaken off.
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Having words so cold it made him doubt his ear what returned at him, Kazuki felt his hand get shook off.
   
 
“…Is there something wrong?”
 
“…Is there something wrong?”
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For some reason he intuitively felt weird rather than anxious.
 
For some reason he intuitively felt weird rather than anxious.
   
“There is nothing particularly wrong. I have said this all the time right, I hate someone like you. You are being overly-familiar with me. It’s gross.”
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“There is nothing particularly wrong. I have said this all the time right, I hate someone like you. You are being over-familiar with me. It’s gross.”
   
 
Inside the darkness, he couldn’t ascertain her expression. However only the cold gaze piercing him was looking bright.
 
Inside the darkness, he couldn’t ascertain her expression. However only the cold gaze piercing him was looking bright.
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Something cold ran through Kazuki’s spine.
 
Something cold ran through Kazuki’s spine.
   
“Certainly, I have also thought before that this ability is too one-sidedly unfair. But that doesn’t mean that I decide my attitude only based on this power. Even without this, I intend to try to understand my companions.”
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“Certainly I have also thought before that this ability is too one-sidedly unfair. But that doesn’t mean that I decide my attitude only based on this power. Even without this, I intend to try to understand my companion.”
   
 
Kazuki forcefully gripped back the hand that shook him off.
 
Kazuki forcefully gripped back the hand that shook him off.
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“What senpai is saying is strange.”
 
“What senpai is saying is strange.”
   
“It’s not strange. These are my true feelings. I'm not lying.”
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“It’s not strange. This is my true feelings. I don’t say any lies.”
   
 
“Certainly, senpai right now doesn’t seem like you are telling any lies. However I believe that it’s highly unlikely for senpai to say that kind of thing to me. …What’s wrong?”
 
“Certainly, senpai right now doesn’t seem like you are telling any lies. However I believe that it’s highly unlikely for senpai to say that kind of thing to me. …What’s wrong?”
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Kazuki stubbornly questioned without averting his eyes from the cold gaze directed at him.
 
Kazuki stubbornly questioned without averting his eyes from the cold gaze directed at him.
   
Thereupon after a moment of silence, on the other side of the darkness Kazuha-senpai’s contour melted like mud.
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Thereupon after a moment of silence, on the other side of the darkness Kazuha-senpai’s contour melted like a mud.
   
 
Even the sensation inside his clutching hand vanished. The existence that looked like Kazuha-senpai was disappearing.
 
Even the sensation inside his clutching hand vanished. The existence that looked like Kazuha-senpai was disappearing.
   
It was an imposter. Who was the one that took such a distasteful action…. It made him recall the time he received Miyabi-senpai’s mental attack before. Inside a mental world, it was not strange for anything to happen.
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It was an imposter. Who was the one that did such a bad taste action…. It made him recall the time he received Miyabi-senpai’s mental attack before. Inside a mental world, it was not strange for anything to happen.
   
However, even so, don’t fuck around. This kind of Kazuha-senpai is just absurd.
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However even so, don’t fuck around. This kind of Kazuha-senpai is just absurd.
   
The imposter disappeared, but Kazuki started feeling on edge in his chest.
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The imposter disappeared, but Kazuki became feeling on edge in his chest.
   
 
[Women are not your toys.]
 
[Women are not your toys.]
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Kazuki recalled how his reasoning was washed away by Hikaru-senpai’s unaware temptation.
 
Kazuki recalled how his reasoning was washed away by Hikaru-senpai’s unaware temptation.
   
…After I possessed this kind of ability, I mustn’t see girls as [an object to fulfill my own desires].
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…After I possessed this kind of ability, I mustn’t see girls as ''an object to fulfill my own desire''.
   
 
At the same time with Kazuki secretly resolving himself, the space was filled with white light.
 
At the same time with Kazuki secretly resolving himself, the space was filled with white light.
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A mysterious voice echoed. It was a different voice from Yatagarasu. And then―
 
A mysterious voice echoed. It was a different voice from Yatagarasu. And then―
   
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When he next noticed, Kazuki was standing in a strange space. Under his feet was bright yellow, the sky was bright blue. Above the sky was the very picture of round clouds and red sun floating.
 
When he next noticed, Kazuki was standing in a strange space. Under his feet was bright yellow, the sky was bright blue. Above the sky was the very picture of round clouds and red sun floating.
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The only thing in that space that stuck out like a sore thumb with how real it looked was the gigantic rock mountain that powerfully towered up high in front of their eyes. …Surely this was the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave.
 
