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Sweeping their gazes around the room, the two murmured admiringly.
 
Sweeping their gazes around the room, the two murmured admiringly.
   
“Come to think about it, is it really okay for us to borrow such a large workroom? It looks replete<ref>[magref notes: replete-filled]</ref> with all sorts of equipment……the price couldn’t have been small, right?”
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“Come to think about it, is it really okay for us to borrow such a large workroom? It looks replete<ref>[magref notes: replete-filled]</ref> with all sorts of equipment……the price couldn’t have come cheap right?”
   
“Yahoho! Actually, this place was loaned to us with Sala-sama’s introduction! This is also the studio<ref>[magref notes: studio-workroom/warehouse, using it interchangeably]</ref> of Sala-sama while she was still a member of [Salamandra]!”
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“Yahoho! Actually, this place was loaned to us with Sala-sama’s introduction! This is also the studio<ref>[magref notes: studio-workroom/warehouse, using it interchangeably]</ref> of Sala-sama while she was still a member of [Salamandra] then!”
   
 
The original studio of Sala——hearing Jack’s words, Asuka took another look around the warehouse.
 
The original studio of Sala——hearing Jack’s words, Asuka took another look around the warehouse.
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“Game…Game Stage?”
 
“Game…Game Stage?”
   
“That’s right! Though I’ve seen Asuka-san’s battle all this while……what you need the most is to be more comfortable with using the Gifts! And that means to accumulate as much battle experience as possible! Then the battle tactics of Garol would also be put to practical use right?! Yahohoho!” Jack’s pumpkin head revolved in the air as he laughed.
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“That’s right! Though I’ve seen Asuka-san’s battle all these while……what you need the most is to be more comfortable with using the Gifts! And that means to accumulate as much battle experience as possible! Then the battle tactics of Garol would also be put to practical use right?! Yahohoho!” Jack’s pumpkin head revolved in the air as he laughed.
   
 
Feeling a sense of dread, Asuka and Kuro Usagi exchanged a surprised glance at each other.
 
Feeling a sense of dread, Asuka and Kuro Usagi exchanged a surprised glance at each other.
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Looking around at the countless precious masterpieces showcased around her, Yō started to feel a sense of doubt taking seed in her heart as she tilted her head.
 
Looking around at the countless precious masterpieces showcased around her, Yō started to feel a sense of doubt taking seed in her heart as she tilted her head.
   
(……Is it really possible for me to take part in this Game?)
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(''……Is it really possible for me to take part in this Game?'')
   
Just as mentioned earlier, the North Side is where Gifts of refining metals, manufacturing by crystallizations, alchemical arts and the like circulated widely. And perhaps it was due to the climate of this region, the population of Humans were dense in these areas. The fact that the race of Humans didn’t possess much power was one that everyone knew well. As long as the birth is an ordinary one, it wouldn’t be too much to say that Humans ranked at the lowest rungs of the power ladder. But in the North Side, the talent of creating Gifts through the techniques of Human or Spirit alike were highly prized treasures there.
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Just as mentioned earlier, the North Side is where Gifts of refining metals, manufacturing by crystallizations, alchemical arts and the like circulated widely. And perhaps it was due to the climate of this region, the population of Humans were dense in these areas. The fact that the race of Humans didn’t possess much power was one that everyone knew well. As long as the birth is an ordinary one, it wouldn’t be too much to say that Humans ranked at the lowest rungs of the power ladder. But in the North Side, the talent of creating Gifts though the techniques of Human or Spirit alike were highly prized treasures there.
   
 
Hence the creativity of Humankind in developing techniques and skills received high praise and the North soon became a place that made it easier for Humankind to call it their home. Amongst them were Communities that have left their mark on the [Tablet of the Sea of Stars], having had their strength recognized and receiving high praise from [Salamandra].
 
Hence the creativity of Humankind in developing techniques and skills received high praise and the North soon became a place that made it easier for Humankind to call it their home. Amongst them were Communities that have left their mark on the [Tablet of the Sea of Stars], having had their strength recognized and receiving high praise from [Salamandra].
   
And those who were now gathered in the arena were all fierce competitors who would wish to leave mark of their accomplishments behind for generations to come. In a large collection of strong competitors, would it really be a good idea for herself to be mixed in amongst them……Yō started to ponder such stuff as she stared blankly in front of her.
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And those who were now gathered in the arena were all fierce competitors who would wish to leave their mark of their accomplishments behind for generations to come. In a large collection of strong competitors, would it really be a good idea for herself to be mixed in amongst them……Yō started to ponder such stuff as she stared blankly in front of her.
   
(Just visiting this Corridor of Displays has already been quite a pleasant experience for me. Even for the Community, I shouldn’t allow any smear to get on our reputation……right?)
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(''Just visiting this Corridor of Displays has already been quite a pleasant experience for me. Even for the Community, I shouldn’t allow any smear to get on our reputation……right?'')
   
