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There were wheels like those of a car growing out from the soles of his feet. The wheels rolled rapidly, thrusting him forward with an astonishing speed.
 
There were wheels like those of a car growing out from the soles of his feet. The wheels rolled rapidly, thrusting him forward with an astonishing speed.
   
The girl without arms said out loud on top of Zekiguchi Nashinori's shoulders, who galloped along the earth without moving.
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The girl without arms said out loud on top of Zekiguchi Noshinari's shoulders, who galloped along the earth without moving.
   
 
Zekiguchi muttered in surprise after hearing her words.
 
Zekiguchi muttered in surprise after hearing her words.
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Long-Armed Demon turned her face away at the question: “Zeki-kun said – he said he will be troubled if Guriko-san dies… Long-Armed Demon doesn’t like you anyways. Long-Armed Demon would be happier if you die.”
 
Long-Armed Demon turned her face away at the question: “Zeki-kun said – he said he will be troubled if Guriko-san dies… Long-Armed Demon doesn’t like you anyways. Long-Armed Demon would be happier if you die.”
   
“Zekiguchi… Nashinori?”
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“Zekiguchi… Noshinari?”
   
 
Guriko pronounced this name as if she was thinking about something, but her face instantly returned to its former seriousness and she began to walk along the corridor.
 
Guriko pronounced this name as if she was thinking about something, but her face instantly returned to its former seriousness and she began to walk along the corridor.
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– Two girls without arms showed themselves after having kicked down the door to the wing with the prison cells.
 
– Two girls without arms showed themselves after having kicked down the door to the wing with the prison cells.
   
Gankyū Eguriko – the immortal girl who lived a thousand years and specialized in gorging out eye balls – and Long-Armed Demon, someone with supernatural abilities who chose to became Zekiguchi Nashinori’s servant in order to survive.
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Gankyū Eguriko – the immortal girl who lived a thousand years and specialized in gorging out eye balls – and Long-Armed Demon, someone with supernatural abilities who chose to became Zekiguchi Noshinori’s servant in order to survive.
   
 
At the same time –
 
At the same time –

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