The only thing in that space that stuck out like a sore thumb with how real it looked was the gigantic rock mountain that powerfully towered up high in front of their eyes. …Surely this was the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave.
   
Beside Kazuki, there was Kazuha-senpai. Senpai was shaking with slight repeated trembling like a small animal while her eyes were teary.
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Beside Kazuki, there was Kazuha-senpai. Senpai was shaking with slight repeated tremble like a small animal while her eyes were teary.
   
 
“Senpai, what’s wrong? By any chance…”
 
“Senpai, what’s wrong? By any chance…”
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“What in the world happened?”
 
“What in the world happened?”
   
“Ha, Hayashizaki said some cruel words to me…. Like my sword skill is just some hack's and that no matter how long I train I won’t improve, that I am the most Totally Worthless student of the Sword Division, or that I’m a Natural Born Totally Worthless<ref>The two titles there are said in English</ref>…”
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“Ha, Hayashizaki said some cruel words to me…. Like my sword skill is just some hack that no matter how long I train I won’t improve, that I am the Total Worthless of the Sword Division, or that I’m a Natural Born Total Worthless<ref>The two titles there are said in English</ref>…”
   
 
“There is really a mean Hayashizaki out there isn’t it? Though if it’s me then I absolutely don’t think of anything like that.”
 
“There is really a mean Hayashizaki out there isn’t it? Though if it’s me then I absolutely don’t think of anything like that.”
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Kazuha-senpai took hold of Kazuki’s hand tightly. It was the very sensation of living flesh itself.
 
Kazuha-senpai took hold of Kazuki’s hand tightly. It was the very sensation of living flesh itself.
   
“I, I’m glad…this is the real Hayashizaki…. I knew that you wouldn't say something cruel like that, I believed, but…even so…that cold gaze, was really scary, it was uneasy…”
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“I, I’m glad…this is the real Hayashizaki…. I knew that you won’t say something cruel like that, I believed, but…even so…that cold gaze, was really scary, it was uneasy…”
   
 
“Senpai’s imposter too said to me that you hate a harem guy so much.”
 
“Senpai’s imposter too said to me that you hate a harem guy so much.”
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Kazuki ignored Kazuha-senpai’s frail voice “Get away from me―” and like that he embraced her warmly and softly for a while.
 
Kazuki ignored Kazuha-senpai’s frail voice “Get away from me―” and like that he embraced her warmly and softly for a while.
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“The both of you, to the <Itsuki☆Channel>-! Welcome~”
 
“The both of you, to the <Itsuki☆Channel>-! Welcome~”
   
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Suddenly, a voice echoed. Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai parted their bodies and turned to look at the voice’s direction.
 
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Suddenly, a voice echoed. Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai parted their body and turned to look at the voice’s direction.
   
 
In front of the rock wall where there should be no one until now, there was a strange group of three.
 
In front of the rock wall where there should be no one until now, there was a strange group of three.
   
The one in the front was a girl wearing a gothic Lolita dress. White skin like an elf's. A high tension smiling face.
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The one in the front was a girl wearing a gothic Lolita dress. White skin like an elf. A high tension smiling face.
   
At her right side, a pure white bald middle-aged man. An unrealistic outward appearance. That was not the shape of a real human but a deformed appearance like a stuffed toy, a small middle aged man with four heads tall <ref>Ratio of total height to length of the head</ref>. With white skin that had no color at all, his head and his body were strangely slackening.
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At her right side, a pure white bald middle-aged man. An unrealistic outward appearance. That was not the shape of a real human but a deformed appearance like a stuffed toy, a small middle aged man with four heads tall<ref>Ratio of total height to length of the head</ref>. With white skin that had no color at all, his head and also his body were strangely slackening.
   
On the opposite side at the left, was a shark. Likewise, it was also a shark with a deformed appearance just like a stuffed doll's. It had human limbs growing out of its body and was standing erect.
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On the opposite side at the left, was a shark. Likewise it was also a shark with deformed appearance just like a stuffed doll. It had human limbs growing out on its body and was standing erect.
   
A goth loli girl, white middle-aged man, shark; it was an incomprehensible trio standing there.
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A goth loli girl, white middle-aged man, shark&mdash;an incomprehensible trio was standing there.
   
 
[[image:Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou Vol.06 122.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[image:Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou Vol.06 122.jpg|thumb]]
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The middle-aged man and shark besides her followed after her.
 