 
Yō tilted her head as she started to give it some thought. Having been brought up in an environment that lacked much interactions with others, Yō didn’t know much about these sort of things. Just shortly before, Yō might still be able to ask Calico Cat’s opinion about it, but he’s no longer by her side. Having been injured in the battle against the huge Dragon, he had decided to retire and spend the rest of his life in [Underwood]’s Great Tree.
 
Yō tilted her head as she started to give it some thought. Having been brought up in an environment that lacked much interactions with others, Yō didn’t know much about these sort of things. Just shortly before, Yō might still be able to ask Calico Cat’s opinion about it, but he’s no longer by her side. Having been injured in the battle against the huge Dragon, he had decided to retire and spend the rest of his life in [Underwood]’s Great Tree.
   
(……)
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(''……'')
   
 
Yō continued to stare at the displays with a distant look in her eyes.
 
Yō continued to stare at the displays with a distant look in her eyes.
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“Ojou, you aren’t alone anymore, you need to learn how to live amongst humans in society from today onwards.”
 
“Ojou, you aren’t alone anymore, you need to learn how to live amongst humans in society from today onwards.”
   
Having been told of such a thing by Calico who was heavily covered in bandages, Yō couldn’t bring herself to deny it. After all, it was a separation that would have to come sooner or later. Though she might feel lonely, but the rejection of such a request would have been equivalent to betraying the other.
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Having been told of such a thing by Calico who was heavily covered in bandages, Yō couldn’t bring herself to deny it. After all it was a separation that would have to come sooner or later. Though she might feel lonely, but the rejection of such a request would have been equivalent to betraying the other.
   
 
So Yō hid her sadness as she handed Calico cat over to Garol of [Six Scars] while entrusting the future care and treatment of the wounds to them. The people of [Six Scars] who were also future allies in their Alliance had also readily agreed to her request to care for Calico Cat while treating him like one of their own.
 
So Yō hid her sadness as she handed Calico cat over to Garol of [Six Scars] while entrusting the future care and treatment of the wounds to them. The people of [Six Scars] who were also future allies in their Alliance had also readily agreed to her request to care for Calico Cat while treating him like one of their own.
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For if she couldn’t do that, she wouldn’t be able to face Calico Cat squarely with pride.
 
For if she couldn’t do that, she wouldn’t be able to face Calico Cat squarely with pride.
   
(Nn. Garol-san had already given me encouragement by making known his support for me. I must do my best as well.)
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(''Nn. Garol-san had already given me encouragement by making known his support for me. I must do my best as well.'')
   
 
Yō clenched her fists tightly.
 
Yō clenched her fists tightly.
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“Currently, I can’t say anything about it. But if you really want to know Koumei, you will need to chase after his footsteps. Only then will you understand what kind of man he is.”
 
“Currently, I can’t say anything about it. But if you really want to know Koumei, you will need to chase after his footsteps. Only then will you understand what kind of man he is.”
   
The next two months following that day, Yō had tried her best to search for a trace of her father’s whereabouts but had come up with nothing.
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The next two months following that day, Yō had tried her best to search for a trace on her father’s whereabouts but had come up with nothing.
   
 
Leticia had also been adamant with a reply of ‘Its fine to just wait for now’. And so she had come to visit the Corridor of Displays to look at the [Tablet of Sea of Stars].
 
Leticia had also been adamant with a reply of ‘Its fine to just wait for now’. And so she had come to visit the Corridor of Displays to look at the [Tablet of Sea of Stars].
   
(It’s said that there are only a handful of Corridors of Displays in Little Garden and I had thought that it might be a place to start searching for my father’s crafted pieces……But it sure seems like it’s not that easy after all.) <!-- changed 'Corridors for displays' to 'Corridors of Displays'. I assume from the context that there are other such museums(?) with the same name. (Draconic)-->
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(''It’s said that there are only a handful of Corridors for displays in Little Garden and I had thought that it might be a place to start searching for my father’s crafted pieces……But it sure seems like it’s not that easy after all.'')
   
 
Troubled by the lack of results, Yō crossed her arms. There was still another method for her to get a lead. And that was to participate in the Game while registering the [Genome Tree] as the specific Gift to be used while observing the reaction of the crowd then.
 
Troubled by the lack of results, Yō crossed her arms. There was still another method for her to get a lead. And that was to participate in the Game while registering the [Genome Tree] as the specific Gift to be used while observing the reaction of the crowd then.
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Ouch. That hurts. But Yō still couldn’t think up of a solution. She, who couldn’t arrive at a plan could only reach up to take the sharp yet blunt weapon that had been dropped on her head.
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Ouch. That hurts. But Yō still couldn’t think up of a solution. She who couldn’t arrive at a plan could only reach up to take the sharp yet blunt weapon that had been dropped on her head.
   
