Editing Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 1 Chapter 2

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Zonmi impatiently answered.
 
Zonmi impatiently answered.
   
“There are two benefits of a monster forming a contract with a monster tamer. First is the magical supply. Through the contract, the magical power accumulated in the tamer’s body will be sent to the monster.”
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“There are two benefits of a monster forming a contract with a monster tamer. First is the magica supply. Through the contract, the magical power accumulated in the tamer’s body will be sent to the monster.”
   
For monsters magic is like their lifeline. Not only can it boost their power, but if the magical supply is exhausted, maintaining a human appearance is impossible.
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For monsters magic is like their lifeline. Not only could it boost their power, if the magical supply is exhausted, maintaining a human appearance is impossible.
   
 
The other point is summoning. To be exact this benefits the tamer. By using the ring as a medium and chanting, tamers can summon the monster whenever they want. Without summoning the monster, there is no way for the person to protect himself.
 
The other point is summoning. To be exact this benefits the tamer. By using the ring as a medium and chanting, tamers can summon the monster whenever they want. Without summoning the monster, there is no way for the person to protect himself.
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The classmates were directing their bloodshot eyes filled with killing intent at me.
 
The classmates were directing their bloodshot eyes filled with killing intent at me.
   
W-wait a moment, I haven’t done anything, have I?
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W, wait a moment, I haven’t done anything, have I?
   
 
“Zonmi, come with me for a sec.”
 
“Zonmi, come with me for a sec.”
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×××
 
×××
   
“Too slow! You sure got guts to have me wait here for so long! When did Haru-chan become so daring. Who do you think you are?”
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“Too slow! You sure got guts to have me wait here for so long! When has Haru-chan become this daring. Who do you think you are?”
   
When she opened her mouth, a torrent of cute yet furious words came pouring down from Kyouko.
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With the open of the mouth, a torrent of cute yet furious voice came pouring down from Kyouko.
   
 
Though he almost got used to it, but how talented a person does she think she is to say so?
 
Though he almost got used to it, but how talented a person does she think she is to say so?
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“Uh, that hurt.”
 
“Uh, that hurt.”
   
“A-are you an idiot!? Why would I talk about my menstruation period with you!?”
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“A, are you an idiot!? Why would I talk about menstruation period with you!?”
   
 
“Thought you forgot to bring sanitary towel and the likes.”
 
“Thought you forgot to bring sanitary towel and the likes.”
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“If I say I want it will you give it to me! Why do you carry those kind of things around, you pervert!”
 
“If I say I want it will you give it to me! Why do you carry those kind of things around, you pervert!”
   
“Of course I don’t have them. I can’t say for sure I have tampons or not.”
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“Of course I don’t have them. I can’t say for sure I have tampon or not.”
   
 
“That’s even more gross!”
 
“That’s even more gross!”
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“Then, you came to see me just for this? So stupid, I will go back.”
 
“Then, you came to see me just for this? So stupid, I will go back.”
   
“It’s not this of course! G-give me a moment.”
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“It’s not this of course! G, give me a moment.”
   
 
As he was turning back to leave, his sleeve was tugged.
 
As he was turning back to leave, his sleeve was tugged.
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My childhood friend who was tugging at my sleeve along with looking up at me, I couldn’t help but skip a beat at this.
 
My childhood friend who was tugging at my sleeve along with looking up at me, I couldn’t help but skip a beat at this.
   
“W-w-w-w-what do you want?”
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“W,w,w,w, what do you want?”
   
 
“Please! It’s of the utmost secrecy so I don’t want other people overhearing it.”
 
“Please! It’s of the utmost secrecy so I don’t want other people overhearing it.”
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"Mmm, is that a problem?"
 
"Mmm, is that a problem?"
   
"It's a very big problem! Rookie tamers like you can only make a contract with a single monster at a time. And as I said before, the contract with a monster tamer is essential to the monster's social status, you could completely ruin the reputation of the clan you don't choose!"
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"And very big! Rookie tamers like you can only make a contract with a single monster at a time. And as I said before, the contract with a monster tamer is essential to the monster's social status, you could completely ruin the reputation of the clan you don't choose!"
   
 
"... Ng!"
 
"... Ng!"

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