The middle-aged man and shark besides her followed after her.
   
“The proud local character of Ise City, the guy that is often said to have no consistency when chewed, however I, who is famed for the texture of my fluffy skin, the [Ise-Udon-ojisan] <ref>Udon, a type of noodle. Oji-san mean mister or uncle or old man</ref> and!”
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“The proud local character of Ise City, the guy that is often said to have no consistency when chewed, however I who is famed for the texture of my fluffy skin, the [Ise-Udon-ojisan]<ref>Udon, a type of noodle. Oji-san mean mister or uncle or old man</ref> and!”
   
“…Similarly the specialty of Ise [the dipping shark Tarou] forming our group of three…will guide you in this show samee <ref>This shark guy always adds -same in the end of his sentences. Same mean shark in Japanese.</ref>…”
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“…Similarly the specialty of Ise [the dipping shark Tarou] forming our group of three…will guide you in this show samee<ref>This shark guy always add -same in the end of his sentence. Same mean shark in Japanese.</ref>…”
   
   
“Yaa―ayy!” The goth loli girl―whose name was Kamimura Itsuki thrust her hand up high.
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“Yaa―ayy!” The goth loli girl―seems her name was Kamimura Itsuki thrust her hand up high.
   
“This is the start of the carnival oo <ref>Same as the shark, Udon-ojisan also adds -oo in the end of his sentences.</ref>!!” Ise-Udon-ojisan too wriggled around dancing with his short arms and feet while talking. Beside them, the dipping shark Tarou was groaning “Samee…”.
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“This is the start of the carnival oo<ref>Same like the shark, Udon-ojisan also add -oo in the end of his sentence.</ref>!!” Ise-Udon-ojisan too wriggled around dancing with his short feet and arms while talking. Beside them, the dipping shark Tarou was groaning “Samee…”.
   
 
“…Hayashizaki, what is this…?”
 
“…Hayashizaki, what is this…?”
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Kazuha-senpai looked scared and drew back her body.
 
Kazuha-senpai looked scared and drew back her body.
   
“Uhyo! Frightened expressions are so lovely!!” Ise-Udon-ojisan reacted sharply.
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“Uhyo! Frightened expression is so lovely!!” Ise-Udon-ojisan reacted sharply.
   
 
“The guest this time is a beautiful girl Shrine Maiden-san dao! Just from looking I canna’ hold my patience anymore oo, I have to make you girl taste Udon-ojisan’s soft skin oo! Hug with me oo!!”
 
“The guest this time is a beautiful girl Shrine Maiden-san dao! Just from looking I canna’ hold my patience anymore oo, I have to make you girl taste Udon-ojisan’s soft skin oo! Hug with me oo!!”
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An intoxication one should shudder against, that was what Kazuki was currently feeling.
 
An intoxication one should shudder against, that was what Kazuki was currently feeling.
   
He was sinking deeper and deeper into Ise-Udon-ojisan’s plump and soft skin. It felt like he was completely buried in the highest grade beads cushion…no, this felt even better than that.
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He was sinking deeper and deeper into Ise-Udon-ojisan’s plump and soft skin. It felt like he was completely buried on the highest grade beads cushion…no, this felt even more better than that.
   
 
This felt completely like…the texture of Ise udon.
 
This felt completely like…the texture of Ise udon.
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Even if she said that, because of Ise-Udon-ojisan’s face that was deformed and looked like a cutely disgusting character, there was no disgusting feeling like if he was hugged by a real middle-aged uncle. He didn’t feel bad.
 
Even if she said that, because of Ise-Udon-ojisan’s face that was deformed and looked like a cutely disgusting character, there was no disgusting feeling like if he was hugged by a real middle-aged uncle. He didn’t feel bad.
   
Rather, being enveloped in this gentle sensation made him forget everything unimportant like the real world or whatever, peaceful…he wanted to sleep soundly…. It was a sensation that invited him into depravity.
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Rather, being enveloped in this gentle sensation made him forget everything unimportant like the real word or whatever, peaceful…he wanted to sleep soundly…. It was a sensation that invited him into depravity.
   
“Being accepted like this by a handsome guy feels so wonderful oo! Oji-san doesn’t mind even if it’s with a guy oo! Uu, it’s coming! Oji-san, cannot hold it anymore, the piling up shoyu <ref>Japanese soy sauce</ref> is coming oo!!”
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“Being accepted like this by a handsome guy feels so happy oo! Oji-san doesn’t mind even if it’s with a guy oo! Uu, it’s coming! Oji-san, cannot hold it anymore, the piling up shoyu<ref>Japanese soy sauce</ref> is coming oo!!”
   