(……what is this?)
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(''……what is this?'')
   
 
That was a blunt weapon that took the appearance of a cross while its topmost was a rounded piece. From the shape of it, it would be more similar to a ‘hammer’ than a cross.
 
That was a blunt weapon that took the appearance of a cross while its topmost was a rounded piece. From the shape of it, it would be more similar to a ‘hammer’ than a cross.
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……No, isn’t it literally a hammer?
 
……No, isn’t it literally a hammer?
   
(This is really dangerous. If it weren’t me, a person might have been gravely injured.)
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(''This is really dangerous. If it weren’t me, a person might have been grievously injured.'')
   
 
Yō looked around her but it’s a really impossible task to find the culprit amongst the crowd that milled around the Corridor of displays. Tilting her head quizzically, Yō thought to herself that perhaps in the craftsman city of [Kouen City], hammers dropping from nowhere might just be a common thing. Just then—
 
Yō looked around her but it’s a really impossible task to find the culprit amongst the crowd that milled around the Corridor of displays. Tilting her head quizzically, Yō thought to herself that perhaps in the craftsman city of [Kouen City], hammers dropping from nowhere might just be a common thing. Just then—
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Yō gripped the hammer in her hand tightly. Once might have passed for a coincidence but twice would make it clearly intentional. Moreover for the person to escape Yō’s five senses that were as sharp as a wild beast, that would make the throw truly unusual.
 
Yō gripped the hammer in her hand tightly. Once might have passed for a coincidence but twice would make it clearly intentional. Moreover for the person to escape Yō’s five senses that were as sharp as a wild beast, that would make the throw truly unusual.
   
(……)
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(''……'')
   
 
She quietly took on a battle stance. Since there’s a second, a third wouldn’t be that surprising.
 
She quietly took on a battle stance. Since there’s a second, a third wouldn’t be that surprising.
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But with such an overly tempting and attractive appearance, it had instead triggered the caution in Yō’s heart.
 
But with such an overly tempting and attractive appearance, it had instead triggered the caution in Yō’s heart.
   
(This child……isn’t human?)
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(''This child……isn’t human?'')
   
 
Doll-like—A demon in the form of a girl. That was the line that flashed through Yō’s mind.
 
Doll-like—A demon in the form of a girl. That was the line that flashed through Yō’s mind.
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“!”
 
“!”
   
Only gave a chop with her hand with a strength that wasn’t too great<!--A translator please check this. I assume it says 'wasn't too great', but maybe the original was correct and it's 'wasn't too little'. This fits more in the flow of the text imo. (Draconic)-->. … just enough to smash a boulder.
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Only gave a chop with her hand with a strength that wasn’t too little … just enough to smash a boulder.
   
“Let’s call it quits with that.”
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“Let’s call it quits like that.”
   
 
“……Nn.”
 
“……Nn.”
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Though Yō’s a laconic person, this girl seemed to be even more reserved with her words. It’s truly Yō’s first time to have met such a strong opponent for she had never met a girl who’s more laconic<ref>[magref notes: I’m sure I used the word laconic before. But if you are wondering about it, it means a person with very few words/to the point.]</ref> than herself.
 
Though Yō’s a laconic person, this girl seemed to be even more reserved with her words. It’s truly Yō’s first time to have met such a strong opponent for she had never met a girl who’s more laconic<ref>[magref notes: I’m sure I used the word laconic before. But if you are wondering about it, it means a person with very few words/to the point.]</ref> than herself.
   
Yō, who hasn’t decided whether to turn up for the event, nodded her head while replying:
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Yō, who haven’t decided whether to turn up for the event, nodded her head while replying:
   
 
“……Nn. I will be joining.”
 
“……Nn. I will be joining.”
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The girl who had suddenly appeared had also simply vanished before Yō without a trace.
 
The girl who had suddenly appeared had also simply vanished before Yō without a trace.
   
(How did she do that……No compared to that……)
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(''How did she do that……No compared to that……'')
   
Koumei—That was the name which people who are close to her father, Kasukabe Koumei, used to call him. Then, the girl might have been referring to her father by saying the name ‘Koumei’.
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Koumei—That was the name which people who are close to her father Kasukabe Koumei used to call him. Then, the girl might have been referring to her father by saying the name ‘Koumei’.
   
(Could it be……that I’ve actually found a lead on my father’s whereabouts?)
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(''Could it be……that I’ve actually found a lead on my father’s whereabouts?'')
   
 
Yō gazed towards the arena from the Corridor of Displays as her eyes were no longer clouded with the troubled look of earlier.
 
Yō gazed towards the arena from the Corridor of Displays as her eyes were no longer clouded with the troubled look of earlier.

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