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“GUWAHHAHHA! It turned out just as I planned, how joyous, how joyous!!”
 
“GUWAHHAHHA! It turned out just as I planned, how joyous, how joyous!!”
   
After Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai made their appearances to where they could come out in front of other people again using Kamimura-san’s power, Futsunushi no Kami immediately emerged. Kazuki glared at the human-faced sword that finally showed his face.
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After Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai turned into appearances where they could come out in front of other people with Kamimura-san’s power, Futsunushi no Kami immediately emerged out. Kazuki glared at the human-faced sword that finally showed his face.
   
“Isn’t it mostly just an excuse when you said that it went just as planned. You didn’t tell any lies, but you were awfully stingy with information and it restricted our actions.”
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“Isn’t it mostly just an excuse when you said that it went just as planned. You didn’t tell any lie but you were awfully stingy with information and it restricted our action.”
   
“…But if I told you upfront that you had to do this kind of thing to release Amaterasu from her seal, then you wouldn’t have come to this place together with Kazuha right? Try to imagine it.”
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“…But if I told you upfront that you have to do this kind of thing to release Amaterasu from her seal, then you won’t come to this place together with Kazuha right? Try to imagine it.”
   
 
Kazuki imagined in his mind.
 
Kazuki imagined in his mind.
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Kazuha-senpai surely wouldn’t try to push aside the other girls and nominate herself.
 
Kazuha-senpai surely wouldn’t try to push aside the other girls and nominate herself.
   
In which case…he wouldn’t obtain a chance like this where Kazuha-senpai could become this honest.
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Thereupon…he wouldn’t obtain the chance like this where Kazuha-senpai could become this honest.
   
 
Kazuki turned his sight to Kazuha-senpai who was hanging her head down with a bright red face.
 
Kazuki turned his sight to Kazuha-senpai who was hanging her head down with a bright red face.
   
“I wanted to bring along Kazuki and Kazuha here! I thought that this is a good chance to make that Kazuha, who would always be hard-headed no matter how much time passes become honest! Good for you huh Kazuha, GUWAHHAHHA!!”
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“I wanted to bring along Kazuki and Kazuha to here! I thought that this is a good chance to make that Kazuha who would always be hard-headed no matter how much time passes to become honest! Good for you huh Kazuha, GUWAHHAHHA!!”
   
 
…So that’s his objective!
 
…So that’s his objective!
   
He had always thought of Futsunushi no Kami as suspicious all along, but it never crossed his mind that he would even do such a thing to that degree!
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He had always thought of Futsunushi no Kami as suspicious all along, but it never crossed his mind that he would even do such thing until that degree!
   
“Yo, youuu―! So you thought of such a thing! I’m not particularly…who cares about Kazuki-!”
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“Yo, youuu―! So you thought of such thing! I’m not particularly…who cares about Kazuki-!”
   
 
“Eh, you didn’t think for even a little huh? Eh?”
 
“Eh, you didn’t think for even a little huh? Eh?”
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“…Ugii―!” Like that Kazuha-senpai grinded her teeth.
 
“…Ugii―!” Like that Kazuha-senpai grinded her teeth.
   
“Wait, just now senpai, you called me Kazuki. You won’t call me Kazu-kun anymore? Even though until just now you were that honest and fawned on me like that…”
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“Wait, just now senpai, you called me Kazuki. You won’t call me Kazu-kun anymore? Even though until just now you were that honest and fawned to me like that…”
   
 
When Kazuki showed his dejection, Kazuha-senpai’s face became red again.
 
When Kazuki showed his dejection, Kazuha-senpai’s face became red again.
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“I…I did a terrific thing…just, what kind of face should I make here…”
 
“I…I did a terrific thing…just, what kind of face should I make here…”
   
Remembering the things that the both of them did, Kazuha-senpai hid her face with both her hands and leaned over completely.
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Remembering the thing that both of them did, Kazuha-senpai hid her face with both her hands and leaned over completely.
   
