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She'd just intended to have one bite, but that turned into two, three… She felt she wouldn't be able to stop herself if she went any further, so she tore off a fourth bite and shut the box.
 
She'd just intended to have one bite, but that turned into two, three… She felt she wouldn't be able to stop herself if she went any further, so she tore off a fourth bite and shut the box.
   
"The cake being this good makes everything even more vexing."
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"It being so good makes everything even more vexing."
   
 
Yoshino muttered, as she flicked the box.
 
Yoshino muttered, as she flicked the box.
   
The eldest and youngest of the Yellow Rose sisters have a rather complex relationship as they settle on different sides of the middle.
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The eldest and youngest of three sisters have a rather complex relationship as they settle on different sides of the middle.
   
 
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