 
Udon-ojisan caressed his white skin even stronger on Kazuki and gotten highly strung.
 
Udon-ojisan caressed his white skin even stronger on Kazuki and gotten highly strung.
   
“Get a grip on yourself, Hayashizaki! I don’t want to say something like this but, if you, who is the Harem King, gets awakened with a strange sexual fetish here then it’s over for this country you know!?”
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“Get a grip on yourself, Hayashizaki! I don’t want to say something like this but, if you who is the Harem King gets awakened with a strange sexual fetish here then it’s over for this country you know!?”
   
 
With a ‘hah’ face of realization, Kazuki came back to his senses.
 
With a ‘hah’ face of realization, Kazuki came back to his senses.
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Remember it…I should have experienced a sensation that felt even better than this.
 
Remember it…I should have experienced a sensation that felt even better than this.
   
For example, the time when he was strongly hugged by Kaguya-senpai in her Magic Dress that looked almost the same as being naked.
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For example, the time when he was strongly hugged by Kaguya-senpai in her Magic Dress that looked almost the same like being naked.
   
 
Kazuki pictured the sensation when he was being pressed by Kaguya-senpai’s voluptuous body, then he yelled.
 
Kazuki pictured the sensation when he was being pressed by Kaguya-senpai’s voluptuous body, then he yelled.
   
“UOOOOOOO! Kaguya-senpai felt far better compared to this-!!”
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“UOOOOOOO! Kaguya-senpai felt far more better compared than this-!!”
   
 
Kazuki shook off the invitation to depravity and untangled himself from Ise-Udon-ojisan’s embrace, then he threw the Udon-ojisan to the ground with a judo shoulder throw.
 
Kazuki shook off the invitation to depravity and untangled himself from Ise-Udon-ojisan’s embrace, then he threw the Udon-ojisan to the ground with a judo shoulder throw.
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Udon-ojisan that was crushed on the ground was shivering in trembles, then pitch black liquid was slowly…spreading out like a puddle of blood. Kazuki felt a shudder spreading on his spine.
 
Udon-ojisan that was crushed on the ground was shivering in trembles, then pitch black liquid was slowly…spreading out like a puddle of blood. Kazuki felt a shudder spreading on his spine.
   
“Saying [Kaguya-senpai felt far better], you…what did you imagine just now?”
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“Saying [Kaguya-senpai felt far more better], you…what did you imagine just now?”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai was looking coldly at Kazuki.
 
Kazuha-senpai was looking coldly at Kazuki.
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“To overcome Ise-Udon-ojisan’s temptation like that…if it is a normal couple then they will surely meet the collapse of their relationship here you know. Looks like the guests this time are worthy of expectation right, dipping shark Tarou-san…”
 
“To overcome Ise-Udon-ojisan’s temptation like that…if it is a normal couple then they will surely meet the collapse of their relationship here you know. Looks like the guests this time are worthy of expectation right, dipping shark Tarou-san…”
   
The goth loli girl, Kamimura-san said with a whisper.
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The goth loli girl, Kamimura-san said whisperingly.
   
 
Dipping shark Tarou-san too nodded with “Samee…”.
 
Dipping shark Tarou-san too nodded with “Samee…”.
   
…No wait, in the end, what in the world are these people? The meaning of that kind of self-introduction really couldn’t be processed in their heads at all.
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…No wait, in the end what in the world are these people? The meaning of that kind of self-introduction really couldn’t be digested inside their head at all.
   
 
Now that he thought back, he had the feeling that the girl said something like [the friend that is the most intimate with Amaterasu].
 
Now that he thought back, he had the feeling that the girl said something like [the friend that is the most intimate with Amaterasu].
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“By any chance, are you…the contractor of Amaterasu?”
 
“By any chance, are you…the contractor of Amaterasu?”
   
“That’s right. I am Amaterasu’s august container. The one who stands at the summit of all Shrine Maidens, the <Celebration King>. While unfortunate, I’m dead already though.”
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“That’s right. I am Amaterasu’s august container. The one who stands at the summit of all Shrine Maiden, the <Celebration King>. While unfortunate, I’m dead already though.”
   
 
The girl announced with her face suddenly turned expressionless like the high tension of hers from before was suddenly blown out.
 
The girl announced with her face suddenly turned expressionless like the high tension of hers from before was suddenly blown out.

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