 
{Everything is over without any quarrel happening in your harem, it’s two birds with one stone! GUWAHHAHHA!!}
 
{Everything is over without any quarrel happening in your harem, it’s two birds with one stone! GUWAHHAHHA!!}
   
“So you thought that far ahead…For this favor of preventing the crisis to my King’s harem, I’ll give you my appreciation.”
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“So you thought until that far ahead…For this favor of preventing the crisis to my King’s harem, I’ll give you my appreciation.”
   
Beside Futsunushi no Kami who was laughing heartily, Lemegeton also showed her appearance.
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Beside Futsunushi no Kami that was laughing heartily, Lemegeton too showed her appearance.
   
The jersey wearing Amaterasu compared Lemegeton and Kazuki with her gaze restlessly moving between the two.
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The jersey appearance Amaterasu compared Lemegeton and Kazuki with her gaze restlessly moving between the two.
   
 
Then Amaterasu talked with a slow voice and a face void of any motivation.
 
Then Amaterasu talked with a slow voice and a face void of any motivation.
   
“Anyhow, I will introduce myself once again. I am a chief god of Japanese Mythology, Amaterasu. My special skill is to be a shut-in, my hobby is net surfing. Each time Ise Imperial Shrine is rebuilt I am born again and become a little girl like this. Best regards. Solomon's King, my thanks to you for coming this far nyan.”
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“Anyhow, I will introduce myself once again. I am a chief god of Japanese Mythology, Amaterasu. My special skill is to be a shut-in, my hobby is net surfing. Each time Ise Imperial Shrine is rebuilt I am born again and become a little girl like this. Best regards. Solomon King, my thanks for you to come until this far nyan.”
   
 
Kazuki recalled the story he heard from Futsunushi no Kami and Yatagarasu.
 
Kazuki recalled the story he heard from Futsunushi no Kami and Yatagarasu.
   
After Amaterasu enthroned her contractor Kamimura-san as Wakoku King, she would swear loyalty to Lemegeton. Kamimura-san, who became the Wakoku King would be presented to the King of Solomon, Kazuki, and become a subordinate king.
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After Amaterasu enthroned her contractor Kamimura-san as Wakoku King, she would swear loyalty to Lemegeton. Kamimura-san who became the Wakoku King would be presented to Kazuki who was the King of Solomon and become a subordinate king.
   
Basically, the chief god of the Japanese Mythology, Amaterasu and the Wakoku King would obey Solomon's 72 Pillars.
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Namely the chief god of Japanese Mythology Amaterasu and Wakoku King would obey Solomon 72 Pillar.
   
On top of that, with Kazuki’s victory against Aisu Ikousai who was the Izumo King, Amaterasu would regain her true power and Kazuki would become an Emperor that was accompanied by both sides of Japanese Mythology and Solomon's Mythology in its truest meaning.
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On top of that with Kazuki’s victory against Aisu Ikousai who was the Izumo King, Amaterasu would regain the true power and Kazuki would become an Emperor that was accompanied by both sides of Japanese Mythology and Solomon Mythology in its true meaning.
   
When all the Japanese Divas have to follow Kazuki, they would return to their senses from their Wild God state….
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When all the Japanese Divas have to follow Kazuki, they would return to their senses from the Wild God state….
   
 
“Uh huh, that line of thought is correct nyan.”
 
“Uh huh, that line of thought is correct nyan.”
   
Amaterasu said as if she was reading Kazuki’s thoughts.
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Amaterasu said as if she was reading Kazuki’s thought.
   
“I, after I thought that Itsuki-chan’s personality was not suited for fighting, I hesitated to grant her the throne as King. Doing that means pushing the destiny of fighting with Susanoo’s Izumo King on her after all, so…”
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“I, after I thought that Itsuki-chan’s personality was not suited for fighting, I hesitated to grant her with the throne. Doing that means pushing the destiny of fighting with Susanoo’s Izumo King to her after all, so…”
   
 
“You chose Kamimura-san as your contractor even though she is not suited for fighting?”
 
“You chose Kamimura-san as your contractor even though she is not suited for fighting?”
   
“Because, she is the best partner that I can get along well with, you see―”
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“Because, she is the best partner that I can get along well, with you see―”
   
 
“Amaterasu…” Kamimura-san clung to Amaterasu’s small body.
 
“Amaterasu…” Kamimura-san clung to Amaterasu’s small body.
   
