Editing Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 6

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How careless.
 
How careless.
   
I almost… compelled Zonmi into forsaking her family and fleeing. Moreover… Thinking better now, Putting my own safety first may be an extremely irresponsible choice.
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I almost… compelled Zonmi into forsaking her family and fleeing. Moreover… Thinking it better, Putting my own safety first may be an extremely irresponsible choice.
   
 
So, what do I do?
 
So, what do I do?
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“… Chiharu. Is it fine?”
 
“… Chiharu. Is it fine?”
   
“Yup. If I had to put it in words, speaking truthfully, I too… am against leaving this place. We haven’t persuaded Zonmi’s father yet… We’ve not wrapped up such an important task and I too am worried about Aruru and Meruru.”
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“Yup. If I had to put it in word’s, speaking truthfully, I too… am against leaving this place. We’ve haven’t persuaded yet Zonmi’s father… We’ve not wrapped up such an important task and I too am worried about Aruru and Meruru.”
   
 
“Buu. Oniichan is too soft with the zombies.”
 
“Buu. Oniichan is too soft with the zombies.”
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… At a time like this, it’s reassuring to have monsters that can fly.
 
… At a time like this, it’s reassuring to have monsters that can fly.
   
We rode onto the transformed Iris & Kyouko’s backs and set off to Zonmi’s parent’s home.
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We rode onto the transformed Iris & Kyouko’s backs and set to Zonmi’s parent’s home.
   
   
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When we reached the ghoul clan’s castle, which was Zonmi’s parent’s home, Zonmi’s father… Satosu-san, standing upon the fort, while shouting directions to many brawny soldiers, battled the zombified ghouls.
 
When we reached the ghoul clan’s castle, which was Zonmi’s parent’s home, Zonmi’s father… Satosu-san, standing upon the fort, while shouting directions to many brawny soldiers, battled the zombified ghouls.
   
“Father, you're safe!”
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“Father, you are safe!”
   
“… Zonmi? More than anything, you're safe too.”
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“… Zonmi? Most than anything, you are safe too.”
   
 
Satosu-san, sighing from relief with a face of deep reassurance,
 
Satosu-san, sighing from relief with a face of deep reassurance,
   
“… You were Chiharu-kun, aren't you? It’s not like I approve of your contract, but… I’m grateful for bringing back my daughter.”
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“… You were Chiharu-kun, weren’t you? It’s not like I approve of your contract, but… I’m grateful for bringing back my daughter.”
   
 
“Thank you very much… That aside, how’s the situation like at the city!?”
 
“Thank you very much… That aside, how’s the situation like at the city!?”
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Satosu-san deeply sighed,
 
Satosu-san deeply sighed,
   
“In any case, it’s become troubling. We have to seize that necromancer as soon as possible… The situation has once again turned to the worse.”
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“In any case, it’s become troubling. We have to seizethat necromancer as soon as possible… The situation has once again turned to the worse.”
   
 
“By the way, is there any way to return the zombified people to how they were?”
 
“By the way, is there any way to return the zombified people to how they were?”

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