“I chose my contractor based on my hobby, but because that guy Susanoo looked for combat ability in earnest to choose his contractor―. What is interesting from doing such a boorish thing―, I thought, but…Japan’s best swordsman, Aisu Ikousai…Itsuki-chan is no match against that kind of fellow―”
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“I chose my contractor based on my hobby, but because that guy Susanoo looked for combat ability in earnest to choose his contractor―. What is interesting from doing such boorish thing―, I thought, but…Japan’s best swordsman, Aisu Ikousai…Itsuki-chan is no match against that kind of fellow―”
   
“I got killed instantly…” Kamimura-san murmured in a whisper.
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“I got killed instantly…” Kamimura-san murmured in whisper.
   
“More accurately I quickly got magic intoxicated by Aisu Ikousai, after that, the swordsmen of Yamato’s government were hacking me apart all at once zaku zaku―. My state at that time was already like a Japanese katana hedgehog see, my main temple also got completely bloodstained. I was already into an extremely foolish Stick Final Reality Bun Bun Dream <ref>I have no idea what in the hell this sentence means.</ref> you know. Ah, this is slang that were popular a long time ago. Amaterasu-san loves such things.”
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“More accurately I quickly got magic intoxicated by Aisu Ikousai, after that, the swordsmen of Yamato’s government were hacking me apart all at once zaku zaku―. My state at that time was already like a Japanese katana hedgehog see, my main temple also got completely bloodstained. I was already in extremely foolish Stick Final Reality Bun Bun Dream<ref>I have no idea what in the hell this sentence mean.</ref> you know. Ah, this is slangs that were popular a long time ago. Amaterasu-san loves such thing.”
   
He didn’t understand anything she was saying just now.
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He didn’t understand somewhat what was she talking about.
   
“I want you all to protect Itsuki-chan and the Japanese Mythology. Japanese Mythology doesn’t even request faith, we don’t even hold any antagonism toward other Mythologies, our [will for power] had completely decayed. We are similar with how Solomon's Mythology also doesn’t seek piety, but we are also different with them who hold strong antagonism and a rebellious spirit towards other Mythologies. You all are continuing to be a Mythology that can fight.”
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“I want you all to protect Itsuki-chan and Japanese Mythology. Japanese Mythology doesn’t even request for faith, we don’t even hold any antagonism toward other Mythologies, our [will for power] had completely decayed. We are similar with how Solomon Mythology also doesn’t seek for piety, but we are also different with them who hold strong antagonism and rebellious spirit for other Mythologies. You all are continuing to be a Mythology that can fight.”
   
Antagonism and a rebellious spirit―Kazuki recalled Baal as the first and then Belial, Amon, Gremory, there were many guys like them that were originally gods from different Mythologies but were now included in Solomon's 72 Pillars. Other than gods there were also fallen angels and demons that accounted for a large number among the Pillars.
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Antagonism and rebellious spirit―Kazuki recalled about Baal as the first and then Belial, Amon, Gremory, there were many guys like them that were originally gods from different Mythology but now they were included in Solomon 72 Pillar. Other than gods there were also fallen angels and demons that accounted for a large number in the Pillar.
   
A Disgraced Mythology…that might be their motive for fighting.
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Disgraced Mythology…that might be their motive for fighting.
   
 
Kazuki turned his sight to Leme in a glance but―Leme didn’t try to say anything.
 
Kazuki turned his sight to Leme in a glance but―Leme didn’t try to say anything.
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“For the time being, I am the chief god of Japanese Mythology that symbolizes the blessing of life but…with just my power alone I cannot go as far as recreate the body of Itsuki-chan that had died.”
 
“For the time being, I am the chief god of Japanese Mythology that symbolizes the blessing of life but…with just my power alone I cannot go as far as recreate the body of Itsuki-chan that had died.”
   
…Even if she had the vast magic power of a Diva, surely creating a [complex vessel] called the human body from nothing was a difficult thing.
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…Even if she had the vast magic power of a Diva, surely creating a [complex vessel] called human body from zero was a difficult thing.
   
That was why even a Diva like Loki stole a human’s physical body and remade it into his own.
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That was why even a Diva like Loki stole human’s flesh body and remade it into his own body.
   
“By borrowing the strength of Solomon's Mythology, and if it’s added with my power, I think it’s possible to recreate Itsuki-chan’s physical body somehow. It will probably only become an incomplete body that won’t last very long but…if a bond is created between you and Itsuki-chan and a lot of magic power can be drawn from that circuit, in that state I think she can obtain a long life span.”
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“By borrowing the strength of Solomon Mythology and if it’s added with my power, I think it’s possible to recreate Itsuki-chan’s flesh body somehow. Probably it will only become an incomplete flesh body that won’t last really long but…if a bond is created between you and Itsuki-chan and a lot of magic power can be drawn from that circuit, in that state I think she can obtain a long life span.”
   
 
So what she said was that the more the girl’s positivity level increased―the longer she could live.
 
So what she said was that the more the girl’s positivity level increased―the longer she could live.
   
“…King of Solomon. Please, I want to entrust the matter of this girl to you. I don’t want to make Itsuki-chan die with her condition staying like this.”
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“…King of Solomon. Please I want to entrust the matter of this girl to you. I don’t want to make Itsuki-chan die with her condition staying like this.”
   
Kazuki recalled the atmosphere of isolation that Kamimura-san sometimes showed in her conversations with him.
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Kazuki recalled the atmosphere of isolation that Kamimura-san sometimes showed in her conversation with him.
   
At the time when someone is shivering from loneliness, if there is no one that reached their hand to them, then….
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At the time when someone is shivering from loneliness, if there is no one that reached their hand to them then….
   
 
“I understood. About this girl, I will protect her.”
 
“I understood. About this girl, I will protect her.”
   
Of course by doing that then the objective of this infiltration mission would also be achieved.
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Of course by doing that then the objective of this infiltration mission would also get achieved.
   
“I’m glad…Itsuki-chan only got dragged into this because of me, that’s why…”
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“I’m glad…Itsuki-chan only got dragged into this because of my fault that’s why…”
   
Relief right from the heart appeared in Amaterasu’s expression and she smiled broadly.
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A relief right from the heart appeared in Amaterasu’s expression and she smiled broadly.
   
 
“Though for me…it’s not worth worrying about.”
 
“Though for me…it’s not worth worrying about.”
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“…It’s not good you know Itsuki-chan, saying that kind of thing. You got embroiled in this and died after all, so it’s no good unless you get angrier. That you can completely say that this is not worth worrying about emotionlessly like that is a really sad thing.”
 
“…It’s not good you know Itsuki-chan, saying that kind of thing. You got embroiled in this and died after all, so it’s no good unless you get angrier. That you can completely say that this is not worth worrying about emotionlessly like that is a really sad thing.”
   
“Why do you say that, even though Amaterasu is also a shut-in?”
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“Why do you say that kind of thing even though Amaterasu yourself is also a shut-in?”
   
“Because I’m also the god of the Sun, so I also know about the matter of the outside properly. Itsuki-chan…I can say confidently that escaping reality is a chain of reality. Even this <Itsuki☆Channel> too, the more it becomes abundant with reality it will become an even more enjoyable place. Because despite how this place is supposed to go just according to your thoughts, isn’t there nothing here except the ground and the sky spreading out? That’s why…let’s go back together to the outside world? Let out your courage.”
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“Because I’m also the god of sun, so I also know about the matter of outside properly. Itsuki-chan…I can say confidently that escaping reality is a chain of reality. Even this <Itsuki☆Channel> too, the more it becomes more abundant with reality it will become a more and more enjoyable place. Because despite how this place is supposed to go just according to your thought, isn’t there nothing here except the ground and the sky spreading out? That’s why…let’s go back together to the outside world? Let out your courage.”
   
 
“If Amaterasu say so…I got it…”
 
“If Amaterasu say so…I got it…”
   
“Thank you. Because, I think you will surely not regret it. …Kazuki-kun, take care of this child. Even about how you are a kind person, I have seen it through the eyes of Yatagarasu from this Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. Susanoo has joined hands with Loki but…I think there is nobody else that I can entrust with the Japanese Mythology except you.”
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“Thank you. Because I think you will surely not regret it. …Kazuki-kun, take care of this child. Even about how you are a kind person, I have seen it through the eyes of Yatagarasu from this Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave. Susanoo has joined hands with Loki but…I think there is nobody else that I can entrust with Japanese Mythology except you.”
   
 
Next Amaterasu turned to Leme’s direction with a twirl. Because Leme too had began to gradually grow, when the two stood side-by-side Amaterasu was the one that looked considerably younger.
 
Next Amaterasu turned to Leme’s direction with a twirl. Because Leme too had began to gradually grow, when the two stood side-by-side Amaterasu was the one that looked considerably younger.
   
“Well then, I too am pledging my allegiance to the Divas of Solomon dee―su. Together with three meals a day and a nap please!”
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“Well then I too is pledging my allegiance to the Divas of Solomon dee―su. Together with three meals a day and a nap please!”
   
“Uh huh. The three meals that Leme’s contractor makes every day are delicious you know! It’s a joy in life!!”
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“Uh huh. The three meals that Leme’s contractor make every day are delicious you know! It’s a joy in life!!”
   
 
“…Delicious, meal.” Kamimura-san’s eyes brightened for just a little.
 
“…Delicious, meal.” Kamimura-san’s eyes brightened for just a little.
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Kamimura Itsuki―25
 
Kamimura Itsuki―25
   
“With this you too hold the position of Solomon's King and the Wakoku King simultaneously, becoming an Emperor. Though I still cannot bestow you with the [King’s Authority] of the Japanese Mythology. For that you need to defeat Izumo's King and become the true King of the Japanese Mythology, and on top of that, if the positivity level from Itsuki-chan is not high then I cannot give you the present nyan.”
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“With this you too hold the position of Solomon Mythology and Wakoku King simultaneously, becoming an Emperor. Though I still cannot bestow you with the [King’s Authority] of the Japanese Mythology. For that you need to defeat Izumo King and become the true King of Japanese Mythology, and on top of that if the positivity level from Itsuki-chan is not high then I cannot give you the present nyan.”
   
 
Amaterasu turned to Kazuki and said so. It was still attached with requirements but, with this Kazuki became able to obtain not only the power that Leme could grant but also the power that could be granted from Amaterasu.
 
Amaterasu turned to Kazuki and said so. It was still attached with requirements but, with this Kazuki became able to obtain not only the power that Leme could grant but also the power that could be granted from Amaterasu.
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Enormous power and the responsibility to handle it―Kazuki swallowed his saliva with a gulp.
 
Enormous power and the responsibility to handle it―Kazuki swallowed his saliva with a gulp.
   
One more step forward, he had arrived here far faster compared than he had imagined he would.
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One more step forward, he had arrived here far faster compared to what he had imagined.
   
 
“Well then, be happy and lively and let’s get out―! Transform, Work Mode!!”
 
“Well then, be happy and lively and let’s get out―! Transform, Work Mode!!”
   
Amaterasu abruptly yelled and took a pose like a transforming hero. At that moment, powerful radiance like the sun was emitted from her forehead―that appearance of hers made a complete change.
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Amaterasu abruptly yelled and took a pose like a transforming hero. At that moment, powerful radiance like a sun was emitted from her forehead―that appearance of hers took a complete change.
   
Wearing a golden diadem that could be mistaken as the sun, putting on a rainbow colored coat with large sleeves and an ancient skirt that extended largely tied with a kimono's sash. An appearance of an outfit from ancient times that overflowed with majesty.
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Wearing a golden diadem that could be mistaken as the sun, putting on a rainbow colored coat with large sleeves and an ancient skirt that extended largely tied with kimono sash. An appearance in outfit of ancient times that was overflowing with majesty.
   
 
“A, Amaterasu-sama…”
 
“A, Amaterasu-sama…”
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“But I’m the type that wanted to make an intimate first impression after all―”
 
“But I’m the type that wanted to make an intimate first impression after all―”
   
“Amaterasu in a jersey is the most appropriate you know.” Kamimura-san opposed against Kazuki’s words like that.
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“Amaterasu in jersey appearance is the most appropriate you know.” Kamimura-san opposed against Kazuki’s word like that.
   
 
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